Reviewed by Key Keeper Kat CaliKat000

Author: Todom2
Title: The Blackout Storm
Genre: Science Fiction

**Is it bad that I made popcorn for this book?**

Cover: 3/5
I think your cover is a little dark, but I like that it foreshadows the of darkness you reference in you book. I think the font pin the book was a bad choice though. The don't needs to be enhanced. Larger. Fancier. 

Blurb: 1/5
I immediately saw grammar errors and spelling errors In your blurb which made me worried about the rest of the book. You should definitely check and proofread. The way some of it is worded is also confusing to read. 

Title: 3/5
I don't think the Title you have right now is the greatest fit, yes, your plot is about the storms but it's also about Riz finding out what is in the storm. It's about Riz' bravery and journey into the storm. 

Plot: 9/10
I love the detail and descriptions! Very appealing to the senses, your imagery is amazing. Your plot is so captivating, it's also very interesting and powerful. You drive the plot, I love that, keep up the great work!

Character Development: 13/15
I love the internal battles the main character has. It gives her a greater personality and the readers can relate. I do wish you would describe the main characters features, though. Or continue to restate them so the readers can visualize better.

Spelling and Grammar: 9/10
I was worried your work was going to be littered with spelling and grammar mistakes but when I was reading I found few errors. I was impressed by your grammar skills.

Overall: 9/10
I really like where this story is headed. I love the cliffhangers and how interesting it is. I have a feeling this is going to be a great book through and through.

Other Comments: 
That was the most intriguing, sit at the edge of my seat, popcorn worthy book I have ever read! I totally recommend this book to anyone who loves a book with intense, mysterious qualities!

**Throws popcorn at author for being so awesome!**

Kat❤❤