I apologise for keeping up with the review chapter; I was quite preoccupied with finishing up some tasks connected to my studies. I was also planning another new talk book, which I hope to release soon and invite everyone to participate in.

Well, let us dive into the chapter:

►Judge: Shinhaari

╰┈➤Author: strawberry1d

╰┈➤Book Name: Echo in the Wind

▸Title:(10 /10)

"Echo in the Wind," the title, is pertinent to the story. It's unique and attention-grabbing. After reading the story, the title will have a lasting emotional impact on readers, making it linger in their heads for a long time.

▸Book Cover:(9/10)

The book cover is beautiful. Jung Kook on the cover portrays what he is characterised as in the initial chapters, who is depressed, which gives off a gloomy effect, so it leads readers to interpret it as a sad story. The font used is easy to read. The way the title is written is appealing and positioned properly.

The wavy effects of the front remind us of the sound that repeats like a sound wave in our minds. The whole cover is a dark ocean blue colour, which helps readers draw closer to the characters as the main conversation takes place at the beach, which is a memorable part of the story.

▸Description:(10 /10)

The description summarises what the book is all about and intrigues the readers to explore further.

"Perhaps the echoes of people"—that line is a clever use of words that attracted me a lot.

▸Plot:(19 /20)

It's a distinctive plot and not an overused trope, as far as I read. The idea of the plot in writing is tricky to execute as it entangles the different characters of Iseul and Yoona, for which you did your best. It confused me, but reading it twice made me comprehend how the plot goes because everything is well written in a flow that makes the story easier to read without any bafflement.

▸Writing style: (24/25)

The writing style is promising and descriptive, as it helps to illustrate the imagery to create a picture in the mind of the reader. The characters were well-written regarding their emotions, which helped me connect to them in depth. It felt like I lived in that book.

The dialogue tags and punctuation were perfect. There were no grammatical errors to be found. The pace was normal without rushing the story, and everything was explained perfectly. The usage of vocabulary is good, and the vivid verbs used helped to show the character's actions clearly and to paint a picture in the reader's mind.

The paragraphing technique you used was perfect; it was broken down into the correct number of sections, which helped me read further and visualise the character's thoughts.

In chapter 9,

In the earthly realm two weeks later. This particular paragraph was repeated twice and

In Chapter 10,

To entertain your beloved fans, the Swith line was repeated three times. It confused me a bit, so do check that out.

▸Character Development: (20/20)

The characters were portrayed well, which enhanced the plot, and I loved the way you conveyed everything about the characters' thoughts. I loved the bickering between Gustav and Iseul. Even though Jungkook's aunt Hari played a small role, you described that character briefly, and she helped Jungkook a lot. I admire the character of Iseul a lot, as she respected Yoona's wishes.

The emotional fluctuation that Jungkook went through is well characterised, as is how he ended up being optimistic after being depressed.

▸Overall Enjoyment/Final Impression: (18/20)

I enjoyed reading it a lot, and as I said, I felt like I lived in that book. Everything was laid out perfectly, and the only thing that confused me was the in-between reality chapter, which I made clear by reading further. The soul swap of Yoona and Iseul for the mission was a little bit difficult to comprehend to know what was going on, but reading it again helped me to understand better. I loved the ending, which was a brief conversation between Jungkook and Yoona.

With the limited chapters written, you executed the plot well, which is indeed difficult to do given the panorama genre, and you characterised the characters reasonably without any lacking.

▸TOTAL: 111/115

╰┈➤Author: crimsonbrine

╰┈➤Book Name: Truth in a Masquerade

▸Title:(10/10)

The title is ideal for the story, and it informs what the story is about. It is indeed unusual and attention-grabbing.

Book Cover:(8/10)

The cover looks great, and the font used to write the title is attractive and positioned in a way that it stands out, but something is off. The subtitle is a little blurred and can't be seen properly. The words used in the subtitles are powerful and fascinating.

▸Description:(10/10)

The description summarises what the characters and the story are about. You briefed me without giving away the story. The opening line is remarkable, and it increases our curiosity.

▸Plot:( 20/20)

It's a distinguished judicial plot, and it raises inquisitiveness as we flip across the chapters. You laid it out perfectly, without any loopholes. You perfectly characterised everything.

▸Writing style: (24.5/25)

Your writing style is incredible and descriptive. Your vivid use of verbs shows the character's actions completely, which helps us visualise in our minds like these. "Index finger hooked up in the air, knuckle pressed against the wood."

The way you sentence the structure is flawless and keeps up the reader's interest, like "A wispy cloud of vapour escaped," "research funding removed on account of crossing a cow with an octopus," and many more, which attracted me a lot. There were no grammatical errors to be found.

The way you use the vocabulary is tremendous, but some readers might find it difficult to toggle between searching for the meaning and reading. You give importance to writing in all elements, which makes it lively to read and explore further. Your writing is magical and tends to flip the chapters.

In the later chapters, you occasionally used dialogue tags instead of ". You misspelt Jungkook in one of the chapters.

Your paraphrasing technique is good, as you divided it into proper sections. The pacing is perfect; you did not rush. The emotions of the character could be felt in depth.

Character Development: (20/20)

The characters were described well, which enhanced the plot. I looked up to Kang Iseul and the way she talked.

I adored her straightforwardness and bravery. Jungkook was fearless and spirited. They were both intellectual, which uplifted the story. Let it be Yoongi, Jimin, or Byeol; you portrayed them well.

▸Overall Enjoyment/Final Impression: (20/20)

I enjoyed reading it a lot. The judiciary plot was executed satisfactorily without any puzzlement among the readers. It was intriguing to read about who murdered Park Junseo. You characterised everything without rushing and without giving clues about what would happen next, which is indeed a great skill that you have in writing. The last chapter is a cliffhanger. I would like to know what happens next.

▸TOTAL: 112.5/115

►Judge: Jahools

╰┈➤Author:armykoyola

╰┈➤Book Name: Everything Ends

▸TITLE : 10/10

This title is perfect on many levels for this story. The story shows that there's always the opportunity for an end to reality, an end to fantasy, an end to happiness and hope, and an end to sadness and worry. And, with the way it's progressing, an end to relationships. This title encompasses so many meanings that the story portrays. It's perfect.

▸COVER : 9/10

The cover is clear and very pretty; I love the colours! Some of the text is very small, which makes it a bit difficult to read, but it is in focus and not blurry. It is, overall, a very attractive cover.

▸DESCRIPTION/BLURB : 10/10

The description gives just enough details to keep the reader's interest piqued without giving anything away. It alludes to the fantasy of the magical aspect without revealing too much, and it keeps it intriguing. It definitely made me want to read the story to learn more.

▸PLOT : 20/20

This is such an interesting idea! The magical aspect of the stories Y/N writes coming true is fascinating, and I am eagerly awaiting more chapters to find out more about the mysterious commenter that seems to be the one making these things come true. Especially now that the wishes will supposedly no longer be coming true. I love the way the story has progressed thus far, and my interest has been constantly piqued.

▸WRITING STYLE : 20/25

The pace and emotions are spot-on. The story is progressing well and is laid out in a satisfying way. The only issues I came across were grammar and spelling mistakes. The book could use some editing in this regard. But overall, the writing style is very good.

▸CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT : 18/20

I love the development of Y/N. She has gone from being meek and self-conscious to standing up for herself and realising that, even though she's deeply in love, she deserves better than the way Jungkook treats her. When he was under the influence of the magical aspect of the story, she realised just how well he should be treating her. And she's beginning to hold non-magical Jungkook to that. She's upset, of course, but finally realises she's worth more than the cold way he treats her. Jungkook hasn't really had an arc yet, but I'm hoping that, as the story continues to progress, he'll realise he needs to change and will try to.

▸FINAL IMPRESSION : 20/20

I am really enjoying this story and have even added it to a reading list of books I'm waiting for updates on because I really want to see how it progresses and eventually ends. I hope we get to find out who the mysterious commenter is and how they managed to change Jungkook into what Y/N deserves. I also hope, though, that the real Jungkook sees the error of his ways. These are some of the things that impacted me and made me want to read more.

▸TOTAL : 107/115

╰┈➤Author: ViniShah2

╰┈➤Book Name: My You

▸TITLE : 10/10

This title seems to have a double meaning (at least, that's the way I took it) in that the app was named My You, but it also relates to Jungkook and Sarang's relationship. They accept each other as the ones meant for them. They are each other's "you.". I like this clever play on words for the title.

▸COVER : 10/10

I love this cover! It's clever and attractive, and it perfectly illustrates how the story begins. It's fun and pops with its colourful and pleasing aesthetics. It definitely catches attention.

▸DESCRIPTION/BLURB : 9/10

The description perfectly describes the beginning of the book and how Sarang and Jungkook's relationship starts. It piques interest and is successful in drawing in the reader. I do prefer the actual description to be listed first, and all achievements and additional details to be listed after. It makes it more pleasing to the eye, and it lists the most important details first.

▸PLOT : 18/20

This is a very interesting and clever story. I really like the way it's laid out and the way it progresses. The only thing I'm a bit unsure of is the beginning of their romantic relationship—that they embarked on it without really being sure of how they felt. Jungkook seemed disingenuous at times, seeming to only want to be with Sarang because of her sudden clicking with Hana and desperately wanting a mother for her. Sarang was infatuated with Jungkook, and I just wish they'd had more of an opportunity to get to know each other romantically and fall in love before entering into a relationship.

▸WRITING STYLE : 22/25

There were a few grammar mistakes, and as mentioned above, I wish the romance had progressed more before the relationship began. But the pacing here is on point, and the story elicited many emotions that flowed well throughout the story. We were never left questioning what the author intended, and I appreciated that. The end seemed slightly rushed, but not enough to mark points off for it. I was overall very impressed with the pacing.

▸CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT : 18/20

I really liked Jungkook's character arc, going from being cold and oftentimes rude to truly seeming to appreciate the relationships in his life enough to soften and open his heart. And, of course, it was important for him to open his heart to Sarang. And I'm glad that Sarang was eventually able to move past her infatuation and truly allow herself to fall for Jungkook for the right reasons. I do love that they did fall in love, and I believe they eventually made it to where they both did so for the right reasons.

▸FINAL IMPRESSION : 17/20

Not to beat a dead horse, but again, I wish they'd fallen for each other for the right reasons before entering into a relationship. But the fact that they eventually did fall in love and care for each other deeply left a great impact regardless. I did like the way the story progressed overall, and I love that they did decide to stay together and make such a cute, loving family. I believed that they were really in love at the end, which made the impact that the beginning of their relationship left on me better. This story was overall well written, and I enjoyed it

▸TOTAL : 104/115

►Judge: writer_tee

╰┈➤Author:Cool_summer29

╰┈➤Book Name: Hate

▸Title (10/10)

The title of 'HATE' fits the plot. It's quite unique and grabs the reader's attention. It is definitely suitable for the story.

▸Cover(10/10)

The cover is visually beautiful and well conveys the theme of the book. The image quality is excellent, the styles of fonts are neat and eye-catching, and the whole design is clean. The main text and subtext are clearly visible and easy to read. Overall, the cover is appealing and makes you want to pick up the book and find out more about the story. It effectively sets the tone for what's inside.

▸Blurb/Description (9.5/10)

The blurb introduces Jungkook and Y/N, once close friends now consumed by hatred due to a past incident. The story unfolds as they, despite their enmity, are cast as a couple in a romance drama. The narrative teases the possibility of either overcoming their past or succumbing to a repeated cycle of animosity. The intense dialogue and emotional tension promise a compelling exploration of their complex relationship, making it a captivating read for fans of enemies-to-lovers and second-chance romance.

▸Plot(19.5/20)

As Jungkook and Y/N navigate their roles as a couple on screen, they are forced to confront their unresolved feelings and confront the truth behind their falling out. The plot delves into their individual growth and the challenges they face in reconciling their past, all while trying to maintain a professional facade on set.

Will they be able to let go of their resentment and find love again, or will their shared history continue to drive them apart? This captivating story promises a rollercoaster of emotions and a heart-wrenching journey of self-discovery.

The chemistry between Jungkook and Y/N jumps off the pages, leaving readers yearning for their reconciliation. The rollercoaster of emotions keeps readers on the edge of their seats, eagerly turning each page to see if these star-crossed lovers can overcome their tumultuous past and find their way back to one another. With every twist and turn, readers will find themselves immersed in a whirlwind of passion, forgiveness, and ultimately, the power of true love. The story will leave readers captivated until the very end.

▸Character development(20/20)

It is a key aspect of this beautifully written book, as each character undergoes personal growth and transformation throughout the story. The way the author portrays the emotions and struggles of the characters is captivating and leaves a lasting impact on the readers. Even the negative roles, such as those of Kim Sierra and Seo Juyoung, are really envious of the character development in their lives.

▸Writing style(24.5/25)

When it comes to writing style, which includes pace, emotions, grammar and vocabulary, and picturing imagery, this book will captivate readers from beginning to end. The author's skillful pacing keeps the story moving at a brisk and engaging pace, never allowing readers to lose interest or become bored.

The emotions portrayed throughout the novel are raw and authentic, eliciting a deep connection with the characters and their struggles. The grammar and vocabulary are well utilised, adding to the overall reading experience and showcasing the author's understanding of language. The author's storytelling ability is truly captivating.

▸Overall enjoyment(20/20)

This book is a must-read for anyone who is really interested in the enemies-and-lovers genre. Being thick friends leads to becoming enemies, and after being enemies, strong love interestingly portrays the complexities of human relationships. The gradual transformation from friendship to enmity and then to a powerful love creates a stirring narrative that keeps readers engaged till the very end.

In 13 chapters, I really loved the way Taehyung used words. I mean, they are just words; they can make them get out of their delusions. lol. I really recommend this book to anyone who really likes the enemies and lovers trope. I really had fun reading this book, in one word: captivating.

▸TOTAL:113.5/115

╰┈➤Author:Seamlesslove

╰┈➤Book Name: Phantasmagoria

▸Title (10/10)

The title of the book, Phantasmagoria, is really unique and intriguing. It immediately captures the reader's attention and sparks curiosity about what the book could be about. The word "phantasmagoria" itself is not commonly used, making it all the more captivating, which is well-suited to the plot.

▸Cover(8.5/10)

The cover looks okay, but not that captivating or eye-catching. The fonts are a bit dull, and the subtexts are difficult to read. Despite these shortcomings, the book still manages to draw readers in with its captivating storyline.

▸Blurb/Description(9.5/10)

Despite having a short description, the lines express deep emotions about a lost love that's unattainable. The first dialogue highlights a longing for a past connection that seems out of reach. The second one reveals regret for not expressing feelings earlier. It captures the essence of missed opportunities and unspoken emotions. Overall, it encapsulates the pain of unrequited love effectively in just a few lines.

▸Plot(20/20)

The plot is really unique and keeps the readers engaged till the very end. Though at first it looks confusing from the Y/N perspective, you will really find yourself drawn into the story as you uncover the layers of detail and emotion. It is a rollercoaster of emotions that will leave you wanting more. I can't explain the plot because my mouth almost reveals the spoilers, but I can assure you that it is full of unexpected twists and turns that will keep you on the edge of your seat. The plot seamlessly intertwines with the characters' emotional journey, making it a truly captivating read.

▸Character development(25/25)

It is one of the strongest aspects of the story. Readers will definitely get into their shoes and feel a deep connection with their feelings and experiences. At first, when readers got into the shoes of Jungkook, they could feel the excitement and nerves he experienced whenever he was around his crush.

And when readers got into the shoes of Y/N, I literally felt her emotions, which confused her about what was real and what was an illusion. It's really a testament to the author's skill in creating relatable and complex characters. The way their emotions are portrayed adds depth and realness to the story, keeping readers engaged from beginning to end.

▸Writing style(25/25)

The writing style of the author is really classic and elegant, with a perfect balance of descriptive language and clear storytelling. The author's use of vivid imagery allows readers to visualise each scene, making it easy to immerse oneself in the story. Additionally, the seamless transitions between Jungkook and Y/N's perspectives add an extra layer of intrigue and keep the readers on their toes, eagerly turning the pages to uncover what happens next.

▸Overall enjoyment(20/20)

Overall, I thoroughly enjoyed reading this book. The combination of the author's captivating writing style and the emotional depth portrayed in the story made it a truly immersive and engaging experience. It was a rollercoaster of emotions that kept me hooked until the very end, eagerly anticipating each twist and turn. I highly recommend this book to anyone looking for a beautifully written and gripping read. Also If the cover is clear with vibrant colours and an eye-catching design, it will definitely catch many readers' attention and draw them to pick up the book. Beyond the fact that everything was classic in one word: "Classic love story,"

▸TOTAL: 113/115

►Judge:bts_army7saranghe

╰┈➤Author:123hikibakas

╰┈➤Book Name: Titanic

▸Title: 4/10 

The story is excellent, but the title could be changed. 'Titanic' is a very common title for the books, so I think it wasn't unique.

 ▸Cover: 10/10 

It is the best cover, in my opinion. The cover is perfect. Totally captivating.

 ▸Blurb/Description: 4/10 

The description should be related to the plot of the story, but I didn't find anything interesting in the description. Try to make it more clear.

▸Plot: 18/20

The plot is very intriguing. I like it. Keep going with the story.

 ▸Writing style: 22/25

For me, it was very excellent. It's grammar, vocabulary,use of expression, and punctuation. But I think you should try to use simple vocabulary. Do not use very high quality, but make it simple. So that other readers won't struggle to understand it. Otherwise, it's really good.

 ▸Character development (18/20)

It was also on the track. Keep going. Somewhere, I found some glitches, but overall, it's really amazing.

 ▸Final impression: 17/20 

I would say you have done really well. I found it very interesting, and I will definitely recommend others read it.

╰┈➤Author:starsinsky1999

╰┈➤Book Name: Switch Soul:seven

 ▸Title 8/10 

The title perfectly shows the story's main concept. It's eye catching. Cover 3/10 This needs improvement. There's no connection between the title and it's cover. Try to make it similar to the title.

 ▸Blurb/Description 8/10 

The description is good enough to get into the story. It's well written. But one thing: try not to include so many emojis in the description.

 ▸Plot 18/20 

This is really interesting. I couldn't hold myself from reading further. I was really engrossed in the story. It was fun to read.

 ▸Writing style: 23/35 

I found it very good, but somewhere I wasn't comfortable with the words. It was confusing, but the vocabulary you have used is really good. Try to make it more clear and punctuate it with the proper expressions.

 ▸Character development (17/20) 

I found it okay with the storyline. Just keep going.

 ▸Final impression: 18/20 

The storyline and it's title were the main reasons why I found it very interesting. It's description is really capable of attracting more and more readers. I found it amazing. Recommended for sure

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So, my dear participants and writers, please don't get discouraged by the results; if you feel discouraged, you don't get many ideas to continue the books. Of course, I stopped writing one of my books and got writer's block due to a lack of inspiration and ideas to improve myself.

But instead, I got more new ideas and plots where I motivated myself and also started to write them, so I never got discouraged by them.

Be happy and bring the fire in; just go with the flow and never let the writer in. You are nice, and keep going!

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The reward will be emailed to you, so don't worry about them; I was editing them, so it might take some time. Thank you for your understanding. For today's end,. I hope you all have a good night and sweet dreams, where one day the dreams might turn into a book, and if it's a day, have a good day, where you start your next chapter˚ ◌༘♡ ⋆｡˚ ꕥ

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