Dive into "Copper pipes" a thrilling journey through suspense, romancs and intrigue with a rollercoaster of twists and turns in the life of Lada.

♦Cover: 4.5/5
The cover page of "Copper pipes" features a girl's image.
It is simple, with the title and author's name clearly visible.
It also clearly describes that the Story's main protagonist is a girl.

♦Title: 2.5/5
The title "Copper pipes" is good, but I feel it does not match the plot. It's a different and intriguing title but I feel that it doesn't fully capture the intrigue compared to the well-structured plot of the story.

♦Blurb: 4.5/5
•The blurb creates intrigue and sets up the reader's expectations for a mystery that evolves around Lada, the main character.
•It gives a idea of what she is going to face and also sets up a base for a mystery and thriller filled romance book.
• Readers would totally be intrigued to read by the blurb and would have an idea about the thrill they're going to experience.
• The beautiful touch of wordplay made the blurb better and would surely draw readers in!

♦Characters: 8/10
•The characters are well-developed and relatable, each with their unique traits and personalities. Each character has their own depth and naturality in them.
•The interactions between all the characters felt spot on, they are the heart and soul of the narrative.
•From the resilient yet vulnerable Lada to the charming and mysterious PJ, every character resonates with authenticity. The dynamics between them are intricately woven, allowing readers to form genuine connections as they accompany them on their journey.
•Lada, with her complex blend of strength and vulnerability, serves as a compelling focal point for the story. Her journey is both captivating and relatable, drawing readers into her world as she navigates the twists and turns of fate.
•PJ exudes an aura of mystery and intrigue, his enigmatic presence adding an extra layer of suspense to the narrative. His interactions with Lada are fraught with awkwardness and chemistry.
•Tory and Tom provide much-needed warmth and humor amidst the tension, their unwavering loyalty and friendship serving as a beacon of hope in the darkness.
Each character, whether major or minor, contributes to the rich tapestry of "Copper Pipes," making it a truly immersive reading experience.

♦Plot: 7/10
• The plot is well-structured with suspenseful twists and turns, keeping readers engaged throughout. It is absolutely thrilling and mysterious.
• I really loved how the author added pictures to describe things.
•But, at some points I felt that the story was cut off from emotions, meaning that it was AI written. I am not sure if it was AI or written by self, but adding more emotions as well as dialogues to the story would be a lovely enhancement.
• The lead actress acting tough and then the role being given to Lada, PJ's entry, Lada's shy nature, Tory and Tom's friendliness. Tom's humor, everything was written quite well.
• The introduction to the past in the latest chapter, was a great addition to the story and gave readers more insight into the lives of our characters.

♦Grammar & Vocabulary: 5/5
•I am very impressed by the author's use of words. The vocabulary is simple yet enigmatic drawing the readers in. There are literally very little or no mistakes in the grammar.
•The grammar and vocabulary are beautifully expressed and understandable maintaining clarity throughout the narrative.
• The book feels natural to read and the writing style of the author is amazing.

♦Enjoyment: 3/5
The story is still unfolding, and there are many things yet to be revealed but still reading this book was a really enjoying experience. The detailed paragraphs were really well-written that at no point the reader might feel bored of the story. 
But, adding more dialogues to the story could enhance the fun element of the book and would allow readers to enjoy the story a bit more.

♦Overall : 3/5
••The entire book was quite enjoyable and thrilling, it is a rollercoaster of suspense, romance, and intrigue, keeping readers hooked from start to finish.
• Each character is meticulously crafted with depth and nuance, making them relatable and compelling.
•The interactions between characters are authentic and dynamic, adding layers of complexity to the storyline.
•The inclusion of images to enhance descriptions adds a unique visual dimension to the narrative, immersing readers further into the story's world.
•While the emotional depth of the story feels lacking, recent chapters delving into the characters' pasts have added complexity and depth to the storyline.

♦Additional question: If your hook engages potential readers or not?
Despite minor areas for improvement, "Copper Pipes" remains a gripping and unforgettable read, with well-developed characters and a compelling plot. If you add more dialogues and emotional depth to the book and it's characters, I feel you will be able to attract a lot of readers.

Reviewer: DazzlingVee_
Author: beArishmood

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