So, the Friday before last, I got bored helping my mom with a garage sale, so I started to draw.

After about three hours with a sketch book and an ark kit, I ended up with this:

I can't draw hands, so my sister-in-law had to do the one you can see in the picture.

I still wasn't happy with it, though. I knew the drawing had potential, but I couldn't figure out why it didn't look right.

So, today I decided to redo the entire thing on the computer. And, after 12 hours on PaintTool SAI, I ended up with this:

I think it looks 100x better, but I feel like it could still use some work. I don't know, what do you guys think? Does it need more work? Is there anything I can do to make it better?

Post your opinions in the comments below. Thanks! 😊😁