I bolted to the coach and jumped in. Where was Charlotte? It was hard to move around without being cut by broken shards of glass and smashed metal. I soon found our seats and there she was. I was so confused. She was just sitting there, staring into oblivion. I started to click my fingers infront of her face.

  "Snap out of it Charlotte!" I screamed at the top of her lungs. She still wouldn't move. Her breathing was slow and normal. She was really srtarting to piss me off. I smacked her face so hard, it made my hand sting and go red. That got her attention. She turned her head and stared at me. Her stare scarsd me. She looked at me as if she had never seen me before in her entire life.

   "Charlotte. Come on. We have to go" I said, trying not to let my fear show. She just stared and something in her eyes made me think. Her eyes were not brown anymore. They were red. Her pupils were so small, you could barely see them. I was horrified. What on earth happened? Her hands were now clenched into fists and her mouth was smiling a wicked smile. Cautiously, I backed away, but as I did, she shot up and started crawling ontop of me. I let out the loudest scream I could and shut my eyes as tight as I could. I  ould feel her breathe on my face, her hands on places they shouldn't. I felt a slight fealing that this was the end when I heard the hissing getting louder. I felt her hands- well, more like its hands- going up my top and holding onto my...
( author's note: ya'll are nasty if you think it's holding her in places it shouldn't)

It hands held onto my throat and it squeezed it hard. I couldn't breathe and my head was starting to feel light. All of a sudden, there was a loud, high-pitched squeel as I opened my eyes and saw that it had been thrown to the end of the coach. I looked up and saw Caleb. How embarassing, but I didn't care. He held my hand and we ran as fast as we could out of the coach and as far as possible. I looked back and saw the creature that used to be Charlotte jump out and chase us. Then everything went black. And there was a mighty bang...