Here are the long awaited winners for this year's Utopian Fanfiction Awards 2024 - FAIRY TAIL category! 🧚🏼‍♂️

❥ Your sweet judge:  SummerCheng37 🧚🏼‍♂️

🧚🏼‍♂️ FIRST PLACE 🧚🏼‍♂️

Nalu: Natsu's Girlfriend by Sailorserenity12

Title: 10/10

Book Cover: 10/10

The cover shows Natsu and Lucy standing close hugging each other and smiling into each other's eyes. It suits the story since it is about this lovely couple.

Summary: 10/10

The story is cute, romantic, and one of my favorites. The story is about the couple Natsu and
Lucy and their happiness in life's journey with one another.

The writer did a great job representing this throughout this piece of work. I recommend this adorable short, one-shot story for those new and used to Fairy Tail.

Story Description: 5/10

The author listed it as a Nalu one-shot. It does not tell much about what the readers should expect as they prepare themselves to read this particular book.

I give this 5 points because I feel this could use some improvement on giving an eye-catching word or too to draw more readers' attention to it as a whole.

Reader Engagement: 10/10

I loved the story as a whole. I enjoyed the story's character development, the overall plot, and
how the author transitions from one scene to another with clear words.

Plot Uniqueness (fanfic plot): 10/10

I can't say I have read anything quite like this before. I felt like the plot was well done, however, it would have been nice to have a description in the box under the title that made a certain part of the story stand out more.

I loved how the author shows that the main characters have been together for many years already which gave them time to get to know each other better.

Character Development: 10/10

Lisanna seems stubborn, and intent on sharing her feelings with her crush despite her friends
warning her that he is taken. She does not listen, and as a result, her feelings are hurt.

Natsu and Lucy, given the ship name Nalu by the others are happy to see how great those two get along in their relationship.

They feel the dating status made those acknowledge their feelings in ways they might not have otherwise. Overall this was a great asset to the story.

Creativity: 10/10

The author's use of bold words as transitions from one group of characters to another was creative.

I liked how she included everyone to help celebrate the good news that Nastu and Lucy had to share with them.

I will not say what it is because that would ruin the ending, and I believe you should read it for yourself to find out that information.

Writing Style: 10/10

The writing style is unique since it includes narrative and descriptive words, and draws the piece together. It shows how the writer feels about her story.

You can visualize the author being a part of the story with how well the words flow within this piece.

Grammar/Punctuation: 5/10

The punctuation is on point, and while it is clear when someone is speaking versus when a type of action is happening such as someone crying, or smiling.

A few paragraphs are close together which makes it harder to read. I believe with some editing to adjust the spacing could make the story easier for others to enjoy as much as I did.

TOTAL: 90/100

Extra Comments: Congratulations on a work well done!

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