Author: Bdicocco

Title: 5/5 - Short and sweet; one word only. I'm interested to see where this story will take me.

Cover: 5/5 - I can immediately tell that your story genre is fiction so well done for making that come across. The colors, the images and the text all suit perfectly and make your cover, in my humble opinion, stand out. 

Synopsis: 5/5 - Yeah, me likey a lot. It's so OMG! (fangirl moment, let me be) If the story is anything like your synopsis then I am deffo saving it in my library. There are no mistakes that I can see and you have given me enough to make me want to know more.

Plot: 5/5 - The reference to the twin towers made me laugh. The level of amazingness here is unreal. This scene was the perfect one to start your story off with. The section in the car was very poetic. You have an interesting flair to the way you write, that's very rare to find. 

Characters: 5/5 - Oh lordy lord. I love the way you described the mysterious boy. My heart dropped when he looked at her and another explosion happened. That was just priceless. I think that your characters right now are a tad stereotypical (sad, moody girl that blocks out the world, divorced mum, and perky, perfect cousin) however the way you used and manipulated this to make it your own is why these characters are so well created. They stand out and are interesting in their own right.

Small questions, wouldn't the mum be rushing into the rubble if she knew her daughter was in there? I find it hard to believe the mother would stand around 'waiting anxiously' and not take matters into her own hands.

SPG: 5/5 - It's FLAWLESS! The descriptions made the scene even more harrowing which added to the tense atmosphere.

OVERALL: YOU ARE, QUITE POSSIBLY, THE ONLY PERSON AS OF YET TO RECEIVE THE FULL MARKS FOR EVERY SECTION. THIS WAS A PLEASURE TO READ AND I AM SO HAPPY I READ IT.

WOULD I RECOMMEND: HELLS YEAH!

TOTAL: 30/30

*Toy story theme tune* #you've got a reader in me#