Still Alive by TheSilentChaos_

Title: 20
   Swak yung title, the end.

Book Cover: 15
   To be honest maganda naman yung cover pero mas maganda Kung darker siya na pag nakita mo pa lang yung cover matatakot ka na.

Description: 16
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Cleanliness: 10
Maraming loophole and typo which is ok lang naman normal naman yun just remember a good story is an edited one. The same rule applies to horror Edit lang ng edit.

Writing style: 10
   I think horror is a perfect time to introduce onomatopoeia into your narrative napansin ko lang na wala masyadong  onomatopoeia.

Judge's Impression: 7
     Well pacing is the key  Violent opening scenes often don’t work as a writer bigyan mo ng pagkakataon ang reader na mag invest ng feeling sa main character, Give your character problems your reader can identify with. Give them struggles.Iwasan mong mag lagay ng sobrang takutan sa story, If you pile on one terrible thing after another, it’ll feel too absurd and audiences won’t buy it.  Don’t always reach for the obvious to scare your reader.

Reader Impression: 7
   There's a lot of room for improvement.

TOTAL: 83/100

Murder Sealed by intellect01

Title: 20
Gusto ko yung title choice talaga unang chapter palang pina alam na kong bakit yun yung title.

Book Cover: 18
   I like it kasi nasa dark side yung cover, cover pa lang alam mo ng horror suspense yung story.

Description: 12
   Ok naman siya pero parang common yung Ganon na style siguro kailangan pang kunting effort for this part pero don't get me wrong the story itself is interesting.

Cleanliness: 13
   Malinis naman ang pagkakasulat at madaling maintindihan, honestly hindi talaga ako expert dito.😂

Writing Style: 10
   I love the transition, nagustuhan ko talaga na sinimulan mo sya sa inbistigador na para iniimbitahan mo ang readers na mapaisip din.

Judge Impression: 8
   I like it when you start with shocking first scene to set the tone right away. Lalo na yung gruesome death nong killer kuno scene you did a great job to unsettle the readers. Looking forward sa character development.

Reader impression: 8
   As a reader nakaka ingayo ang mga unang kabanata I'm satisfied sa flow ng kwento it's interesting.

TOTAL: 89/100

RamApostol05
77/100

kendrafoe
70/100

Urvashi123098
81/100

Waenghyun2
91/100

fujoshi_ako
92/100

Letters At Dawn by herwrittenworlds

TITLE: 15/20

BOOK COVER: 15/20

DESCRIPTION: 12/15

CLEANLINESS: 13/15

WRITING STYLE: 8/10

JUDGE'S IMPRESSION: 8/10

READER'S IMPRESSION: 8/10
Ayos ang title mo, masasabi kong may connect sa kwento pero hindi nito naisisigaw ang mystery or horror genre. Ganoon din ang book cover mo. Sa description naman ay maisusuggest ko lang na alisin mo ang 'she developed feelings for the officer.' Magmumukha kasing romance ngunit nasa sa iyo pa rin ang desisyon. Good luck, Writer!

TOTAL: 79/100

Deceit by anonyglitch

TITLE: 19/20

BOOK COVER: 20/20

DESCRIPTION: 15/15

CLEANLINESS: 13/15

WRITING STYLE: 8/10

JUDGE'S IMPRESSION: 9/10

READER'S IMPRESSION: 8/10
Literal na literal 'yong gulo sa utak ko. Hindi dahil sa hindi ko maintindihan kundi dahil sa mga nangyayari. Sa synopsis pa lang ay mapapatanong ka na agad, eh. SINO?! HAHAHA. Tamang-tama talaga 'to sa mahihilig sa mystery. Anyway, maganda talaga ang story mo. Pati ang book cover at description. Good job and good luck!

TOTAL: 92/100

Furor: Bloodshed Level 1 by Tisayslayer

TITLE: 19/20

BOOK COVER: 18/20

DESCRIPTION: 13/15

CLEANLINESS: 14/15

WRITING STYLE: 9/10

JUDGE'S IMPRESSION: 8/10

READER'S IMPRESSION: 9/10
Ang unique ng title mo at kung ang usapan lang naman ay kung gaano ito ka-connect sa story ay connect naman talaga. Malinis ang pagkakasulat. May kaunting typo na sana ay magawa mo'ng i-edit. Pero sa ilang chapter na nabasa ko ay hindi ko masabing kakaiba ang story na ito pero aaminin kong nagustuhan ko. Good job and good luck!

TOTAL: 90/100

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