•Title: 4.5/5
»The title "Grieve" effectively conveys the themes of the story, setting the stage for this story to likely involve a dark, sad and melancholic setting.
»While "Grieve" is fitting and descriptive, you have further enhanced the story by adding a nice subtile that is, "A story of loss and healing", which has a touch of originality.

•Cover: 3.5/5
»The cover of "Grieve" effectively sets a dark and sad tone with the girl's shadow sitting on the swing in between many trees
»The choice of artwork aligns well with the genre expectations of a Fiction.
»However, the small font size of the subtitle, detract from the overall professionalism. I hope you can try to consider about ensuring consistency in typography (font style and size) across the title and subtitle for a more polished look.

•Blurb: 5/5
»The blurb for "Grieve" effectively captures the essence of the story, introducing the settings of melancholy and grief for the central character.
»It intrigues readers with the promise of secrets to be unraveled and hints of interpersonal drama.
»The blurb is perfect with appropriate details yet still sounding intriguing.
Good job, dear author ✨

•Characters: 9/10
»The author masterfully crafts a cast of characters that resonate deeply with the themes of loss, healing, and resilience.
»Aster, the protagonist, the girl who lost her sister and is consumed by the grief, emerges as a poignant figure. The author skillfully and beautifully portrays Aster's emotional journey, capturing her vulnerability, unwanted grief, sadness, determination, and eventual sensitivity and depth. She is observant as she tries deciphering why the ladies would have gone inside the Kio cafe. She is hardworking, even though consumed by grief. Thus, it makes her a compelling centerpiece, anchoring the narrative with authenticity.
»Han, Aster's employer and a pivotal figure in her life, is portrayed with equal nuance.  He is another beautiful character created by the author. He is a lovely old man who is the grandfather figure in Aster's life. Though they're both told off to be grumpy but their loving equation for each other is what makes the story more realistic. Their beautiful relationship is tenderly depicted, offering a glimpse into themes of mentorship and unexpected connections.
» Athena, Aster's sister, who died in a tragedy is portrayed to be have been a magnificent young lady who didn't deserve to die young. Though deceased at the outset of the story, she remains a vivid presence through her diary entries and memories shared by Aster.
» Evan, Han's grandson, who kind of liked Aster at the first glance and tried flirting with her is a great addition to the story. His introduction adds intrigue and romantic tension to the narrative.

•Plot: 8/10
» The author crafts a compelling narrative centered around themes of loss, resilience, and the journey towards healing in this book.
»The plot unfolds with deliberate pacing, drawing readers into the emotional landscape of protagonist Aster's life following the tragic death of her sister, Athena.
»The story is anchored by Aster's profound grief, portrayed with raw emotion and introspection.
» Athena's diary is an important artifact that reveals secrets and unanswered questions surrounding her untimely demise. She mentions in it about being scared of getting killed by someone who fooled her, trapped her in like a prisoner add intrigue to the story, indicating that their is a backstory left to unfold.
» Daia, the fairy protector of Aster, is the fantasy element in the story and is very unique as compared to other fantasy stories, I've read. She becomes an unexpected companion to Aster, offering guidance to her.
»The plot is further enriched by the introduction of Evan, Han's charismatic grandson, whose burgeoning connection with Aster introduces a subtle romantic subplot.

•Grammar and Vocabulary: 4/5
»Your writing style includes  using of descriptive language to evoke emotions and set scenes giving proper emotional depth to the characters.
»Overall, the grammar and vocabulary are solid, contributing to a smooth reading experience.
»There are occasional minor errors and awkward phrasings that could be polished further, but they do not detract significantly from comprehension.

•Enjoyment: 4/5
» "Grieve" offers an emotionally resonant journey that invites readers into the intimate world of Aster as she navigates profound grief and unexpected avenues of healing.
»The book excels in its ability to evoke deep empathy and connection through Aster's character.
»The narrative pacing keeps the story engaging, gradually revealing clues and revelations that propel the plot forward while maintaining a sense of emotional depth and resonance.
»The blend of realism and fantasy enhances the novel's appeal, offering readers moments of escape intertwined with the exploration of grief and resilience.
»Readers seeking a novel that combines heartfelt emotion with elements of mystery, romance, tragedy and fantasy will find "Grieve" a rewarding and memorable literary journey.

•Overall: 4.5/5
»Overall, "Grieve" is a beautiful story, showcasing the author's narrative prowess. It offers the readers an immersive experience that lingers long after the final page.
»It is a story that resonates with its emotional authenticity and compelling exploration of personal healing amidst adversity.
»Throughout the book, the author demonstrates a keen understanding of storytelling, balancing moments of introspection with narrative momentum.
»The plot unfolds organically, revealing layers of character development and thematic exploration that culminate in a poignant exploration of loss, love, and the resilience of the human spirit.
»Each character, from Aster's raw grief to Han's quiet strength, contributes uniquely to the tapestry of healing and hope woven throughout the narrative.

•Personal Note:
Dear Author, your book is a book that I would gladly read even after completing the review. Everything is just so beautifully done that I am unable to stay away from this masterpiece. With a little bit of editing here and there on some minor issues, your book is going to achieve excellence. Keep writing such beautiful works ✨

Reviewer: DazzlingVee_
Author: vrbnwriting

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