Hey! Melon here,

It's been a really long time since I've opened Wattpad and an even longer time since I wrote this fanfic. I mean it's been 5 years since I started writing this and 3 years since I've last thought about it. I'm sure you've wondered if I was going to continue this story and the truth is I do want to.

Sadly, I fell out of the Undertale fandom a while ago as more important matters came crashing into my life. But now that I'm starting to have a bit of free time back, I'm slowly starting to get back into it!

This brings us to the matter at hand. What am I going to with this story? Well, after some thought, I've decided to rewrite it. Coming back and properly reading it again, I've noticed a lot of mistakes and parts that I really don't like that I'd love to change. So to kick my brain back into gear I am going to rewrite and edit the existing chapters and see where my brain take me. (Please note that I am still deciding whether or not I'm moving the rewrite to a new book or just editing it here, lmk what yall prefer.)

Before I can do that I want to know what you thought of it. I want your genuine thoughts and constructive criticisms. Did you like the way I portrayed the sanses or did I stray too far from their personalities? What about me interjecting in the story ? How was the flow? Did the story/writing seem too childish? Are there some things you'd like to be different or some ideas on where things should go? Would you like the tone to stay the way it is or would you prefer it more serious?

Please think of these and let me know. Any other thoughts that cross your mind are welcome as well (as long as it's not hate speech). I genuinely want this story to be told in a way that makes me proud and in a way that makes you feel immersed in it.

Also, since I've been away from the fandom for so long I've also forgotten how most of the sanses behave so if you guys could help me out (while I also do some researchit) it would be greatly appreciated.

Thank you guys so much for amount of patience you've displayed for this book, whether you're returning or new. Hopefully with your help this story will be back up and running again.

~Melon