🥳👻Horror/Paranormal Winners 👻🥳
Thanks to our two amazing judges cassandracas1 and FionaCakes91 for judging this genre and getting the results in as fast as possible. Winners pm the form 'winner's form' to me at the bottom of the results for your stickers, if you're unable to download it. If you didn't win this time, there's always next time.
🥇First Place Winner🥇
Past the Garden Wall Ctrain8
🥈Second Place Winner🥈
The Boy Made Of String RowanCarver
🥉Third Place Winner🥉
Cocytus empiresofwater
🏅Honourable Mention🏅
The Fallen Star TheLightsAboveArbys
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Other scores and reviews
Books judged by cassandracas1
Past the Garden Wall Ctrain8
Title: 8/10
Cover: 6/10
Blurb: 8/10
Grammar/vocabulary: 19/20
Writing Style: 20/20
Plot: 10/10
Originality: 9/10
Overall Enjoyment: 10/10
Total: 91/100
Review: I like your title and it fits your story. The cover wasn’t the strongest. I guess you were trying to depict Banshee's eyes as being the two glowing lights. It kinda looked like two headlights are two fireflies. Consider adding more features to the pictures, maybe a mouth with the teeth showing. Your grammar, vocabulary and writing style were exceptional and I raved over how you make the characters talk in a different accent and they didn’t come off as being mechanical. The plot was superb and it had me wanting to read more. It was original and I enjoyed it a lot. Job well done.
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Cocytus empiresofwater
Title: 7/10
Cover: 6/10
Blurb: 7/10
Grammar/vocabulary: 19/20
Writing Style: 20/20
Plot: 8/10
Originality: 10/10
Overall Enjoyment: 9/10
Total: 85/100
Review: Your title was good but I think you could use a bit more creativity. The cover wasn’t the strongest even though I understood the concept. Your grammar and vocabulary were near perfect and I love your writing style. Your attention to detail is exquisite and you did an amazing job portraying each scene. Your plot is intriguing and it held my interest. It was original and I had a good experience reading your book. Nice job
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Angels Fall aura_irene_
Title: 6/10
Cover: 6/10
Blurb: 9/10
Grammar/vocabulary: 16/20
Writing Style: 16/20
Plot: 7/10
Originality: 9/10
Overall Enjoyment: 6/10
Total: 75/100
Review: The cover was good but it didn’t scream horror/paranormal. I loved your blurb, it was very well written. Your grammar and vocabulary needs a little bit of improvement. The plot was good but it wasn’t as original as I would have appreciated. I think you did a good overall job in depicting your characters and telling your story.
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20 Days to Prom pipwusa
Title: 6/10
Cover: 9/10
Blurb: 7/10
Grammar/vocabulary: 14/20
Writing Style: 15/20
Plot: 7/10
Originality: 9/10
Overall Enjoyment: 6/10
Total: 73/100
Review: The cover fit the genre perfectly. The blurb was fairly written and served its purpose. The writing style is good and I liked the plot a lot. The grammar needs some work. Pay attention to the way you phrase your sentences. It was a fairly written book.
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Books judged by FionaCakes91
The Boy Made Of String RowanCarver
Title: 10/10
Cover: 6/10
Blurb: 6/10
Grammar and Vocabulary: 19/20
Writing: 18/20
Plot: 10/10
Originality:10/10
Overall Enjoyment: 8/10
TOTAL: 87/100
Review: This piece was meticulously written; woven with an immense level of originality resulting in a mind-blowing plot like no other. I was mystified by the writer's ability to capture their reader's attention, I was hooked on every detail of the story. The vocabulary was highly developed and I love the darkness of the writing style, it worked well for the storyline. Wasn't a fan of the cover and the blurb needs a bit of meat to the bones, but I still enjoyed the book. A great read.
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Rayel JosefinaFAAD
Title: 8/10
Cover: 8/10
Blurb: 7/10
Grammar and Vocabulary: 18/20
Writing: 18/20
Plot: 8/10
Originality: 10/10
Overall Enjoyment: 6/10
TOTAL: 83/100
Review: I found this plot interesting, I love psychological thrillers and this book had the right ingredients. I applaud the writer for bringing such a diverse and intriguing story to life, but I must admit that I didn't enjoy the book as much as I should. Even though each chapter was professionally written; with beautiful descriptions and great application of literary devices, plus Ray's spiralling confusion to differentiate between a dream and reality was interesting to see, but the emotional connection was weak. I wanted to feel Ray's progress but I couldn't. The writer held me in the first couple of chapters but the excitement aspect started to plummet after a while. But a talented writer nonetheless.
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Fallen Star TheLightsAboveArbys
Title: 8/10
Cover: 6/10
Blurb: 8/10
Grammar and Vocabulary: 18/20
Writing: 17/20
Plot: 7/10
Originality: 8/10
Overall Enjoyment: 7/10
Total: 79/100
Review: This book had a fierce and powerful beginning. The intro chapter was beautifully delivered. I was thrilled to see the story of Cathetel and Asher unfold. I was fascinated with the plot, it reminded me of seasons 4 and 5 of Supernatural with the way the writer described the angel's feelings towards mankind. The writer possesses a very striking writing style, it was easy for me to get lost in the events that were taking place. The main problem for me was I wanted to see more captivating elements being incorporated into the storyline, it got a little slow as I read on compared to the earth-shattering first chapter which promised an intense novel. I found the blurb interesting, it promised an interesting read and it maintained that promise. Wasn't a fan of the cover but a great story.
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