I finished part one, and I hate it.

Okay, not really, but it's not ... right. I hope you enjoyed it more than I do. It's not that I don't like what was written or how I wrote it, it's just not where I wanted the story as a whole to go. I wanted it to focus more on Rogue's rebellion, but instead, it went in an entirely different direction. Yes, those things mentioned really did happen to the character Braken, but I didn't need to forcefully inject it like I did. The story needed to flow naturally. So after I've finished this version of the story, I might rewrite, edit, and cut it so that it goes where I want it to. I'll leave this version up, as I think part one has a good story, but I might also post a better and shorter version. But I'm lazy, so we'll see ...

Part 2 is completely planned out, and it's what I was originally going to do. Sorry it took so long to get to the point ...