Username: boomgirl15

Title: Sweet torture?

Genre: Thriller/sadist

Mature themes? Yes or no : Yes, including violence, a bit of sadist behaviour and controversial adult topics.

Story description:
I wake up in a white room. The blankets are soft and the heat they radiate makes me feel calm. I feel something pressing against my arms and legs. Pulling away the blankets I looks at my arms and legs and observe I have wires. Am I in a hospital? What happened to me? Why am I here? Is my family here waiting for me to wake up? A great fear invades me. Who is my mum? Who is my dad? Do I have siblings? I gasp putting a hand to my mouth. Why can't I remember?

I need to get out of here. I need to find out what's wrong with me. I am not going crazy, am I? I shake my head. That's exactly what an insane person might be asking themselves. What if I am going mad?

My chest falls and rises. My lips tremble and I open my mouth due to lack of oxygen. I can't breathe. I can't stop thinking. I need to get out of here. I rip the wires off and jump out of the bed. My bare feet make contact with the cold, hard floor. They shake when I start walking. I need to guide myself with one hand leaning on the wall. I am so weak. I am not used to feeling like this.
The door bursts open before I reach it. I see two scientists and one nurse. Is this a hospital or a laboratory? Or a combination of both? What is going on?
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Meet Sienna. She is confused and worried. She always was the good girl at home, always helped out when people needed help. Why is everyone treating her like some disease? Putting her to one side like a thing, ignoring all her questions? Why is she trapped in here? What happened? Why can't she remember? And what is this place? Is it an asylum? Is it a hospital? Is it a laboratory? Can it be a combination of all three? And the question that terrifies her most of all, is she insane?

What happens when death comes knocking at your door? And what if the answers you seek are there? Do you open the door? Or do you stay put? And if you stay put, who's to say death won't find another way in?

Date Marked complete: Ongoing

Link to the story: https://my.w.tt/fBnujbg8dX

Small summary of me as a writer: My name is Victoria. I am Spanish but since I am living six years in Ireland I feel English is my mother tongue. In my profile you'll find stories both in English and Spanish. I am 16. Throughout my adolescence writing has helped and is helping me a lot. I started writing short stories when I was 11. I remember been so proud of them and showing them to my mum who has studied English Phylology. I soon realised they weren't great stories. But I don't regret writing those stories because they got me to where I am now. With this I want to reach out to people and let you know that it's okay to write even though your first stories won't be amazing. No one is born knowing how to write just as we need to learn to walk before we can learn to run. Take your time, start by writing one or two pages a week. Then after a month try to write three or four pages a week and slowly keep building your way up. Writing takes time and patience. If one day the inspiration doesn't come to you, do something else. Inspiration comes in the most unexpected ways. For example, the idea for this story came to me when I was cooking. You can be doing the most normal thing in the world and a crazy idea for a story can come to you.

Another thing, writing in wattpad is great, especially for writers who are starting or who don't have a lot of experience writing. It's because of my amazing readers that I am able to grow as a writer. They have always been honest with me, commenting about mistakes I have done or how I could improve. They also told me that I was getting better at writing, they could feel it as the story advanced.

I am still figuring out if I can handle certain genres. I've written and I am writing stories with the following genres: Romance, Mystery, Drama, Thriller, Action, Comedy, Sadist. I am always trying to enrich my writing, always trying new genres, topics, etc.

In conclusion I want to say that I am also a poet. There is a book of poems in my profile, two of them have been published in an American newspaper! A lot of readers are encouraging me to publish the novel 'Am I just a monster?' So now, as well as working on new stories I am also editing 'Am I just a monster?' and hope to be able to sent it to an agency at the end of the summer. I know it's a long shot but if I don't try I'll never know. So my advice is, if you want your works to be published send them to see if they can be published! If you don't try, you'll never know!