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“Yaaaaa!” the young child charged at his father but was blocked easily.

“Ha!” He stopped his young son's advance with a single hand.

“Fight harder!” The strict father yells, with a harsh lining. His son became a little intimidated

“O-o-ok”

“Harder you brat!” His tone was enough to make the youngster cry. A high-speed punch snapped his fathers jaw sideways.

“Rrrr..there!” Anger and fear took over the kid, allowing him to hit his father with force.

“That it, kid.” He begins to show a smirk as he cracks his neck into place. They end the training session for today. The little kid beamed a grin to match his fathers.

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In this one my working on dialog. If you dont like it tell whats wrong with it.