"Hey wait! Reedstar!" I heard a voice calling me. Turning around, I saw Kryst. "Hi.." I mumbled. "Can I hunt with you? I know I just hunted but I want to contribute to the clan." she panted. "Sure! I'll want to see your hunting skills anyway." I purred. We went to the beech tree in our territory and I spotted a mouse. Crouching low, I shot forward and quickly killed the mouse. I gave thanks to Starclan for the prey and as I burried the mouse, Kryst came over with another mouse. "I caught it at the same time as you." she told me. "Wow, nice!" I purred at her. She blinked warmly at me with her hazel eyes and I felt happy for once, just staring at those beautiful eyes of hers...
  At the end of the hunt, I had caught 2 mice and a plump vole. Kryst had caught a mouse and a squirrel. We dropped our offerings on the fresh-kill pile and went our own ways after having a quick word with each other, though I could not help but stare at her and think of her beautiful eyes.. "Hey, Reedstar, you've been hunting with who? I was looking for you! I wanted to hunt with you!" Cherryfall came over, staring at me. "I umm.. I went hunting with umm... Kryst..sorry.."I muttered, not meeting her sharp gaze. "You! Why are you spending so much time with a..a rogue! I caught you staring at her with a strange look on your far just now when she went away. What's wrong with you!" she snapped, glaring at me. I didn't know what to say. Did I really love Kryst or was I just being mouse-brained? I really did love Cherryfall once but now maybe I didn't love her as much.. I thought, my mind in a whirl. "Sorry Cherryfall I didn't know you wanted to hunt with me. I'll hunt with you tomorrow I promise you." I meowed. She narrowed her eyes at me before turning and storming away without a word. I sighed. Why were she-cats so sensitive? I had only hunted with Kryst and she got angry at me because of that. Kryst was my clanmate, for cat's sake! Well, sort of my temporary clanmate but it as the same wasn't it..
  I shook my head telling myself not to think about it anymore. It was getting dark and the clearing was getting crowded. I was sure that almost all my clanmates were going to eat. I myself was hungry but first, I needed to talk to all of the mentors for the kits who were going to be made apprentices maybe tomorrow or latest, the day after that. I Gathered all of them and talked to them, trying to make my speech as short as possible as I knew that they were as tired and as hungry as me. Soon, I let them go and eat and I myself picked a shrew from the fresh-kill pile. Cherryfall was eating with Molewhisker  and ignoring me. I sighed and went over to Kryst who was almost sitting on her own. "Hi," I purred at her fondly, "By the way, I was impressed by your hunting skills. They were pretty decent." "Thanks Reedstar," she purred back, flicking her tail. We ate and talked and after that, I went to my den to sleep.

Hi so do comment or vote on this chapter I hope you like it. Also, I would like to tell all readers that I do not own Erin Hunters or Warriors this is just a fanfiction. Besides that, this book is also kind of a parallel world or a different.. well world based on Bramblestar's Storm. In This book, Bramblestar isn't leader, but Reedstar so yah.. Though this book may contain a bit of spoilers (I try not to put spoilers in) you can read This even if you haven't read Bramblestar's Storm cos I try not to put spoilers. So yah.. Happy reading!