I will be starting a rewrite of what I have so far for this story.

To be completely honest, I probably shouldn't have started writing a novel with no prior experience writing anything besides essays, but this story needed to come out. Now that I have written other stories and figured out my writing style and what to do and what not to do, I feel that I can make this story a whole lot better. I'm not deleting this, it just won't update.

It will probably take me a few weeks at the least to get the new story up, but until then, any comments regarding what can be changed and what should stay would be appreciated.

Thank you to those who liked this story and encouraged me to continue. It meant a lot to me.