Redrunner
Name: Redrunner
I'm kinda half-half on the name. Like, it's cool, but kinda too much at the same time. Maybe change it to like, Redwind? Or maybe Redbreeze? You could maybe do something like Redrush. I like the prefix and all, but....
Age: 22 moons
That's cool. I mean, like...;P
Clan: TreeClan
TreeClan seems chill.
Rank: Warrior (becomes deputy later on in the story, when's she's older and more experienced)
I like it. She's abit young for deputy, so I like that you but that there.
Appearance: brown eyed she-cat with fur as red as a fox's. She has a stream of white fur starting from underneath her nose to her underbelly.
I like it.
Personality: Snappy, easily agitated and sarcastic, but is also playful and humorous when she feels like it. Sometimes has the tendency to give up easily, but she gets along with most cats in general. She is also very speedy.
She seems like one of my friends. thefaultindauntless You know who you are.
Backstory: Redrunner was born into TreeClan. She has a trace of kittypet blood from her mother, originally named Lily and was renamed Morningdew. When Redrunner was only an apprentice, there was a badger invasion. Her mother was killed, and Redpaw was helpless to do anything, that's why later on when she became a warrior she is a little cold and snappy.
Awww. That's sad. :'(
Kits: NopeCrush: Yes
.....Whose her crush.....?
Mate: No
I give her a 7/10 because she kind of seems like a Mary-Sue. She seems like a nice cat and all, but seems like a Mary-Sue. Tweak her a bit, and then that's good.
Heeeey. You guys can submit more than one you know.....
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