Review on Book Lier by @Causers
Author: Causers
Reviewer: THEARMYBtS0

Title: 4.5 /5
 The title is just perfect as it can be as the story was about Jimin lying about his medical health so as per that it's perfectlygood going with the story.

Cover: 8/10
 The cover is normal nothing special about it, normal graphics yet I think it's good enough for the story as the plot is alsonothing much special, I will explain this in the plot. The cover can be somewhat changed so that it attracts people.

Blurb: 8.5/10
The word made for this book would be perfect... perfect not that perfect but good enough to read as a short story. The blurbwas not much revealing it was just on point like the way it should be.

First impressions: 3.5/5
Ok, this is because it was confusing, the chat didn't make any impact on me but as the story moved I somewhat understandit. In deeper, I will explain in the plot section.

Plot: 15.5/20
  Here comes the plot section let's go with what I mean with the plot is also nothing much special, The plotting of the storybegins with when Jimin went to the doctor I think so because before that anyone could guess and tell what was coming next itwas just a normal love story kinda things before the doctor part, going to eat ice cream, seeing snowfall together and thenthat line "Seeing snowfall together means getting old together until we have white hair" I mean ofc it's like a love story things,seeing the view sitting together so the story is normal nothing special much. Now let's go with why my first impression holdsfewer marks, tbh I thought after this chat u will explain or tell what happened after that ex- she kept the phone and thinkabout that online person etc... but it's a short story so it's fine. The chapters went different from the previous one the newchapter had nothing to do with the previous chapter as in the first chapter they were just chatting than in next they all ofsudden they were shown close no explanation how when what happened so that they are so close yet again keep in mind it's ashort story it's fair enough I think... hmm... I still want to know how can they cover this online meet so fast. I really feel ushould add something to explain their closeness like that because no one in the first or second meet would allow keeping afinger on his/her lips.

Grammar: 8.5/10
No words for grammar and vocabulary as I find it perfectly fine. Good flow with grammar. Keep it up.

Emotions: 8.5/10
All the characters didn't have much POV or thinking much yet I got to feel the emotions, reading the blurb I know about theJimin problem so I could feel when he said I will be with u always and when the girl asked him to look in her eyes and say thathe is not lying, are few emotions I liked a lot.

Character Development: 4/10
Hmm... the story is good but the character development I don't know what to say about that it didn't show any characterdevelopment as the story was represented by the 3rd person at very few points the characters were shown thinking otherthan that nothing made or showed the character development, that's why I have given 4 marks for that few momentscharacters were thinking.

Reader's enjoyment: 3.5/5
It was a great story to read for time pass, short story easy reading but yeah only loophole I feel is the readers will not feelmuch emotional attachment with the characters. Story writing is just not to tell the readers but to show them make themfeel the atmosphere which was lacking very much.

Overall: ⅘
It's good overall just emotions are the thing lacking I would recommend working on that, that's all other ways it's good enough.

Total: 92/100
 Thank you for choosing me as ur reviewer. I hope u will give attention to what Itold you also sorry if u feel it's harsh. It's just to increase ur writing skills.Have a Happy day/night ahead