So I decided to do one of those things where I react to my old chapters.

Welp, here we go. SkyDaWolfGamer has wanted me to do this for awhile, after she did one.

I'm scared. 

ANYWHO. 

I'll be in bold, and my story in italics. Yay. Bye. See you

P.S I chose my first fanfiction, that I still have... 'Cause  I deleted the very first one.

NOPE I CAN'T DO THIS.... I'VE GOTTA FIND ANOTHER ONE

NOPE CAN'T DO THAT ONE EITHER.

HOW DO YOU GUYS DO THIS. I SWEAR THIS IS SO CRINGEY

OKAY I DON'T THINK THIS ONE IS AS BAD. LET'S SEE

DON'T LAUGH.

THE FIRST CHAPTER SORT OF THING IS STILL REALLY CRINGE WORTHY

The actual book is still published if you wanna read it. It's Friend or Foe. I'm gonna go edit that when I finish up here.

Grover had found a new demigod. 

Oh gods it's already cringey. 

She didn't know that she was one though. Her name was Aria Melody Dare. Related to Rachel, most likely. She was thirteen, and she had a personality very similar to Rachel's. Except crazier. Yeah. Ok. We're good. Anyways, Grover brought her to Mr. D and Chiron.

NO NO NO. WHAT THE HELL WAS I THINKING???

" Umm.. H-hi, Mr. D, Chiron," he stuttered.
" Hello Grover. What do we have here?" Chiron asked kindly.
" I'd prefer not being seen as an item," Aria interrupted. Ok, she's also disrespectful. Chiron seemed taken aback for a moment, then regained his composure.

Hmm... Not that bad, past self. Not that bad...

" Alright then, ..."
" Aria. Aria Melody Dare."
" Aria?" Rachel asked. She had come down, and was staring at Aria in shock.

Not quite as bad... I knew it was right to do this story instead.

" Rachel?" Aria ran forward and squeezed Rachel.
" Oh, another one. Do you two know each other?" Asked Mr. D.

I guess Mr. D's more or less accurate... I feel like he wouldn't react though.

" Yeah. Aria's my cousin," Rachel explained.
" Well-" Chiron was cut off by a cluster of stars above Aria's head.
" Oh, a child of Asteria. Strange, I recall she got turned into an island," Mr. D said.

Okay, Mr. D is right, I think. BUT WITH THE CLICHE FORBIDDEN CHILD OF SOME RANDOM GODDESS NO ONE KNOWS? REALLY SELF, REALLY?

" Well, Rachel, why don't you explain?"

LINE BREAKKKKK- Oh uh, sorry. Continue.

Aaron stared in awe of the huge place in front of him. " Welcome to Camp Jupiter," Hazel said proudly. " We should go find Reyna." As they crossed the Little Tiber, a flaming hammer appeared in his hand.

I'm pretty sure this part isn't as bad...

" What the?" Aaron freaked out and dropped the hammer. The new augur, a daughter of Apollo named Mica, happened to be walking by.

Oh she just happened to be walking by.

" I'd say a son of Vulcan. Why don't we go find Reyna or Frank?" Mica advised. Hazel nodded.
" I think Reyna's in New Rome right now," Hazel guessed.
" Actually, I just left New Rome. What's going on?" Reyna asked, coming up behind them.
" Mica thinks Aaron is a son of Vulcan." Reyna raised her eyebrows.

NO NO NO. HAZEL SAID THAT PART. UGH. I AM SO STUPID.

" What makes you say that?"
" The flaming hammer that magically appeared out of nowhere."

NOPE HAZEL DOES NOT SASS PEOPLE.

Me: That. Was. TERRIBLE.

Stellar: It's better than the other two.

Me: IT WAS STILL TERRIBLE.

David: It was.

Me: AGH

Me: WHY DID I WRITE THIS

Me: Stellar, I can't believe you actually liked this book.

Stellar: Hey... I'm weird. Don't judge.

Me: Ugh, fine. Go like, meow Warriors or something.

Stellar: *eyes light up* meow meow meow meow meow meow-