50 -50 partnership
Hai ..
Hello ..
Happy reading ..
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Karan and Monami were coming back to home from the chief minister's office, after talking to him with an important work..
( Woh kya hai baad mein pata chal jayega )
Karan was driving the car and monu sat in passenger seat..
Mo : karan i am so happy , finally humme permission milgaya hai ..
Karan : haan , ab tum aaram se sab kuch kar sakthi hai ..
Mo : haan agar tum chahte toh meri madad kar sakte ho ..
Karan : agar madad chahiye toh plz bolna padega ..
Aur chalu hogayi in dono ki kabhi nahi katham hone wali jagda ..
Mo : mein kyu plz bolu ?? Tumne hi toh kaha hai , ab hum har cheese mein 50 50 partners hai , toh tumhe yeh kaam mein madad karna hi padega ..
Karan : ohh accha toh mujhe remuneration nahi royalty chahiye fhir , that too aache intrest ke saath ..
Mo : accha , ab tumhare ander ki business man jaag gaya ?? Toh bolo kithna percentage ki royalties chahiye janaab ko , kyuki ithne dinon mein ithna toh jaan chuki hunn ki kaise royalty ki percentage fix kar sakte hai ..
Karan : ( acting like thinking ) mujhe royalty mein tumhara Sara pyaar aur attention chahiye aur
Mo : ( while blushing ) aur ..
Karan : aur , ek choti si princess chahiye bilkul tumhari tarah , cute ziddi and natkhat ..
Monu punches on his shoulder and blushes and remembers something ..
Mo : ohh no , mein ithni badi baat kaise bhul gayi ??
Karan : kya hua ??
Mo : aaj malvika bhabhi ki sonography test hai , woh mujhe sath aane ko boli thi , woh pehle se hi bahut sari huyi thi ..
Karan : relax , hum abhi chale jayengey ..
Mo : nahi tumhe meeting bhi attend karni hai na , tum jao , mujhe bus hospital ke pass chod do .
Karan : abhi abhi toh tum ne kaha hum 50 50 partners hai, toh partnership ko ai.yise hi thod du ??
He took u turn and says ..
Karan : waise bhi mujhe bhi mere saale saab Aneesh ko tang karne ka mouka milega ..
Mo : tum ayisa kuch nahi karoge , bichara mera bhai , ab kuch boltha bhi nahi hai tumhe ..
Karan : koun bichara , woh tumhara Bhai Aneesh ek number ka chalak lomdi hai , bus sab ke saamney kuch boltha nahi lekin humesha indirect taunt fhektha rehtha hai ..
Ayise hi ladte jagadte dono hospital pahunchgaye ..
Dono Direct lad mein chale gaye aur dekha ki Aneesh malvika ko mana raha tha ..
Mo : kya hua , ab kya kiya Bhai ne ??
Malvika : dekhna monu , tumhare Bhai mujhe moti bol raha hai ..
Aneesh : arey sorry meri maa tum bus gol matol hogayi ho , moti nahi huyi .
Karan : waise gol matol hona bhi ek taraf ka moti hona hi hotha hai , ( dramatically) hawww saale saab aap lawyer sahiba ko moti bola ?? Very bad ..
Tabhi ek nurse reports lekar aati hai ..
Malvika : ohh no mein toh thodi der pehle pareshaan horahi thi , yeh Aneesh ne meri dyaan batak diya moti bolke , monu tu dekhna reports mein kya likha hai .
Aneesh : ( mumbles ) acchi baat huyi thodi der keliye hi sahi mind divert kardi , varne isse dekh kar meri halat karaab hone lagi.
Monu : ( while seeing the reports ) sono graphy maa ne ki thi na ??
Malvika: haan badi maa ne khud ki thi ,
Mo : ( while hugging malvika ) congratulations bhabhi , ghar mein ek nahi balki do do khushiya aane wale hai , aapke ander ek nahi balki do do jaan pal rahe hai ..
Yeh sunkar baaki sab kush aur heraan dono hogaye ..
Aneesh : monu koi complications toh nahi hai na !?
Mo : nahi Bhai koi complications nahi huyi hai , aapko ab bhabhi ki aur dyaan rakhna padega ,
Aneesh side hugs malvika and holds her hand and assures her ki sab teek se hojayega ..
Mo : tum dono yehi raho , mein maa se milke aati hun. ..
Karan : mein bhi avunga , after all mujhe tum dono ke beech kabbad ki haddi nahi Banna hai ..
Moran came out from the lab giving some e space to , to be soon parents ..
They left towards juhi cabin and stops their track by hearing someone's sobbing sounds ..
Karan : yeh maa ki awaaz lag rahi hai ..
Juhi : pata hai Deepak aaj mujhe meri dono ki bacchon ki bahut yaad arahi thi jab mein sonography test kar rahi thi , ..
Deepak : khud ko rokho juhi , ab toh humare dono bacche humare samne hai na ..
Juhi : lekin amritha jab bhi mujhe aunty bhulati hai toh mujhe bahut takleef hothi hai , kounsi maa apni beti ki muhh se aunty sunna pasand karthi hai ..
Deepak : jo bhi ho ab woh brar pariwaar ki beti hai humari nahi , khud ko sambhalo juhi ..
Juhi : nahi amritha meri beti hai, bhale hi mein khud se dhoor kardiya lekin oh meri ander 9 mahina rehchuki hai monu ke saath saath , mein uss ehsaas ko kaise bhul sakthi hunn Deepak ..
Yeh sunkar monu ki kadham ladkada gaye aur woh girne ko huyi toh Karan usse sambhalke waha Ghar lekar Gaya , ab usse sab kuch clear hone laga , kyu pehli baar amritha ki zikar hote hi juhi chakkar aakar girgayi , kyu Deepak humesha amritha ko dekh kar emotional hotha tha , kyu amritha ki past mein ithna intrest le raha tha sab kuch clear hone laga ..
(So point to be noted here agar mujhe Monami ko pehle sach reveal karna nahi hotha toh mein aneesh and malvika ki pregnancy track woh bhi teek faizi ki shadhi se pehle likha nahi hothi , so everything is interconnected here )
And they came to home
Monu abhi bhi shock mein thi , aur karan usko samjane laga ...
Karan : Monami , khud do sambhalo , maybe they had a reason to do this , maybe they are helpless.
Immediately she hide herself in his arms , in few seconds he too wrapped his arms around her ..
Mo : karan , why do my parents didn't got a happy peaceful life ?? Pehle jaanvi aunty ki chale jana , fhir family se dhur hogaya , sab kuch chod kar chale gaye , fhir unke beti se bhi dhoor hogaye , why can't they deserve a happy life ..
Karan : ( wiping her tears with his thumb) fhir bhi woh dono saath mein kush hai aur baaki sab ko Kushi diya hai , sab ki problems ko solve Kiya lekin khud ki takleefon ko kisi se share bhi nahi kiya , aaj unkeliye respect aur bad gayi hai Monami ..
Mo : par unlogon ki Kushi mein wapas lautadungi karan mein Amritha ko sach bathadungi , aur usse wapas lavungi ..
Karan : par in sab ke peeche ki reason kya hai , humme toh pata nahi na , and more over agar amritha ayise hi kyu accept karegi ?? And more over yeh baat kisi aur se pata chalne se behtar hoga ki , papa aur maa khud yeh baat amritha ko bathaye ..
Mo : kyu , mein kyu nahi keh sakthi ?? Kya problem hai ??
Karan : see Monami , jaanvi bua ke baremein sab kuch pata chalne ke baad bhi tumne kuch nahi bathayi , bcoz you don't want to hurt me right ?? Lekin pata hai mujhe zyada kounsi baat hurt kartha ??
Monu see him with questioning eyes..
Karan : agar tumhare alawa koi aur mujhe yeh baath bathaya hotha toh mein zyada hurt ho jatha , gusse mein hi sahi tumne khud bathayi thi yeh baat isiliye mein khud ko sambhala , * after a second * tumne mujhe sambhala varna mein sach pata chalne ke baad toot gaya tha , bikar se pehle tumne mujhe sambhala na , and I know meri rani sahiba iss baar bhi sab kuch sambhal sakthi hai ,, lekin pehla kadham papa ko ya maa ko Lena hoga ,
Mo : ( keeping her head on his chest ) maine toh ayise hi boldi thi , tum 50 percent partner ho lekin tum toh sach mein maangaye ..
Karan : ab kya kar sakte hai madam , zindagi bhar ka contract jo sign Kiya hai , toh partnership toh nibhana hi padega ..
Monu sees him once and lightly punches on his chest and says ..
Mo : ab koi idea doge ya ayise maar khate rahoge ??
Karan : idea ?? Mein kyu Dunn idea , ayise kurafathi ideas tumhe aate hai mujhe nahi , mein toh seedha saada innocent ladka hunn ,
Mo : koun innocent?? Tum ?? Tum ek number chalak lomdi ho , tumne toh bina permission ki mere se engagement karliya aur bina permission ki mujhse shadhi karliya ,, aur
Karan : aur tumne kya kya kiya bhul gayi ?? Sab se pehle mujhe jabardasti ghav lekar gayi , mujhe kabristan mein chodi thi , fhir mujhse shadhi ko inkaar karke US wapas Jane wali thi , fhir sab ke saamney mujhe jhoote makkar saabit kardi , bhul gayi kya sab ke saamney param bhayya ko expose karne keliye kithna drama kardi tune ...
Aur fhir start hogayi do no ki Tom and Jerry ladayi ..
After fighting an eternity
Moran : ( unison ) ek minute idea ..
Mo : abhi hum ne jaise gusse mein sab kuch ugaal diya , waise bhi mummy papa ko gussa dilaya toh ?? , gusse mein sab kuch bol dengey ..
Karan : right agar tumhare papa ke saamney amritha ke baremein koi galat boldiya toh unhe gussa ajayega , fhir gusse mein sab kuch bol dega ..
Mo : haan mein bhi yehi soch rahi hunn , tum ek kaam karo , papa ke saamney Amritha ke baremein kuch ayisa boldo taki unka gussa bad jaye ..
Karan : haan jarur bol saktha hunn , lekin tum Bina suhaag aur Srinagar ke acche dikhogi ??
Mo : kya ?? Kya matlab??
Karan : matlab yehi ki koi Dr the Mahajan ke saamney unki beti ko kuch bole aur woh maaf kare , ayisa honi nahi saktha , woh toh mere car mein bomb lagake mujhe maardega ,, fhir tum vidhva banjavogi , tumhe safed kapde pehen na hoga , jo chudiya , no makeup, no sindoor , aur most importantly mere hone wale bacchon ka kya ..
Monu this time give a hard punch on his shoulder..
Mo : kuch bhi bola math karo , ayisa kuch nahi hoga ..
Karan : ayisa hi hoga , bhale hi sab ke saamney mere sasur ji shaant rehtha hai lekin maine dekha vikrant ke saath kya huva hai ..
Mo : vikrant koun hai ??
Karan : tumhara one sided wala pagal ashiq , khair woh sab hoke bahut din hogaya hai , but mein yeh keh rahi hunn ki yeh kaam sirf tum kar sakthi ho , kuch bhi karke papa ko gussa dilaav ..
Mo : indirectly tum yeh keh rahe ho ki mein apni hi didi se jagda karu ..
Karan : tum ayise bol rahi ho ki aaj tak tumne kabhi amritha se jagda nahi ki ho , sab se ladai jagda karna tumhari favourite Hobbies mein se ek hai ..
Mo : ( angryly) kya bola ??
Karan : hehehe kuch nahi ..
Mo : lekin bina baath ke jagada kaise Karu ?? Koi toh tmreason hoga na ..
Karan : yeh toh mujhe bhi nahi pata , ek minute Google mein search karte hai ..
He took out his phone and googled in it ..
" How to fight with someone without any reason"
Tabhi kuch videos internet par dikhne lage ..
Mo : yeh kya ?!
Karan : mujhe bhi nahi pata , kaha mein roj jagda karne ki reasons dekthi hunn , woh toh apne aap hojate hai ,
Mo : haan tum toh Bina koi reason se hi logon se badak jate ho , tumhe reason ki kya hi jarurat hai ..
Karan monu ko ghoor kar dekha toh woh ek sheepy smile dedo , fhir dono ne videos dekhna shuru kardi , ek video do ladkiyan ek dusre ko bahut bura bhala kehne lage , dono ek dusre ke upar chillane lage , aur baaki sab Ghar Wale ghoongi bhejri ki tarah sun rahe the ..
Karan : lagta hai yeh koi tv show hai , acchese dekhlo kaise lad rahe hai , tumse se zyada lad rahe hai ..
Mo : par reason kya hoga , koi bahut bada reason hi hoga , isiliye ithna chillarahe hai dono behne .
Karan : hoga koi reason ..
Aur woh dono palke bina chapke woh end Tak dekha fhir pata chala ki ek ladki jo badi behen thi woh tea mein sugar kum Dali thi jiski wajese yeh pura scene chal raha tha ..
Yeh dekh kar Moran shocked hogaye aur ek dusre ko dekhne lage jaise ithni silly reason keliye dono lad rahe the woh bhi iss tarah , aur monu iss tarah scene mein involve hogayi ki woh bhi charectors se baat karne lagi , jisse dekh karan monu ko shaant karne laga ..
Aur uss din se dono kuch na kuch karke rahe lekin Deepak and juhi ko pehle se pata hai unki beti kisi ko bhi ayise utpatang baatein bol nahi sakthi , woh toh dushman se bhi do minute mein pyaar karwa sakthi hai toh Deepak and juhi ko kabhi uski baatein bura nahi laga ..
Finally uss din jis din veer ka contract haat se nikal gayi , company ka shares ek dum se gir gaye , aur veer ka company thoda losses mein Jane wali thi , so board ne decide Kiya ki iss ke upar jald se jald ek action lele ..
Isiliye borad ki sabhi members ko borad meeting attend karna tha ..
Sooraj , suhana , juhi , Deepak , karan , Monami bhi borad mbrrs mein se ek the so sab meeting attend kar hi rahe the ..
Tabhi sab ki phone par msg agaye , jisse dekh kar monu ki para high hochuki thi ..
Mo : karan ,yeh kya bakwaas hai ?? Koi meri behen ki photos iss tarah kaise click kar sakte hai ??
Karan : woh toh mujhe bhi samaj nahi aara ,
His gaze went on Deepak jo gusse ki wajese already baatein par lakirein agaye hai ..
Karan : rani sahiba , ek idea dedunga promise Karo ki tum mujhe maarogi nahi ..
Mo : kya ??
Karan : woh dekho tumhare papa , already gusse mein agaya hai , yehi sahi wakth hai baras pado aur gusse mein papa sab sach bol dengey ..
Mo : tumhe kya hua hai karan , yeh chodo woh meri sahi behen hai , yeh socho ek ladki ke upar Ganda ilzaam lagare hai fhir tum yeh keh rahe ho ki mouke ka faida utav , tumhe kya hua hai ..
Karan : ( by holding her hand ) i promise , woh Jo bhi hai uss admi ko tumhare phair ke saamney laakar gira dunga , usse jo saza dena hai dedo but abhi yeh kardo kyuki , lohe jab garam hotha hai ussi wakth humme uska faida utana hoga , tabhi baat banegi ..
Mo : fhir bhi mein ayise kaise jagda karu ?? Koi reason toh hona chahiye ..
Karan : hai na reason , yeh dekho photos ..
Mo : kya ? Yeh jhooti makkar photos jismein clearly dikh raha hai ki yeh sab morph kiya gaya hai ..
Karan : tumhe sach ugalvana hai ya nahi ??
Mo : teek hai ro math ..
Aur woh sari tv shows ki jagade ko yaad karne lagi , fhir jaan bhuj kar amritha ke upar jhoot moot ki gussa dikhane lagi ..
Mo : toh woh tum ho , mk group walon ke saath haath milaya ho ..
Monu ko achanak ithne gusse mein dekh kar dekh kar koi kuch bolte nahi tabhi monu karan ke phair par maarti hai ..
Aur aag mein ghee dalne ka kaam karan kartha hai ..
Karan : clam down rani sahiba , yeh business world mein tumhe ithni experience nahi hai , so plz kuch bhi conclusion mein math auo .
Mo : ( in mind ) dhoke baaz ladka , sab ke saamney mujhe villain bana diya ..
Amritha : arey par meri baat toh suniye ..
Mo : ( in mind ) no monu Jo bhi hai just continue ab beech mein math chod ( to amritha with fake angry ) ab sunne keliye baaki hai kuch ?? Mujhe laga ki tum sirf muhh fhat ho lekin tum toh dhoke bhaaj nikli
Amritha is also angry now ..
Ammu : aap jaante kya hai mere baremein ?? Jo judge kar rahe ho ?? Pehli khud ki life toh teek karlijiye ..
Mo : what do you mean by that ??
Amritha : tumhara pati toh tumhe khud cheat kar raha hai aur tumhe pata bhi nahi hai , woh toh mere saath bhi party mein badtameezi kar chuka hai ..
Karan was shocked to hear this ,
Both Moran sees each other , immediately karan nods in no ..
Mo : ( in mind ) ab yeh kya Naya siyappa hai ( to others ) ohh toh tumhari yeh chaal pata chal gayi toh Naya chaal bana rahi ho and yeh photos dekh kar yehi lagra ki you are the mole , and iss admi ke saath ithna has has ke kyu baat ..( in mind ) i guess ab toh papa rokhengey plz papa rokh do mujhe ..
Veer/ Deepak ( unison ) : enough monu ..
Mo : ( to karan in whisper tone ) yeh beech mein kyu sarpanch ban Raha hai ??
Karan : ( in same tone ) agar koi mere baremein kuch galat bola toh tum khud ko rokh pavogi ??
Mo : matlab ??
Karan join his hands by showing amveer together ..
Mo : ohh bete ki yaha toh alag track chal raha hai , kaha mein hum saath saath hai movie ki plan kar rahi hunn , yaha yeh log hum aap ke hai koun ka re creation kar raha hai ..
Tabhi veer beech mein bola ..
Veer : relax Monami , I trust her , woh ayisi ladki nahi hai , woh pagal ho sakthi hai , immature hosakthi but she never break someone trust , so jayarsi baat hai yeh photos morphed hai ..
Karan : yeh tareef kar raha hai ya bezzati ??
Monu glares at him ..
Mo : ( fake angry ) ohh great ab the great veer singhaniya , apni best friend se zyada kal ki aayi huyi ladki ko support kar raha hai ..
Veer : see pagal math Bano monu , ab tum iss matlabi duniya ke baremein jaanti nahi ho , see yaha ki log apne faide keliye kisi ko bhi fasa dete hai so plz shaant hoja ..
Sach mein monu in sab ke baare mein jaanthi nahi thi but , woh ab yeh baat maane keliye bhi ready nahi hai ,ayisa sab ko lagta hai but uske mann mein kya kya chalra hai sirf karan ke alawa kisi ko bhi pata nahi , woh kisi bhi tarah Deepak se sach ugalwane ka decision Li thi aur ab uski gussa bhi sar se upar Jaa chuki thi , woh kya kya bol rahi thi usse khud bhi pata hi nahi hai , sirf ithna pata hai ki Deepak and juhi se sach ugalwana hai ..
Mo : I don't believe, ki iss ladki keliye mujhse behes kar rahe , aur mein iss dhokebaaz lad.....
Tabhi Deepak monu ke upar haath utaya but beech mein hi rokh liya ..
Monu ek dum se dar jathi hai kyuki woh Deepak ko iss tarah kabhi nahi dekhi thi ,,
Deepak : enough of now , amritha ayisa kabhi kar nahi sakthi , kabhi nahi ,
Mo : aur aapko yeh baat kaise pata hai , aapko ithna trust kyu hai amitha par ..
Deepak : kyuki woh meri beti hai aur tumhari badi behen , aur mein apni beti par pura trust kartha hunn ..
Aur woh gusse mein sach bol detha hai ..
Sab ke sab shocked hojate hai ..
Mo / ammu : kya kaha aapne ??
Deepak : haan amritha, tumhari twin sister hai aur meri badi beti ..
Aur Sara sach bathadetha hai ..
Deepak : aur mujhe meri khoon par aur Maan aur astha ki parwarish par pura barosa hai amritha kabhi apnon ko dhoka nahi de sakthi ..
Sooraj , Moran and Ameer shocked hojate hai , monu waha se bina kuch bole chali jathi hai and amritha wahi par bhait jathi hai ..
Moran ko pehle se hi andaza hai lekin un dono ki pain dekh unhe bahura lagta hai ..
Karan monu ke peeche jatha hai and veer amritha ko sambhalne lagta hai , sooraj Deepak ko clam kardethe hai jo abhi ro Raha hai ..
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Monu and karan came to Sherghil mansion , monu was in a vulnerable condition by hearing the truth from her father..
Karan : andaza toh tha , kuch toh galat huva hai , lekin ithna sab kuch hogaya hai aur kisi ko kabar tak nahi , amritha ke papa hote toh shayad yeh noubat nahi aathi ..
Mo : pata hai karan mujhe bachpan se sab kuch Mila hai , maa papa ka pyaar , dosthon ka pyaar sab kuch Mila hai , kabhi meri khadon par koi responsibility nahi aaye , mein jo bhi maangthi thi papa ne mere saamney rakhte the , lekin unke beti hokar bhi amritha ko kuch nahi mila , aur bachpan se hi pariwaar ji jimmedari utayi thi , apni mehnat se kamayi aur pariwar ko sambhalne lagi , mujhe amritha keliye bahut bura lagra hai karan ..
Just then They heard juhi and Deepak's conversation .
Juhi : monu toh gusse mein agayi , woh samaj jayegi na Deepak ..
Deepak : woh humara samajdar bacchi hai juhi , woh samaj jayegi aur Amritha ko bhi accept karlegi ..
Mo : abhi bhi papa mere baare mein soch rahe hai karan ..
Karan : rani sahiba shaant hojao ..
Mo : iss wakth unke jarurat mujhe nahi amritha ko hai , ab unka Sara pyaar amritha ko milni chahiye , jo bachpan se usko nahi mili woh sab unhe milna chahiye ..
Karan : i promise ayisa hi hoga , hum dono milke maa aur papa ko amitha se milwadenge aur Amritha ko humesha keliye yaha lekar ayengey ..
Mo : nahi karan woh galat hai , woh pariwaar meri di ko ithne saalon se pyaar diya , ab achanak usse uski parwaar se dhoor nahi kar sakte , usko yeh pariwaar bhi milna chahiye aur yeh pariwaar ki pyaar bhi milna chahiye ..
Karan : tum kehna kya chahthi ho ..
Tabhi monu ne dekha ki Deepak juhi ke saath aaraha hai ..
Woh karan ko bahar dakka Diya aur fake angry dikhate huye boli
Mo : jao yaha se , mujhe thodi der akela chod do ..
Karan : hein ??
Karan ki nazar Deepak par padi aur woh samaj gaya aur mann mein bola ..
Karan : ( in mind ) kayi mere sare baath toh suna nahi ..
Nd they act like they are arguing
Monu again closes the door on the karan face , juhi had tears in her eyes ..
Deepak : meri beti ko jab bhi gussa aata hai sambhalna mushkhil hai , give her some time , woh khud ba kudh teek hojayegi ..
He takes juhi along with her ..
Karan takes a breath and monu opens the door ..
Karan : ab bathav kya karna chahthi ho ??
Mo : amrutha ko yaha lekar avungi , kuch bhi karke yaha lekar avungi ..
Karan : thoda time do usse , humme sach pata Chalke ek hafta huva hai , phir bhi hum khud ko sambhal nahi pare hai , abhi abhi toh usse sach pata chal gayi hai ..
Mo : hmm , dekhte hai kaise react karte hai sach jaan kar ..
And woh dono teen din baad plan banakar karan Ghar ka kaam sambhalne ka and monu office chale Jane ka plan banate hai ..
Mo : plan toh teek hai lekin di humare office kyu ayegi ?? Woh toh veer ki office mein kaam karthi hai ..
Karan : humare kehne par nahi ayegi agar uska boss order Kiya toh ayengi na ..
Mo : ohh toh veer se pucho help maango usse. .
Karan : mein kyu maangu ?? Woh toh tumhara dosth hai na ??
Mo : mein nahi maang lungi help uss chapadganju se , dekha nahi wakth aate hi ditch kardiya mujhe , bhale hi meri di ko support Kiya hai but mein toh unka bestfriend hunn na ?? Fhir bhi mere saath nahi diya ..
Karan : ( by wrapping his shoulder around her neck ) meri rani sahiba , agar mere aur Sid ke beech maano koi jagda hogayi ho , aur hum dono hi galat nahi hai pH tum kiska saath deti ?? Mujhe ya Sid ko ..
Mo : sach bolu ya jhoot ??
Karan : jo tum chahe ..
Mo : mein sid ko support karthi kyuki mujhe pata hai ki mein tumhe mana pavungi , agar mein manavungi toh tum definitely Maan javoge , ayise nahi sid maanega nahi , but agar dono mein se mein tumhe choose karungi toh Sid ko bura lagega , aur mera point bhi yehi hai , dono mein se he choosed his love not best friend, isiliye mein baat nahi karungi , jab tak woh khud mujhe sorry nahi bolega tab tak mein baat nahi karungi ..
Karan removes his phone from his pockets and dials veer number and kept in speaker ..
Veer : ( in call ) hello karan , monu ki gussa kum huyi ??
Monu sees him in shock .
Karan : nahi yaar woh abhi bhi gussa hai ..
Veer : yaar teen din hogaya hai baat hi nahi hopayi , ek baar usse baat karke dekho na , kya pata gussa kum hogayi ho ..
Karan : agar ithna hi dar hai toh kyu Li amritha ki side ?? Monu ko support karte .
Veer : monu ki gussa mein jaanthi hunn , usse jithna jaldi gussa aathi hai uthni jaldi kum hothi hai , leki amritha ayisa nahi agar ek baat ki peeche pad gayi toh , usse kabhi bhulthi nahi hai ,, aaj bhi yehi puchthi hai ki mujhe Saadi pehnna kaise aata hai ..
Karan : kya ?? Kya Saadi ??
Veer : nahi woh chodo mein yeh bathara hunn ki mein monu ko aaj nahi toh kal mana saktha hunn , lekin amritha ko nahi mana pavunga ..
Karan : ok jab monu ki gussa kum hogi woh kudh baat karegi , shayad usse tumhari jarurat pad sakthi hai , jab woh help keliye phone karegi manalena ..
Veer : sure ,, lekin kounsi help ??
Karan pata chal jayega ..
And he cuts the call ..
Karan : veer tumhare saath uss wakth kada hai , jis wakth tum apne saath nahi depayi , agar woh last minute mein shadhi se backout nahi kartha toh shayad Aaj tum meri nahi balki veer ji biwi ban chuki hothi ,
Mo : woh sab teek hai ,,yeh mujhse directly bol sakta hai na , tumse kyu bol raha hai ..
Karan : kyu ki tum pagal ho isiliye ,
Mo : mein nahi tum pagal ho , aur woh chapadganju pagal hai aur iss duniya ki sare mardh pagal hai ,
And he took her bag and went to office as for plan ...
Fhir kuch der sochne ke baad woh Sid ko call karthi hai , and karan ke kehne par Sid bhi jhoot boldetha hai .
Fhir finally monu ka gussa bhi veer keliye kum hojathi hai fhir help keliye veer ko call karthi , as already veer knows monu kya help chahiye woh amritha ko Sherghil office bhejtha hai and as for his promise karan mr kapadia ko bhi Sherghil office bhultha hai , monu apni sari badaas nikal dethi hai , and ammu bhi uska saath dethi hai ..
Flashback end
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Veer sees monu in unbelievable expression..
Veer : ithna bada game , aur mujhse chupayi thi ..
Mo : sorry na yaar , ab boldiya na , ab se tum bhi mere team ho ,, aur waise bhi ayise propose koun karta hai , i am sure isiliye baar baar tumhara breakup hotha hai
Veer sees her with corner of eyes ..
Mo : tum pehle yeh bathav , tum sab ke saamney meri side na lekar amritha ki side kyu Li ??
Veer : ( under the breath ) dono behne ek jaise hi hai , ek toh bothi hai * he mimic amritha * tumhe sari pehna kaise aatha hai ,dusri bolthi * he mimics monu * tum tumne sab ke saamney meri side kyu nahi li ,
Dono ke dono paagal hai ..
Mo : ( angryly ) sab kuch sunayi dera hai mujhe ...
So baaki ka story next chapter mein and the point is , jab pehli baar Deepak monu ko rokhne wala tha veer ne beech mein hi bol bada , episode number toh yaad nahi , but " unexpected truth " wala chapter mein dekha liya toh aapko pata chal jayega .
And dusri point yeh hai ki agar mein veer and karan ki conversation pehle likhi hothi toh , mere ulti kopdi readers ko yeh pata chalne mein ek second bhi nahi lagega ki monu sab kuch jaan bhuj kar kar rahi hai ,
Mujhe twist ko ghuma fhirane ka purani aadat hai and mein kabhi bhi twist ko ek dum se reveal nahi Karthi .. entertainment miss nahi hona chahiye ..
And third point is jab story ko likhthi gayi toh I realized ki monu ya koi aur ko Amritha ( ek ladki ko ) charecter less nahi bol sakte chahe circumstances kuch bhi ho , this is wrong msg to my readers so i corrected myself ,,
kuch logon ko apne galathiya kabhi Nazar nahi aate ya fhir nazar andaaz kardete but I am not from those people
To be continued..
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