Okay so I know you're all waiting for an update but honestly I can't reallt write this anymore the way it is. I'm cringing a lot whenever I read the dialouge and the plot line is just,,, eugh

So I'm going to rewrite this on my NY_Adversary account and tweak some of the plot

It'll still mainly be about the sea and the sun lol :) And the title will still be touch me :)))

Anyways tag me in the comment section if you want to read the soon to be published rewrite !!

I'll prolly do the same thing to Chocoholic as well.... :/