Writer : Miabookworm12
Reviewer : Shivani_SwaSan

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Cover :

The cover is simple and good which has been blended by the protagonist and the fonts. The choice of fonts was amazing! The only factor I think it lacked was the attractivity. No doubt, the cover's simplicity was enough for the plot you decided for your story, but I think it has scope to be more intriguing. All in all, a nice try at the cover but I think it has the potential to be better.

Title :

Somewhere, I felt like the title is focusing only on one particular period and not on the entire course of the story. But still, it goes well with your story and is intriguing too. So... a good try here

* Plot + Storyline :

The story mainly focuses on the journey of Dr Saumya Mathur and all the ups and downs that she faces. The story begins on an introductory-like note where we learn more about our female protagonist and her world, also noticed her bonding with her friend Surbhi and her late family, etc.

The blurb hooked me towards the story. Even if it gave out an idea of how the plot was going to be, the way you shaped your blurb up made me undergo many thoughts. In other words, it intrigued me. About the storyline, I like how smoothly everything has been written. I really felt bad for Saumya for going through so much but I also admired her for how strong she was even after losing her family, as she had to stay strong as she had Pia, a child who solely depended on her.

Even though Saumya's character was a little less lively (mostly because of what she went through), I was able to feel her emotions, and for that all credit goes to your writing style. I also liked Akash and Surbhi's characters for how they were there by their friend's side and even Pia's character (she's adorable!). And I also love how Dr Akshit Aggarwal is slowly making his way to her heart! Can't wait to read more of them.

So overall, I really enjoyed the plot and storyline ❤

Grammar :

Grammar was smooth, easy and very well-maintained. The dialogue delivery was also nice! The way everything was structured, the presentation, the narration, overall the story was very well-written. Even the sentence framation and vocabulary was good.

The only thing I felt was that some sentences were lacking some punctuations that were important.

For eg, instead of writing ["Don't worry okay it will all be good."], maybe you can add some necessary punctuation like, ["Don't worry, okay? It will all be good.]" It would make the sentences appear more convenient to the reader.

There was no spelling mistake or no fluctuation or any other error at all and if there were, they were pretty much negligible. So yes... you have a perfect grammar so keep it up! ❤

* Creativity :

Coming to creativity, no doubt the story was something fresh to read. But what I loved the most about the story is the characters. I believe that characters are like the souls of stories and emotions are the heart. And in your story, both of these were there. Even the originality of the story was nice.

Personally, I liked reading your story a lot! If in case you have any doubt regarding the review, plz feel free to ask me and I'll reply you asap.

So finally, it was a good story that had with a fresh plot, lovely characters and good balance of emotions! ❤ I hope the review was helpful to you.

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