Hi my second NaLu story I hope it's not as bad as the other...

Humming an unrecognisable tune by the now pale orange water oblivious to the pinks and yellows washing over the sky was where she had been stood for the past ten minutes. The past week had been more money lost than earned, pushing her into taking more missions to reach the large sum of jewels wanted to keep her flat. Now was the time to start saving for the next month of payment ... If only it wasn't so hard. Natsu had been slowly taking less and less missions with her making jobs harder. Lisanna had come back from the dead therefore celebrating was to happen. Of course this was a fairy tail celebration so the unthinkable would happen in the time spread of two weeks or so.
Sounds impossible to celebrate for so long. Actually the real thing that was impossible was Lissana coming back, but I was,  obvious. The story of how she was found is long and gruelling so I would bother explaining the whole thing. Her coming back was happy news, that is to everyone who knew her. Partying was fun at first however a party can't last forever much like an ice cream can't last without melting.
Okay bad comparison but you get it. Now the point of what I'm saying is the reason for the dropping numbers of missions taken with Natsu was because of lisanna and constant partying, to be truthful she missed him. Thoughts of the past week flashed through her mind before she made a loud sigh and began to walk back home. Not before a goodbye signalled to her from two boat men.

What do you think ? The chapters will defiantly not be this short I just want to know if this is a good idea for a story if not I won't continue. Please like and comment see you soon :)