🔪》Title, Cover, & Blurb

The title is capitalized correctly and it attracts readers to the story. I do agree that the title doesn't seem to fit the story. I'm sorry, I'm not great at coming up with titles so I don't have any suggestions for you. The cover fits the story and appeals to readers. The art on the cover is pretty! The blurb introduces the characters and the story very well. It draws readers in and makes them want to read the story.

🔪》Plot

The plot is clear and it's engaging. The story draws readers in and makes them want to keep reading. The mystery element is interesting and I'd like to see how it plays out. The plot is progressing at a good pace. The exposition introduces the characters, however, it could introduce the characters and the world better. Some characters are introduced more than others. I suggest including more information about Kai's situation. Why is his father so demeaning? Why did Kai stop playing violin?

🔪》Characters

As mentioned, some of the characters could be introduced better. The characters could also be described better. There are some descriptions included, but it's more of their clothing instead of their physical appearance. The images help the readers know what the characters look like, however, be sure to add the descriptions into the story as well. The characters' personalities are shown very well throughout the chapters. I liked the dynamic between Kai and Jamie as well.

🔪》Grammar/Spelling

I didn't notice any spelling errors in the chapters. There were a few spots where you didn't keep dialogue from a character on the same line as their action or something else they had said so it was a little hard to keep track of who was talking.

🔪》Writing Style

The writing style was consistent throughout the chapters, however, it could use some improvement. More descriptions need to be added to the story. Not just descriptions of the characters, but of the scenery as well. The images in the middle of the chapters are cool, but they interrupt the flow of the story a bit. You do an excellent job working information into the chapters and revealing the information to the readers. You also do a wonderful job showing the characters' personalities, thoughts, and feelings throughout the chapters.

🔪》Enjoyment

The story was definitely enjoyable and I would read on! I got so wrapped up in the story I couldn't believe I had read seven chapters already. I enjoyed the bonus chapter that gave the readers insight into Jamie's character and his side of the story leading up to running into Kai again. As mentioned, I enjoy the dynamic between Jamie and Kai! I would love to read more about them.

🔪》Overall

Overall, the book was an enjoyable read! The plot is interesting and hooks readers. I can't wait to see where the story heads and discover more about the mystery. The characters are also interesting and readers want to learn more about them. Be sure to add descriptions of the characters into the story. More information could also be added about Kai's situation. Also be sure to add in descriptions of the scenery. I am sorry I couldn't help you with your title predicament. I'm sure one will come to you soon! Good luck with your story!