Highest points in introduction and tied for best grammar

You lost points in with your title and cover, it's not that it was bad, but I often found myself forgetting the title of your book compared to the other entries. Also in my opinion the title carried way more points than it should have, but unfortunately I had to judge based on criteria.

Also the competition was incredibly strong and there was a very narrow margin of the three winning books so I think you should be extremely proud of your work.