Hello!

Thank you so much for reading my ONC entry! I hope you all enjoyed book one of this story!

If you have a moment, please answer some of these questions (even a yes or no is great) so I can understand how to improve this story as I go through and edit!

I hope you enjoyed your time in Metro City, and we will see you again soon!

Characters:

1. Who was your favorite character?

2. Did you feel satisfied with the main character's endings in the story?

~Please let me know of any other character thoughts here!~

Storyline

1. What was your favorite part of the story?

2. What was your least favorite part of the story? (A part you found too boring, or annoying?)

3. Were there any images, symbols, or dialogue that were especially impactful or stood out to you as you were reading?

4. Did you feel satisfied with the story's ending?

~Please let me know of any other storyline thoughts here!~

Overall Thoughts

If you have any further thoughts that you were not able to share from the questions above, feel free to share them here!

Questions for the Author

Do you have any questions for me? Anything that was not clarified as the story came to an end?

Or if you have any silly questions about the character's life, behind-the-scenes as the author, or anything else, feel free to ask!

Thank you for your time in reading my story, it means a lot to get to share my weird little stories with you all, and I hoped you found this one particularly silly, yet fun to read!

<3

-Ivy

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All characters in this publication are fictional and any resemblance to or with real persons, living or dead, is purely coincidental.
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