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Here are the result of the fanfiction entries. Please take the comments and critics lightly and don't get hurt by words of suggestion and points out. It's just a preference. Feedback, comments and review shouldn't put you down. Always remember that a number is just a number. Nevertheless, good job to every contestant who joined this award.

please note that some of these comments and reviews were done the moment they do and it won't matter if you change the name, the content or the cover of your book when the result has already been sent.

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Author:ย -xaurora
Judge:ย btslilsis__07
Title: aftermath: life debt
Genre: Fanfiction
Score: 67/100
Comments: it's my second time judging this book and I don't mind it. I read it again, for the second time. The character development is very odd. I couldn't understand it. I think the writer should change his/her writing style. I think that will help her/him a bit more in making the book better for fellow readers.

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Author:ย CheriiesBerries
Judge:ย btslilsis__07
Title: Your eyes
Genre: Fanfiction
Score: 73/100
Comments: The title is very simple for the story character. Character development was moving in a negative direction. I think as you are making fanfiction, to build a character, you have to take their name, their face, and the way they behave and act, so, you should also adapt to their nature. It would make development more genuine and specific in my opinion, in a matter where no one would point out "I can't imagine him doing this," and even if you want to make the character go in a negative way, you should try to do it in a more neat way. You should make it a little positive too because in negativity there is always a little tint of positivity. I think It'd be better that way.

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Author:ย strawberry1d
Judge:ย btslilsis__07
Title: Seesaw || A Min Yoon-gi ร— reader ff ||
Genre: Fanfiction
Score: 73/100
Comments: There are some spelling mistakes throughout the chapters and the blurb didn't describe the story very well. I give it 13/15 in terms of creativity. I would have given it more marks but chose to cut it down by 2 marks for overdoing some parts. The physical contact between the characters was really fast. Almost unrealistic. They meet and then the next second, they were making out. It was really fast but the concept of twins was amazing.

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Author:ย ViniShah2
Judge:ย btslilsis__07
Title: When his heart felt Love
Genre: Fanfiction
Score: 75/100
Comments: I think the title could be more impressive. The blurb should be more detailed. There wasn't suspense in the last chapter. It lacks the push for readers to read further. It doesn't matter how good your story was written, the thing that matters more is how u create suspense and hook with your writing skills. The book was full of inspiration and sensible sense. I love it.


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Author:ย OurFinalSpark
Judge:ย sataeris
Title: Our Final Spark
Genre: Fanfiction
Score: 80/100
Comments: Overall a very enjoyable and interesting story. But there is no proper description at first. It is the most important thing that attracts the reader's attention. Also at some parts, I got a little confused as so many things were happening. There is also an absence of inner conflict which is more important than outer conflict.

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Author:ย Artemis899
Judge:ย sataeris
Title: A Faded Miracle
Genre: Fanfiction
Score: 82/100
Comments: The story was quite adventurous with daring characters. But the cover wasn't good at all. Like no effort was put into making it. Just a random picture and text and the picture also doesn't have the correct lighting. Also, there were lots of actions happening around which is kind of confusing. I suggest making the pace a little slow. And pay attention to the inner conflicts of the characters; their thoughts, goals and plans. Otherwise, the plot was very thrilling and very original.

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Author:ย audreysanders009
Judge: sataeris
Title: Iridescent
Genre: Fanfiction
Score: 92/100
Comments: This story was very realistic, and totally presented all the issues that people go through in real life. Loved how the characters were portrayed, the uniqueness of Rhea and the kindness of Tony and Pepper. The title is a new kind but the cover doesn't look so attractive. As the theme of the story, it would be better if you use some bold colours and different background pictures. Or like sci-fi colour schemes. The blurb was very thrilling and lured me in. And the writing was flawless. It had the perfect pace which helped me to understand things easily. I am glad that Rhea accepted herself and learnt about the outer world so quickly and knew how to act around people of various kinds. A strong character. The words are also used cleverly at parts which are appreciated.

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Author: dracosnuteater
Judge:ย sataeris
Title: The Killer's Love
Genre: Fanfiction
Score: 93/100
Comments: A distinctive and sensational story with the right balance of everything. The cover needs to be improved as it doesn't fit the story's theme. Some unusual words can also be used to make it more intriguing. But originality and creativity are something that needs to be greatly appreciated.

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Author: Rvelra
Judge: Bridget_Boyd
Title: The Apartment
Genre: Fanfiction
Score: 95/100
Comments: Shut up. This is so good. It's perfect. The title was fine because it was the whole ordeal of the book anyways. The cover was fine too. The blurb was freaking interesting and it made the story sounds intriguing. The grammar and spelling were rather spot-on. I couldn't notice any mistakes while reading it. The writing style was beautiful. I love it. The plot was just amazing. I enjoyed the book very much. Theo and Hermione were quite the duo. Despite only reading till chapter 5, I already know that this book deserved more reads. I have nothing to critic in the author's writing. I find it all amazing and engaging.ย 

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