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Here are the result of short stories and poem entries. Most of the comments were critics, please take them lightly and don't get yourself hurt by words of suggestion and points out.ย It's just a preference. Feedback, comments and review shouldn't put you down. A number is just a number. Nevertheless, good job to every contestantย who joined this award.ย 

please note that some of these comments and reviews were done the moment they do and it won't matter if you change the name, the content or the cover of your book when the result has already been sent.

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Author:ย Olivia_Benedetti
Judge: _sashi
Title: Finding Myself
Genre: Short Story
Points: 47/100
Comments: An emotional rollercoaster about the author's journey through the ups and downs of a breakup.

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Author:ย s0giia
Judge:ย _sashi
Title: Of Stars and Shadows
Genre: Short Story
Points: 68/100
Comments - A beautifully written piece of work about two destined soulmates, even though not real, it makes the readers feel what the MC feels.

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Author:ย Definitelyactor
Judge:ย btslilsis___07
Title: A Collection Of Reveries
Genre: short story
Points: 70/100
Comment: I don't like the title that much and the cover was too plain and simple. It didn't attract my eyes enough to check it out. The blurb wasn't as good and satisfying as I wanted it to be. There are some grammar and spelling mistakes. The plot development was good but the creativity flowing in the book wasn't good enough. I think the book needs a little more work.

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Author:ย waterandfire_xox
Judge:ย EmmaWrites1
Title: Toxicity | 18+
Genre: Short story
Points: 75/100
Comments: It was a great attempt at book writing a somewhat romantic book. But I couldn't see any moral in this, it was just clearly about sex. I mean short story simply means fewer words with a message. Something that this story lacks. Total of 15 parts and nothing feels connected. Characters I couldn't connect with. It was not a short story in my opinion but purely a short series. There's a difference. The cover and title were a great match. The blurb is perfect. The grammar is good. Your writing style is nice. Overall judgment, if you're a fan of smut and mature books, you can read the book. I suggest you try working more on plot development and creativity. This is not in any way to offend you. It's purely a judgement laid with suggestions.

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Author:ย _jugnuu
Judge:ย _sashi
Title: Through Her Eyes
Genre: Short Story
Points: 78/100
Comments: A really touching story, even though short, enough to make the reader's heart melt with the number of emotions packed up in it.

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Author:ย croodsgirl
Judge:ย btslilsis___07
Title: Wait! I wrote that?
Genre: short story
Points: 79/100
Comment: Everything was good. The work was nice in beginning, but as I start reading further it become a little rough and the character development wasn't really good. There were some spelling mistakes throughout the book. it was quite lengthy and not very entertaining. Other things were good. It's just that the concepts were a little boring and couldn't keep me hooked to keep reading.

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Author:ย Snowheart19__3
Judge:ย _sashi
Title: Cierra's Tale
Genre: Short Story
Points: 79/100
Comments: A motivating tale enlightening the struggles and battles women have yet to face through a young girl's means.

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Author:ย Rvelra
Judge:ย btslilsis___07
Title: The Murder Of Alastair Lysen
Genre: short story
Points: 80/100
Comment: Nice title. Beautiful cover. But the blurb wasn't good and satisfying. Excellent grammar, there are no spelling mistakes. The plot development needs a bit more work though.

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Author:ย originalgrandma_2_0
Judge:ย EmmaWrites1
Title: Painting words
Genre: Poetry
Points: 81/100
Comment: So, I went through the poetries. They are simply woven with beautiful words, with no confusion in trying to understand them. But the cover is what you had to work on. There's not much creativity in this. It was less than my expectations. You can maybe try to brew some factual topics. The writing style of your poetry is also something you have to work on.

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Author:ย wild_imaginator16
Judge:ย EmmaWrites1
Title: Those Unsaid Words
Genre: Poetry
Points: 89/100
Comment: You have an enormous talent for capturing women with your poetries. The title and cover were perfectly matched. You're creative. Plot development is strong but you can try to improve your skills by improving your writing style. The best one from your shelf is the Dreams of the women prisoner. I felt connected to your words, and what you wanted to say through those woven phrases. Alone, is what got me goosebumps. You have a great art of reflecting the patriarchy and rights for women. All the best for the future.

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Author:ย Iskipp_U
Judge:ย btslilsis___07
Title: Reality Bit Me
Genre: short story
Points: 89/100
Comment: Very interesting story. Great book title and concept. I didn't like the cover that much. I think it could be more creative and attractive. Everything was clear but there were a few spelling mistakes. Other than that, all the other thing was good. Creativity and character development were just great.

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Author:ย Bookish1011
Judge: EmmaWrites1
Title: Humming quietly
Genre: Poetry
Points: 96/100
Comments: I must say I liked your poetries so damn much. Those one-sided love feelings, it's like I felt it through my nerve. I was deeply shaken by how delicately you've woven the thread of lines. If I chose the best from your shelf it'd be 'one-sided lover ', beloved, smile, and I'm sure your other work is worth reading just as these picks of mine. The plot development is nice. It mirrors your creativity. You are a creative person. I feel like your poems are comparable to some classic lovers. I'm in love with it. The title is good and the cover adds spice to it. What disappointed me is that you haven't added anything to the blurb. Just a single line, saying, 'A book on poetry & thoughts'. All the best for future endearment.

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