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7 Riddles In Our Love Story

Overall review from the_naughty_princess

-Title was appropriate, although a bit unoriginal.

-According to the required plot rules, the inclusion of the seven riddles, Hatim's love story and humor were all adhered to.

-Descriptions were excellent in some areas and seriously lacking in some.

- Character exploration was good.

-Awesome chemistry between leads.

-Scenes were good, but one or two were left incomplete...like the answer to the last riddle or the answers to the riddles given by Sanskar to Ragini.

-Thoughts/Feelings and Emotions were good but more could have been added.

-Dialogues were satisfactory, but lacked a little clarity in certain instances.

-Grammatical errors are there.

-Writing style and structure needs work. 

-Average narration

-Presentation was good, but I was expecting the riddles to be more of a challenge for Sanskar, but he was like this perfect hero...always in the right place at the right time, doing the right thing etc.

-Ending was nice and happy. 

Grade: 30/40

Overall review from emananadeer8

All the things mentioned in the plot were used. Character exploration was amazing, a slight lacking on Ragini’s part only. Descriptions of the scenes were all good and perfect, except for some and some addition of scenes were needed too. Dialogue delivery was absolutely perfect. Love story was beautifully portrayed and all the answers for the riddles were perfect and very well apt except for one which I didn’t understand and that is; ‘Bolte Pahad nida ki khabar la’. One major lacking in the story was humour,u guys did try to bring it put except for two or three parts it was not all there or u can say conveyed. Some innovative ideas were there in the story and the cover and title was perfect.

Marks : 36.5

Scores of the group and os
The_naughty_princess :30+16=46
Emananadeer8:36.5+19=55.5
Mounikajaanu2002 =32+16=48
Angelshiva =21.5+16=37.5
Freakss =47.5

Grand total = 234.5/300

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