Book Title : Captive Love

Author of the book : Blondeyyx

Judge : elemariaJin

～✿✧ BOOK REVIEW ✧✿～

Cover : 10/10

The story is all about
warriors and battles so yes the cover matches the story perfectly. I loved this cover

Title : 10/10

They all are captives in love and the title really suits this well

Story description : 6.5/10

Story description is nice but it will be better if you write some lines more clearly. It's little hard to understand

Concept or plot : 10/10

The concept is great. This is a really interesting story

Pace : 6/10

I felt it was going slow

Character development : 8/10

The characters are great. You did introduced them nicely but they are little hard to imagine. If you also used some kind of pictures it will be better

Grammar or vocabulary : 9/10

Impressive but few words are very hard to pronounce for those who's first language isn't English just like me.
You can sometimes use easier words. So the understanding process will get better

Writing style : 10/10

Writing style is really impressive. You can describe things like emotions, actions etc amazingly

Matching the given Genre : 10/10

It matches the story perfectly

Overall enjoyment : 8.5/10

I liked reading this story. It got a really interesting plot. The title and cover is perfection

I felt it was going slow and could be faster. Also use images and easy words sometimes. If you do that this story will be perfect

Total : 88/100