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๐›๐ฒ rabisworld02
๐“๐จ๐ญ๐š๐ฅ(63/75)
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Title (4/5)
Yes, the title matches the story line. It seems perfect for the story. The title is not only suitable for the story but it is also unique and attractive.

Cover (8/10)
The cover was amazing, it will definitely catch the readers' attention. The cover was made beautifully and it was relevant as well.

Summary (4/5)
The summary was neither very short nor very long. It was detailed but it did not reveal the whole story. It was written in a very elegant way, it did attract me.

Flow (9/10)
The flow of the story is good, the events that take place are perfect as well. The story is neither very fast nor very slow.

Plot (18/20)
THe plot wasn't common, in fact it was different from other stories with the same plot. It might be having a plot hole. In the 6th chapter, Yoongi says that he knows that a calligraphist had copied Taehyung's handwriting but in the next chapter, Yoongi also believes that Taehyung is guilty of the crime. The book has plot twists and cliff hangers. The story was interesting and enjoyable. The plot wasn't cliche.

Writing Style (9/10)
The writing style is understandable. It is narrative as well as easy to understand. There were a few typos. The writing style is interesting which will make a reader want to continue reading.

Character Development (7/10)
The characters developed. The characters are unique and interesting. All the characters are well described. But the development was so sudden.

Reader Enjoyment (4/5)
I enjoyed reading the book! My favourite part of the story is when Yoongi turns soft for Taehyung. The readers will enjoy the book and hook till the end.

๐๐จ๐จ๐ค-๐ƒ๐ž๐ฏ๐ข๐จ๐ฎ๐ฌ ๐๐ž๐ข๐ ๐ก๐›๐จ๐ฎ๐ซ
๐›๐ฒ-Anushkieeee
๐“๐จ๐ญ๐š๐ฅ(61/75)
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Title (4/5)

The title matches the story line. It was both attractive and unique.
Cover (9/10)
The cover was relevant and good. It will catch the reader's attention.
Summary (4/5)
It was neither short nor too long. It told what the readers were going to get in the book while not revealing much. Yes, it was attractive.
Flow (9/10)
The flow of the events/sequences is good. It was balanced and way too fast or way too slow.
Plot (16/20)
No, it wasn't common. It was similar but it was unique too. It did not have any plot holes, however it did have plot twists. i\It was not cliche. I loved reading the book!
Writing Style (7/10)
Yes, it is easy to understand. It is narrative and explains the characters and emotions well. It did not have typos. It wants you to continue reading.
Character Development (8/10)
The characters developed. They were unique. The characters were very well described.
Reader Enjoyment (4/5)
I enjoyed reading the book a lot! It was captivating and interesting. I did not see the plot twist at the end coming! My favourite part was when Jungkook and Y/n were telling us the secrets as to what actually happened. The readers will definitely want to complete reading the book.There were a few grammatical errors, try not to make those

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๐›๐ฒ btsachu
๐“๐จ๐ญ๐š๐ฅ(63/75)
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Title (4/5)

The title is unique and attractive. It also matches the story line.
Cover (9/10)
The cover was very good. It is relevant and catches the reader's attention.
Summary (4/5)
No, it was not very short. It was attractive but not revealing.
Flow (8/10)
The flow of the story is good. The flow/sequences of the story is good as well. The story is neither extremely fast paced or extremely slow paced, it's balanced.
Plot (18/20)
No, it is not very common. Yes, it is different from other stories in this category. No, it does not have any plot holes. Yes, it has plot twists and cliffhangers. I enjoyed reading this book, it was very interesting. No, it wasn't cliche.
Writing Style (8/10)
The writing style is narrative and easy to understand. It does not have any typos. I want you to continue the book.
Character Development (8/10)
The characters developed. The characters were unique and interesting. They were well described as well.
Reader Enjoyment (4/5)
I enjoyed reading it. My favourite part of the story was when Yoongi had agreed to go for a walk because if he hadn't Jimin would have whined the whole day. The readers will definitely hook till the end.
There were a few grammatical errors though, try to improve them.

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๐๐ฒ-Mochi1316
๐“๐จ๐ญ๐š๐ฅ(61/75)
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Title (3/5)
The title doesn't really match. When I saw it I thought it was gonna be angsty but oh well.
Cover (8/10)
The cover is good but needs a little more touching.
Summary (4/5)
It was short. Not gonna lie, I kinda expected two or three chapters but it turned out short. Not complaining though.
Flow (8/10)
I think it was a little too fast. That kinda confused me while reading.
Plot (18/20)
I think the plot was cute but the age gap triggered me. Not complaining.
Writing style (7/10)
I would suggest a little easier fonts to use. It was hard to read the description. Also try to be a little more descriptive. It was good but really confused me a lot.
Character development (9/10)
It was a short story so I don't really know. I don't think there was any need for character development. They both were affectionate to each other.
Reader enjoyment (4/5)
I really liked it but I think it needs a little more improvement. Like try not to rush it. Be more detailed. Overall, I enjoyed it.

๐๐จ๐จ๐ค-๐’๐ก๐จ๐ซ๐ญ ๐ฌ๐ญ๐จ๐ซ๐ข๐ž๐ฌ~๐๐“๐’๐ฑ๐‘๐ž๐š๐๐ž๐ซ+๐’๐ก๐ข๐ฉ๐ฌ
By Lil_kiyomi
๐“๐จ๐ญ๐š๐ฅ(36/75)
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Title: 2/5
The title's kinda long and vague. Maybe, shorten it down and make it more attractive.
Cover: 5/10
It's a good cover but doesn't really catch my eye. Also, the font and picture don't match. Maybe make it something more pretty~
Summary: 1/5
The summary is just too bland. As a reader, it didn't attract me. I would suggest making the summary more interesting
Flow: 6/10
The stories were moving too fast. A lot of things were happening so quickly that it was confusing.
Plot: 10/20
The plots of each one shot are overused cliches. They're way too common and it was hard to keep reading. Some of the things happening in the story just didn't make sense. With that, the grammatical mistakes made it harder for me to read. I would recommend going through an editing session and using much more figurative languages.
Writing Style: 5/10
As I said, the book was hard to read. There was little to no description and it didn't really feel like I was reading a story book. The writing style needs a lot of improvement. More figures of speech and unique words need to be used to make the story more interesting.
Character Development: 6/10
It is true that one shot barely have the length to or scope for prominent character development. The initial ones, the development wasn't present at all. I did see some character development in the later one shots, so that's some improvement. Keep up with the improvement.
Reader enjoyment: 2/5
The oneshots are interesting at the beginning but it doesn't just have the consistency. A lot of improvement is necessary for the book to do better and gain some more recognition.
Just keep in mind the advice I gave and keep on working to improve! Best of Luck~

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๐๐ฒ- little_squishy_bun
๐“๐จ๐ญ๐š๐ฅ(55/75)
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Cover: 7/10
The cover is nice but the elements and scheme don't match. Changing the colour of the background may help.
Title: โ…˜
The title is suitable for the story. It is unique and gives an imagery of the story.
Summary:โ…˜
The description given is appropriate for the events in the story and the length seems to be fine as well.
Flow: 9/10
The story has been going at a very good constant speed. It has the readers hooked with its words, and the change of events can be made out with time.
Plot:15/20
Plot is good. Story has to be extracted with rising action, climax and falling action. But it lacked the climax and falling action. It is not a story, it is an event description.
Writing style: 8/10
The writing style is beautiful. One can understand the events going on in the story because it is very well descriptive. The imagery and other figures of speech were used to make it more beautiful. The choice of words to signify the action were very good too.
Character development: 5/10
There is no character development shown. The mental and physical behaviour of the person doesn't change throughout the story. Being this as an event the character didn't possess much over all emotions for him to develop and show.
Readers Enjoyment: 2/5
It is a nice event description with feelings expressed by the characters changing at some points. The end of the story put the readers in thought about the subject of the story. Hence, it is worth reading

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๐›๐ฒ kimsuga86
๐“๐จ๐ญ๐š๐ฅ-(64/75)
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Title: โ…˜
The title is unique and suits the story well, it is eye catchy and customised for the story.
Cover: 8/10
The cover looks beautiful and totally makes the essence of the story. It would look better if the font is thicker.
Summary: โ…—
It is good enough to read and understand the concept of the story. The length seems fine.
Plot: 18/20
The plot is very well presented and written. It is unique in its own way and has a conclusion that puts the readers into thinking. The agenda is strong and nicely put up.
Writing style: 8/10
The basic imagery and description is very good. But the story doesn't mention the points of determining a few facts about the protagonist. Those facts which became clearer later and are important for a story like this.
Character development: 8/10
The characters in the story have progressed differently making the readers attached. The protagonist's development has inclined to a negative side but still it is beautiful and emotional as ever.
Flow: 9/10
The flow of the story is constant and good. The imagery is quite clear and the events explained about the past are present and written well.
Readers Enjoyment: 5/5
The story is absolutely beautiful! One must read it. It is one of the rare stories which doesn't have a happy ending.

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๐›๐ฒ-Chxrrii_blvsh
๐“๐จ๐ญ๐š๐ฅ-(51/75)
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Title: โ…—
The title is a bit commanding, and there are other incidents in the story through which a title can be derived.
Cover: 9/10
The cover is beautiful! The essence of the cover makes the story all the more interesting to read. This catches the eye.
Summary: โ…˜
The summary written is perfect, and accordingly written.
Flow: 8/10
The flow is fine but has drops in between. The change of font used is appreciated to denote the different scene and different thinking processes. But due to the changes in the past and present continuously. The flow is a bit disturbed.
Plot: 7/10
The plot is fine, and well written. Yet a little in common. The events mentioned in the story are not but the idea to present those are.
Writing style: 9/10
The writing style is descriptive. The author has a good vocabulary and uses it well. The grammar is strong and the event description is amazing!
Character development: 8/10
The characters are a bit predictable but the story doesn't end as clichรฉ. It has more meaning to it. The development in the roles are visible in a position direction.
Readers Enjoyment: โ…—
The book is nice to read, and good for a moral conclusion and emotional reading.

Book: A heir to Throne
By: Evolution-500

Title: 4/5
Cover: 6/10
Summary: 3/5
Flow: 8/10
Plot: 16/20
Style: 9/10
Character development: 8/10
Enjoyment: 3/5
Total: 57/100

The title was perfect. Caught my attention and was well chosen by the author. It suited the plot and theme. Blurb was not catchy enough. You should have used any scene or dialogue to make it interesting. Talking about cover, then I would like to say that you should work on creativity. The face claim is poorly cut as the red eyes, which I believe is of the male used in the story, is not visible enough. The adjustment and placement really needs care. The title is barely visible. However, the plot was unique and interesting.

It was still unknown and might not appear pleasing to the ones who don't know resident evil. But it was to me at least. Even if you don't know that au, you still can enjoy this work. The writing style was chef's kiss.
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