HI EVERYONE!! THANK U SO MUCH IF YOUVE MADE IT THIS FAR i would not have been able to do this without you all, genuinely seeing every comment and every vote gave me the strongest motivation ever to keep you entertained!! Making this book has been a hell of a journey and one of the greatest things i have ever done, so thank you so much!! AND THANK U ALL FOR BEING SO PAITENT AND ACTUALLY READING THE BOOK THIS FAR <333

When i made this book, i wanted to make it one of the longest fanfictions in the osc, and i think ive managed that pretty well!! I cannot thank you all enough, knowing that people are interested and enjoy my stories is the greatest gift i can ever receive ❤ 

Also if ur curious on my next book i will be frequently updating it is life and death!! New chapter should be posted very soon!!

sooo WHATS THIS CHAPTER ABOUT?? I wanted to share some original ideas and story lines that was originally going to be apart of the book! Such as concept art for things that didn't actually end up happening, some of which would have changed the storys outcome completely!!

Before we start though, if u have any questions about things that were on your mind about certain characters or the book itself, ask away!!

Just a disclaimer, if you are gonna go back to a chapter please dont spoil anything in comments!! This counts as hinting at any spoilers or making a comment but being like (warning for spoilers) i will have to delete ur comment sorry :(( i dont want to ruin anyones experience!!

(Btw if you have clicked on this chapter and havent read the book there are extreme spoilers so please be aware of that)

Now, lets get started with the first image!! I drew this before i created the book when i was coming up with an idea keep in mind these are old af 😭😭

so Tennisball was still responsible for twos arrival, but front row was only Grassy, Cloudy and Leafy

Yellowface still existed with free food, but also the losers were kind of insane too? I got rid of that idea pretty fast

Stapy and donut are the same!!

First ever concept art after the book was made!!! Ill explain whats happening here

-Rs is evil, but was supposed to join the others and help out. He was going to be in charge of fours side mainly and be the one to actually plan the whole attack on two at the end

-stapy is here with fries shovel, because i planned instead of fries helping free him, he would actually knock out/kill fries himself and take the shovel with him to escape

-announcer was going to be introduced, but i never got to this or saw much of a purpose

-tv, robot flower, and roboty were all going to go into twos office and find coinys files instead of fries, which was why robotflvwer was going to be made originally as they get found. Then, roboty was going to be decapitated in an execution

-tree is forced to continously take pills, i didnt plan why specifically but something along the lines of him betraying two? In some way or another, leading him to be constantly confused and dazed

Next image!!

This was when i was going to stick to golfball being kept evil. When i introduced blocky ORIGINALLY i was going to make her see his strong leadership as a threat and then kill him, this being the peak of her insanity and when she openly shows her insane side. Though, the other opportunity was to make blocky actually be a way to help her out of her bad mindset and him being the starting point of her recovery!

-she was going to create bomby into a vicious creature, almost like an unhinged animal (thats what the serum was)

-8-ball was going to have a major role, he was going to originally feed into her insanity and put her into an even worse state

The others are the same!!

Lots happening here!! Lets go through

-snowball is found by two in basketballs room, and he is forced to hurt/kill someone as two controls his hands

-saw dying, duh

-rs was originally going to plan with the debuters to pretend to go with two!! Everyone knew this plan and it was going to be them manipulating two, then betraying them when they need the debuters the most, hense "you think we like you?"

-loser with a chainsaw, not sure why

-trees insanity yet again, the drugs would have taken effect and he would have been hallucinating, i was very set on this idea

-roboty being decapitated, like in the first image

-syringe gun is what golfball was going to be using

idk half the shit going on in this image, the only thing i took away from it was the yoyle berry thing.  none of these had meaning, they were just small sketches to try and think of ideas

-robotys head was found by rs after he was decapitated, and he was going to use it as a night vision mask?

-bomby on a rampage after the serum is injected

-when rs was actually going to be good, he is seen here saving stapy and giving him a place to stay. Stapy and firey weren't going to be a group here

-tv just before he hurts tennisball, when he is being controlled using remote

-loser was the one going to be administrating trees pills, but when i got rid of this idea i still wanted to keep the idea of loser hurting tree which as you can tell i keptJAUVAVHSV

-blackhole surrendering to two

-leafy after she was hurt by blocky in the attack during the prison break, which i kept

-so with balloony this is also in the prison break, but pin actually gets shot and killed instead of being left behind

-so here rs is helping Fours side in the final battle, of course here tree and gelatin must have never left? but rs uses twos own side against them

I wanted to put this here because originally, these two were going to be a group! When book and cake got killed, i originally was going to make firey and cake get killed, because book had just lost saw and this would have been her breaking point, her feeling like everywhere she goes she just hurts others. She is by the cliff when match and shampoo come save her, and the three become a group

I then changed this to match and shampoo finding cake by the cliff instead, who was going to be the only survivor. I was going to make this into an opportunity for cake to grow into a stronger and more independent character, and the three would find golfballs lab (when the group isnt there) and give him cybernetic enhancements. Cake would then have a robotic eye and a robotic arm on his back, though i caved and then changed this to firey instead, this being the final idea

So this was when rs was in charge and tree, who i planned to be made into this killing bot after a while, to plant a bomb in the warehouse during a giant meeting between all the separate groups. Keep in mind this time golfball is dead and theres no "golfballs" group, theyre all kind of separated? This was going to be a giant death scene

-tree is seen here walking away from the explosion

-donut and fries are both alive and attended the meeting . They both survive because donut teleported them both in time

-rs is upset because tape is killed in this scene (they were good friends) as well and as the rest of his own team so he is extremely upset, telling everyone to leave

-lollipop dies here (jr is in the image) and so does onigiri

-cake is on fire, dead

-snowball and basketball are in the forest together and attend the meeting, he pushes her behind a crate before the explosion and the two survive

-id just like to point out now i dont have a scooby doo what blackhole is doing in half of these concepts HELP

I think i was supposed to post this and not the other robot flvwer..OOPS I JUST REALISED well anyways this came to me in a dream so i was like nice ill put that in control at some point and like 13 months later i did

Just a sketch of snare drum and the others in that underground area

No idea whats happening here

Very first book cover!! Its.. ugly..

The main idea i had when i made this book was literally just that donut had fours powers!! I think i made a book before this about that and like, published it? It only had 3 chapters but it was along the same lines as this, this was the cover for it. I deleted it after because i wanted to start again and so i made control

HELP WHY ATE THEIR LEGS SO LONAGAVHLAGCACPHA but yes um i cannot remember what this was about i made this in 2019 help BUT this was the original control el oh el

okay anyways so thats all the images! But heres a list of original concepts instead that didnt have images!!

-snowball was going to have twos powers instead of gelatin

-yf was going to meet pf and the two
would have combined

-a fire would have started in someones room, and tree would have been burned and this was when he become a killing machine?? Cuz surgery on him n stuff

-originally coiny was going to be the one to kill donut, not barfbag. Barfbag was actually going to be a genuine friend, and Coiny still had amnesia but he is unaware for a while. He is siding with two and tricks donut by asking him if he wants to help kill two. Donut agrees and this is when he gets caught out and donut is killed

-donut was going to escape but golfball kills him to steal his powers

-roboty can.. speak?!

-donut gets help from the other numbers, they give him their powers but its hard for him to control

-after book survives and firey and cake die, she is comforted by someone who dies shortly after (poor book)

-blackhole was going to find golfballs plans to kill blocky and control the others, but she blackmails him into shutting up

-instead of golfball stealing donuts powers, she was going to make him stronger with the serum and control him

-both naily and pt get kicked out, naily is killed and pt goes back to the base as usual

-instead price tag and naily find book

-fries kills pillow instead of firey, he keeps this a secret when he sees them in the future

-i originally made them have electric bands because coinys would activate and suddenly he would remember things. Donut caught onto this and tries to electrocute him to help him remember

-coiny and pin escape together

-coiny and pin actually die together because he refuses to leave her they both get shot in the head with the same bullet

And according to my notes, here are the original characters that were meant to be against two in the very end fighting against them!!

The group against two eventually:
Rs
Pf
Tape
Sc
Winner
Onigiri
PDA
Leek
Needle
Nickel
Tennisball
Snowball
Basketball
Book
Fries
Scissors
Anchor
Price Tag
Cloudy
Rf
Roboty
Tv
Donut
Gelatin
Barfbag
Stapy
Gaty
Naily