For @Rapidfur. Next oc will be Addersplash.

Name: Windsong

I've seen this name a few times. Wind- is considered sacred, but this is an original Clan so I'll ignore that. -song is fairly overused, but this name is beautiful, I like it.

She-cat

Okay.

New warrior

Okay :3

ForestClan

Pretty overused, but I like it. It makes sense.

A shorthaired but fluffy cream colored cat with peircing green eyes (flecks of red)

Nice! Green eyes are overused, but the flecks of red are cool. Cream is one of my favorite colors, but they aren't seen in the wild much. Oh well.

Personality: She's nice, bjt likes to get to the point quickly. She is quite mournful at times when she remembers things.(and shes a bit mad/crazy)

At first I thought she wouldn't have flaws, so good job. She is realistic but still a nice cat.. kind of.

Backround: Her father is a blood thirsty clan leader(Bloodstar) who was in a litter of three which the other two were given away and mother a med cat (leafbreeze) Bloodstar is evil) leafbreeze is a kind med cat and windsong and her littermates are part lf a peohecy in which they are to kill Bloodstar

This is a terribly long sentence. But forget your grammar, a lot is left out. I'd like to know how she fulfills the prophecy, first of all. I'm a bit confused by this..

Crush: Oakflare

Awesome name.

Power: (cuz of prohecy) super speed

That's where the Wind- comes from, yes? I like it.

·~*OVERALL*~·
6/10. Her backstory could use some work; it needs a lot more detail. Green eyes are overused, her appearance isn't very unique. Fix these few things..