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Here are the result of the action entries. Most of the comments were critics, please take them lightly and don't get yourself hurt by words of suggestion and points out. Remember not to let feedback, comments and review put you down. A number is always going to be just a number. Nevertheless, good job to every contestant who joined this award. (also please don't mind me ranting.)
please note that some of these comments and reviews were done the moment they do and it won't matter if you change the name, the content or the cover of your book when the result has already been sent.
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Author:ย anythinguptomylevel
Judge:ย Bridget_Boyd
Title: LYRA
Genre: Action
Score: 76/100
Comments: First of all, the book was a bit weird for me. From the cover and the blurb, I was expecting a hardcore action-packed book. But no, that wasn't what was given to me. The writing style is a bit problematic too. I wished it was a bit more beautifully written. I wished the plot was written with care instead of just dumped into it. The speech and dialogue were fine but doesn't sound very natural. I can understand what was written just fine but some part of the book was a bit sudden and out of place and some were unnecessary. The author probably needs to re-read and redo the book again later if she wished to make it more attractive to her fellow readers. She lacks the hook that pulls a reader's attention to the point that it amazes them. Honestly, it was a fine book. I can understand it and I was told what the goal of the protagonist was, but it wasn't exactly written to achieve it, instead, the book's plot was rather a bit messy and the things written don't feel connected to the plot. I just wished it was written in better ways. A more alluring reader kinda way. Still tho, good job to the author.
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Author:ย Ibirockerchick
Judge:ย Bridget_Boyd
Title: Love; The Silent Killer
Genre: Action
Score: 85/100
Comments: This is a classic of someone turning mentally ill after a horrible childhood. I don't know how others would see the protagonist, but in my eyes, she's crazy and perfect for the genre. Her mind was so twisted that she couldn't see reasons; nothing apart from her belief that she trusted was right. Not gonna lie, I couldn't help but facepalm when she made a decision or conclusion that she thought was right. Which is not, obviously. I mean, come on, it's a mad person's decision. It's obviously not right. I find her rather unlikeable, mainly because of her choice of action. Still tho, I can't fully blame her when she's clearly deranged. The writing style was fine. It's nothing fancy but it's readably written just right. The buildup in the plot was great but the blurb only blot its ink to the pages around the last part of chapter 5. Which is good. It made me want to read more.
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Author:ย cathannesweetflowr
Judge:ย Bridget_Boyd
Title: Eunoia - Between Feuds As A Fake Heiress
Genre: Action
Score: 88/100
Comments: I have a high belief that I'm the only one who has ever read this book. I feel like I was the only one voting and each chapter's view is less than 5. Such a shame. It was a good book. Well written and almost fit to perfection. The blurb and title foreshadow what may happen in the future, though, I haven't reached that part yet, this is quite a pleasant book to dive into. The prologue introduced us to Tristan and Melody. It was short and sweet and I could also see a few of Tristan's traits in it. He seems to be a bit more like a comfort character who hid his true thoughts and feelings behind his smiles. Melody, though exists in the prologue, wasn't the protagonist in the book. It was actually another girl named Isabelle, a good friend of Tristan who ended up entangling herself with matters she have absolutely no idea about. She couldn't tell a single soul about what happened, and to be honest, if only she'd told him, I think it would have been a better choice. Though we may only know if we read past chapter 5 and onwards to the end. There's also another character in the book named Stephen. He's just as interesting as the other two. All the characters actually feel important and significant. No one was out of place. I would very much like to know what happened next. It's a very intriguing book.
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Author:ย LianneWriter
Judge:ย Bridget_Boyd
Title: TRIP
Genre: Action
Score: 90/100
Comments: Let me tell you. I hate you. Your brilliance in setting the mood in Chapter 1, bro, never have I ever cried reading chapter 1. This is a first. And goddammit, it hurts. As it should be. You have no idea how many times I screamed, "No! No fucking way!" reading just that chapter. The author is a great writer, as you can see, she manages to make you feel things, despite not yet connecting to her characters. She was great at setting the mood to create the feeling she wanted to fill in the chapter. And it goes on. The story takes a turn into an unexpected action adventure around chapter 4. The characters she introduced are all interesting. And I couldn't help but love her new introduced character, Xander. He's an absolute ice-cold prince, no doubt. Can't wait to know what would happen next.
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Author:ย -sylver
Judge: Bridget_Boyd
Title: Hidden Intentions
Genre: Action
Score: 97/100
Comments: This book is beyond the word "brilliant." The story was engaging and fascinating. The first chapter was enough to make you stay, it makes you squirm in your seat in the first half, but that's nothing surprising. The second half of the first chapter would pull your attention to it and make you alert as you turned the page to find out more. Chapter three was the start of when they were other characters involved and when head bobbing started to take turns in the book. The author did amazing writing her work. Everything was absolute perfection. The dialogue felt real and wasn't pushed. The chemistry between characters was built carefully and naturally. Everything felt just right. The author's writing style is rather beautiful. I have no critique to give the author for her work. I enjoyed the book very much.ย
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