Rate: 9/10

Thoughts: I thought it was pretty good! But explain the characters a bit more so readers don't get confused. Also for the French man, put some translate next to his dialog. Like "French words" (translation) then paragraph. It just makes it easier for the reader to know what the character is saying and not everyone can speak french.

Others: I really do like the book so far. It is really descriptive and full of live. But I suggest when you spilt scene try indicating it with symbols or words so the reader knows the scene is different now but with the same character.

Author: V-lover_Africa