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These are the result of all the fantasy entries. Now be warned points and mark doesn't mean your book wasn't worth a read. It's just a preference. Feedback, comments and review shouldn't put you down. A number is just a number. Good job to all authors, who joined this award.

please note that some of these comments and reviews were done the moment they do and it won't matter if you change the name, the content or the cover of your book when the result has already been sent.

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Author:ย EmmaWrites1
Judge:ย Bridget_Boyd
Title: THE SINS OF THE LOVERS
Genre: Teen Fiction
Score: 75/100
Comments: The main area of concern is the grammar and spelling section. You can see many capitalisation errors and spelling, as well as a lot of grammar errors. The story was a bit messy. One moment, I'll be reading Alara's thoughts. And the next, it's suddenly Vedat's. The dialogue is a bit worrisome too. Some of the dialogue was weird and didn't seem fitting. Character development was somewhat fine. Couldn't see much of it because I read only until chapter five for this award. But I have a feeling I would come back to it again, for I've grown fond of the story. I honestly love the characters and their relationship. It's safe to say I do ship Alara with Vedat. So let the "VeAra" ship sail! Reading her brother's side of the story was fun too. It has a different tone but it was nice.

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Author:ย Kikibtsstan
Judge:ย Bridget_Boyd
Title: Mystical Mutant
Genre: Teen Fiction
Score: 79/100
Comments: Okay, this was one fun book. The main focus for improvement would be the writing style. This book delivers a huge amount of telling that I consider a tad bit slobby and very little amount of showing. I can see and imagine the scene taking place quite fine. But I couldn't feel what the characters feel nor could I vividly see through their eyes. Some grammatical errors exist throughout the book. Punctuation, spelling, and grammar, do keep an open eye on it. The story was intriguing and fun to read. The characters were great. Jack and Dylan, despite being almost background characters, I think they are both my comfort characters. I enjoyed the book very much and damn, after the end of chapter 5, I had to continue reading after this. Just because you made me go all giddy inside.

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Author: Ayeeshat1520
Judge:ย sataeris
Title: The Love Spell
Genre: Teen Fiction
Score: 85/100
Comments: First of all, the cover, well I think it doesn't really look that much attractive. It can be done better to catch the attention of readers more easily. And the title is exciting. The story has a gripping start and is very much interesting. In fact, I have never come across such a story. Throughout the chapters that I needed to read in this award, I could assume a few things about the upcoming chapters but I didn't really see any plot development. Though the chemistry between Joey and Skylar is marvellous! I like how you added some 'not so usual' words, just made your descriptive writing better. There was a good balance between the inner and outer conflict. Most importantly the best out of all is the author's creativity!

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Author:ย waterandfire_xox
Judge: sataeris
Title: Toxicity
Genre: Teen Fiction
Points: 86/100
Comments: The cover is alluring, however, the title isn't very special. The blurb is quite appealing, written in a suspenseful way which definitely charms the readers. The spellings and punctuations are perfect. I love the chemistry between Aiden and Aaliyah! Unique in their own kind. Their dilemmas are presented very enticingly and the descriptions are also very easy to grasp. Though I didn't really see the plot develop till how much I read it. They did become closer but not in a positive way. I would love to see them clear out their problems and understand each other. Overall it got me engrossed and is definitely enjoyable!

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Author:ย Kathy_Marwin
Judge:ย anythinguptomylevel
Story Title: Chaos Begins
Genre: Teen fiction
Points: 88/100
Comments: I should say the plot development is amazing. The author's descriptions are good, to be honest, but at some points, if the descriptions are more appealing or perceived it would have been better. Just my opinion as a judge! The vocabulary and grammar are nice. Slight errors in punctuation and word construction are noticeable. The author's writing flow is okay too. The character Remi has got some serious issues, I guess that's where the creativity of the author takes its part. Seriously I am enjoying the story so far!

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Author:ย Bombshellsmith
Judge:ย anythinguptomylevel
Story Title: Dormitory Bait
Genre: Teen fiction
Points: 89/100
Comments: Creativity is on another level. I love how the characters take their parts subtly and in little bits and pieces but not in a rush straightaway. The descriptions are great. They are beautiful and it brings a sense of reality to them. The plots are written well. So far so good. I enjoyed each and every part of it.

Author:ย _Ash_wonder
Judge:ย Bridget_Boyd
Title: Not So Imaginary
Genre: Teen Fiction
Score: 89/100
Comments: This book... it's sooo good. It hits you even from the prologue. The first chapter, starts a bit slow, taking its time to introduce the daily life of a girl I like to call, Sandy the Great Dense. If you give it a read, you'll understand it perfectly. I think the plots, the characters, it's all very great. I enjoyed it so much. It's one of the great fun books to delve into, to be honest. I could see some grammatical errors sometimes and that's not a surprise because I hardly found a book that's flawless. It's a normal occurrence. This book delivers quite a few telling, but it was written nicely. I don't really mind it. The only downfall of this book is that, unlike the other books that I'm judging for this genre, this one hasn't had any new uploads for me to catch up on after this award. As I said, I enjoyed it very much and I'm fairly very intrigued to read more.

Author:ย HappyEndingWriter
Judge: sataeris
Title: There's Only You
Genre: Teen fiction
Points: 89/100
Comments: The cover was well fitted and the title is nice but can be made better as it's a little common name among books. The blurb was very well written and definitely made me excited for the story! Loved the lively characters and their dilemmas, a total teen fiction! Happy that they finally got justice in the end. The was a clash of feelings and wrecking emotions but everyone played a great role to stick together till the end. Overall a humorous and adventurous story with engaging descriptions! Totally enjoyed it!

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Author:ย strawberry1d
Judge:ย anythinguptomylevel
Story Title: The Smirk of an Oracle
Genre: Teen fiction
Points: 93/100
Comments: I guess the story suited more like in the Fanfiction genre than in the teen fiction genre! I love each and every character, makes me want to read and learn more about them. The descriptions are extremely vivid. The author could have used a lot of space after a particular POV but is not likely to start a new paragraph thereafter finishing the POV part.

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Author:ย WhispersToTheStxrs
Judge:ย Bridget_Boyd
Title: The Search for Serenity
Genre: Teen Fiction
Score: 94/100
Comments: Girl. Woman. Calm down. Who told you to write a book that good? I almost forgot that I was judging. I could have sworn, half the time, I thought I was reading a successfully published book. The title was beautifully perfect. The blurb was amazing. The cover is perfect but doesn't attract me much. There are minor errors in terms of spelling and grammar. Though, it's hardly noticeable, if you don't look closely. The characters, all of them, were real and special. At least, they feel that way. I love the friendship between Jade and Alice. I love the relationship between Alice and her mum. I even love the possible friendship between her and Dante. And of course, I love the relationship development between Alice and Toby. The dialogue in every scene was perfectly delivered. Your writing style is needless for me to say, it's flawlessly beautiful. The only downside is I hardly have any critique to give. I almost feel upset that I only need to read 5 chapters. The book has some sort of magic pull in it, urging one to continue reading the next page each time. I'm very sure, I'll go back to it after this. Well done on writing such a captivating book.

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Author:ย IcecreamSundae5
Judge: sataeris
Title: A whole new world
Genre: Teen Fiction
Points: 96/100
Comments: Firstly, the cover. It's nice but I don't really like those dotted prints, you can just use a vector picture, with much larger shapes. The title also sounds well. But what captivated me was the blurb! Totally the first few lines made me think something but after reading it fully I was thrilled! The characters are so original. Like, Zee feels so relatable and real! Love her relationship with Nick, a perfect pair. The descriptions are fabulous but the most important part which actually made this book ten times better is your presentation of inner conflict. Love how you expressed her thoughts, feelings and troubles at every point. Feels like I am playing the role of Zee! Honestly a first-rated book! Something that one will get attached to and enjoy every moment!

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Author:ย Iskipp_U
Judge: anythinguptomylevel
Story Title: Vote the Bitch For Prom Queen๐Ÿ‘‘
Genre: Teen fiction
Points: 97/100
Comments: This is the best story I read so far! Extremely intriguing and appealing. Being a judge, I was trying hard to point out mistakes and was strictly overviewing if there were any but to my surprise, this book is one of the best under the teen fic category! I seriously enjoyed each and every character's roles and thoughts. The author really knows about the exact plot development. A mind-blowing story. Worth reading it!!!

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