❣️K-POP WINNERS❣️

Here are the long awaited winners for this year's Utopian Fanfiction Awards 2024 - ❣️ K-POP ❣️

❥ Your lovely judge: Ansha_Writes❣️

❥ Please be patient as we roll out everyone's prizes. Thank you!


❣️ THIRD PLACE ❣️

Je T'aime, Imbecile by   strawberry1d (BTS)

Book Title: 10/10

Book Cover: 10/10

Summary: 10/10

Story Description: 9/10

Reader Engagement: 9/10

Plot Uniqueness: 10/10

Character Development: 10/10

Creativity: 10/10

Writing Style: 6/10

Grammar & Punctuation: 8/10

Total: 92/100

Comments:

The flow of the story is quite good and the trope as well as the concept is unique. The characters are well expressed. It can fit in the comedy genre too. (Jokes aside, thanks for making me laugh).

However, I am confused about who is 'Seo Y/N'? I know that the female lead is Seo Noémie. It may be a typing mistake, so I just shrug that off.

There's a significant mistake in your writing style for example when you're using Noémie's Pov or Hoseok's pov, you have to use the pronoun 'I'.

The character itself is narrating the incidents from his/her pov. Modern writers are following this style and this makes the story more reader-friendly.

There are some mistakes in Grammar. In some parts it's in present tense and in some it's in past tense. Make sure to have a consistent flow of the tenses.

All over you have use the same concept of a CEO Romance story, but you have changed the entire plot by making Noémie's character dominating, courageous & what not.

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❣️ SECOND PLACE ❣️

In Order To Protect.. by moonheart_g   (EXO)

Title: 10/10

Book Cover: 10/10

Summary: 8/10

Story Description: 9/10

Reader Engagement: 8/10

Plot Uniqueness: 8/10

Character Development: 10/10

Creativity: 10/10

Writing Style: 10/10

Grammar & Punctuation: 10/10

Total: 93/100

Comments:

The story flow is going really well. Sehun's character is still a bit mysterious. It's like he is still hiding some secrets in spite of working with the female lead till the 5th chapter.

The case is getting interesting but there are some re-usability of the same in the plot. Also make sure to add some cliff hangers at the end of a chapter to hook the readers like leaving behind an unanswered question.

Some authors make this grave mistake of asking the questions directly, but I suggest you write the chapter in such a way that at the end of the chapter the readers themselves will have that question in their minds.

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And without further ado, the one we've all been waiting for;

❣️ FIRST PLACE ❣️

Nefarious by Hopeimagines07  (BTS/Mature)

Book Title: 10/10

Book Cover: 8/10

Summary: 7/10

Story Description: 10/10

Reader Engagement: 10/10

Plot Uniqueness: 10/10

Character Development: 10/10

Creativity: 10/10

Writing Style: 10/10

Grammar & Punctuation: 9/10

Total: 94/100

Comments:

The concept is totally different in Nefarious. Each chapter has a lot of cliff hangers. The story plot is really quite unique. The concept of time traveling, next life blew up my mind and I'm glad to read such books.

The way the flow goes in this story is incredible. Some grammatical mistakes are there and the summary could have been a bit more descriptive.

I don't usually judge a book by its cover but I do think that to make your book more attractive you can use a more attractive cover. There are many Graphics Shops, you can place an order there, they're free. It was just my suggestion.

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