Please do not feel discouraged if you did not place this round, your story will find its time!

There will be more contests next year to showcase your talent! Keep up the great work!

❥ Your lovely judge:  Ansha_Writes ❣️

❥ The deadline for judging is a must. There are no extensions allowed. See timeline again at the bottom of the page (it has been adjusted due to an error on our part).

❥ PLEASE keep in mind who to nominate for 'Rising Star' and 'Heart Winning'. Send this with your scores for R4! Thank you!

❥  The entries that have passed into Round Four but in no particular order:

❣️ Je T'aime, Imbecile by  strawberry1d (BTS)

❣️ In Order To Protect.. by  moonheart_g (EXO)

❣️ Nefarious by  (BTS/Mature)

Thank you to the below users for participating! We look forward to seeing your entries in the future!

Keep an eye out for the Special Awards as some of you may still place in those.

❣️ The Guardian's Gift by shiteutea  (BTS/BLACKPINK)

Title: 8/10

Book cover: 6/10

Summary: 10/10

Story Description: 10/10

Reader Engagement: 6/10

Plot Uniqueness: 9/10

Character Development: 10/10

Creativity: 10/10

Writing Style: 10/10

Grammar & Punctuation: 10/10

Total: 89/100

Comments:

As the title says, Jisoo really got a nice gift and Jin too, but it could have been more unique based on your ability of writing. The cover of the book isn't really suitable.

The concept is kinda calm and serene and the cover is too gorgeous. The cover doesn't show a clear idea of the story and it doesn't look appealing. If the cover appeals to the readers they'll be more interested in reading the book.

Now girl, I understand that your obsession regarding huge descriptions about every single detail, but the drawback is - as much as it makes the story beautiful it makes the reader doubled bored.

Don't be disheartened by this but it's the truth.
Many times the readers don't even read too.

See, for what cases you have to be a bit descriptive - for example when you're describing a person's looks, the outfit or some place at that time you have to be descriptive.

But in other aspects like helping someone, their feelings during those times you don't have to be descriptive.

I love the uniqueness of the plot. It's quite different from other fanfics and I consider myself fortunate to have an opportunity to read it.

Keep going!

❣️ Tales Of Heart by aurora_2604  (BTS/Mature)

Title: 10/10

Book Cover: 10/10

Summary: 5/10

Story Description: 7/10

Reader Engagement: 8/10

Plot Uniqueness: 8/10

Character Development: 10/10

Creativity: 10/10

Writing Style: 10/10

Grammar & Punctuation: 9/10

Total: 87/100

Comments:

I don't have much criticism for one shot because first of all I have a huge respect for all one-shot writers. You guys really work hard to show an entire plot in just a single chapter.

A summary should be given in the summary box. It forms an important part of the story. A simple line would also work if you are having problems in writing summaries for one-shot. For example - Dive into the enchanting world of Taekook one-shots...

As for reader engagement, there are some parts which are suddenly taking place, so readers can get confused. I cannot mention the particular chapters because since it's a one-shot, I read it out randomly.

The plots are generally re-usable of the same concept but your story telling appealed to me. But I liked how you began each story, like creating questioning scenes which engage

There are some mistakes in punctuation.

Keep going!

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❥ R4 Judging Begins: April 20th.
❥ Round Four Deadline: May 4th.
❥ Winners Deadline: September 3rd.

- El at The Happy Writers Community ❣️