Judge: Minyooora

The parallel world by @SharonIneeze ☆reader=5/5 ☆comment=3/5 ☆book cover=3/5 ☆book description=5/5 ☆book title=5/5 ☆message=5/5 ☆plot=8/10 ☆grammar=18/20 ☆emotions=9/10 ☆creativity=9/10 ☆opinion=9/10 Total=88/ 100

☆review= i hope the a/n can make the book cover more attractive as the truth is that readers attract through book covers + the way of writing is really unique i really appreciate it

Judge: SexyCutie_Taekookie

Dream Glow (now titled: our 8th member is a child) by KimLunaRJ2

( *since you've been a participant i thought this review might help you anyway, also, this review was given way before so I'm not sure if it still suits your book if you had any major changes in your book's plot by anyway)

Following rules: 3/5 Reader interaction: 2/5 Book cover: 4/5 Book description: 4/5 Book title: 5/5 Social message: 4/5 Book plot: 9/10 Grammar and Vocabulary: 18/20 Plot twist and attraction: 8/10 Emotions and Character development: 7/10 Creativity and way of writing: 8/10 Opinion on the book: 8/10 Areas where the author has to improve: Controlling the motion of the characters, one second they were just happily talking then they would shout suddenly Specialty of the author and the areas the author is good at: Opinions on the book: There's too much going on in the book and I was really confused in some of the parts Feedback, tip, or advice: add some description of what action the characters are doing and where they are, the book is mostly talks and it would really confuse the readers Expression about the book: It's really cute and can make u read the whole book with a smile but there are some sad scenes.

Judge: Dreamingsuccess

1.Shooting star at the balcony by Sneehadorin

(Points) 5= rules 5=reader interactions 5=book cover 4=description 5=Book title 1=Social message 10= plot 10=Grammer/vocabulary 8= plot twist and attraction 9=emotions and character development. 6=creativity and way of writing 7=own review Total=77 My review: I think the author should explain the settings around the characters, it gives reader an idea on what to imagine,if not adding some pictures in between the chapters can add to the creativity. The book has mostly positive reviews and comments,I like that the author interacts with their readers, mostly it depends on authors but when the Author reply to the reader's comments, it's quite appreciated. I also suggest to change the part where the male starts flying with the female in his arms in the park. What about the people around them? You could change that scene a little. Now, I think the plot is really unique, it gives of a magical feeling. I really liked the banners which the author added in the start of every chapter! The part where it was mentioned 'Failure is the pillar of success' was very relatable. I also suggest to write the dialogues in either normal or italic, don't mix match them. So overall, the book is really good, the idea and plot is unique , it just needs improvements on grammar and typos. The ending was obvious but that doesn't make it any less exciting,and this book can also have a part 2 of it.

2 . The innocent badboy by Jenniferv_taehyung

(Points) 5=rules 5=reader interactions 3=Cover 5=Description 5=Book title 0=Social message 10=Plot 17=Grammer/vocabulary 9= plot twist and attraction 7=emotions and character development 6=creativity and way of writing 8=own review. Total:80 My review: Let's start with the Book cover. It took me some time to realise that in your book cover 1 image is of innocent tae and another is of a bad boy version of him. I think you should make a book cover in which it is easy to differentiate between them, like a border or something so it'll relate with the title and Plot. Secondly I really liked the story but you referred the female as 'You' and gave her a name 'Hyeon' , so it doesn't really give me the feeling of X reader, BUT that doesn't make this story any less good because then again it's my own review and I don't prefer reading a X reader book where the name is given by author. The chapters are blunt,no pictures except at the starting of the chapter and the writting style is good, the paras are not too big nor too small, just perfect. I like the concept of 'Don't trust badboys' and ironically she falls for an badboy who feigns innocent. This book pushes the reader to keep reading and I honestly enjoyed reading this book. The scenes are described well and we can feel the emotions of the characters. Every character have a different but important role. So, overall........ I'd-uh-like to continue reading it? *cough* I'll recommended this book. Keep writing!

3. Criminal's obsession by btsfantasyworld

(Points) 5=rules 5=reader interactions 4=Book cover *1 0=Social message 9= plot 12=Grammer and vocabulary 8= plot twist and attraction 8=emotions and character development. 8= creativity and way of writing 9=Own review.

Total:73 *74

My review: In the book cover it should be 'Obsession' instead if 'obsessions'. Just the 's' otherwise the book cover is good. Relatable to the plot and title. Grammar and English needs improvement, the author should put full stop after every paragraph to let the readers know where the Para ends. Try to add more details to the scenes. I like the pictures the author added in every chapter, it helps with imagining the characters and setting, it's a positive point. Plot twists are good and believable. Chapters are short but updates are regular which is very appreciated. I suggest writting a description though. The author interacts with readers and reply to their comments which is good. Flashbacks and present time is distinguishable. Overall, I recommend this story. Despite some English and grammatical mistakes, I'd keep reading this story, it is creative one. Keep writing! ♥️

14 hours to reach you by @exomypeterpans

5:rules 5:reader's interactions 4.5:book cover 4.5:description 4:book title *1 0:social message 1: plot 5:grammar and vocabulary 1: plot twist and attraction 0: emotions and character development 1:creativity and way of writing 1:Own review.

Total:38 *39

Uh...I'm gonna give my honest review...... I'm sorry if it seems harsh. The plot is very confusing, there is no beginning, the story starts in a very blunt way and abruptly. There are no details, and way of writing is very simple. I appreciate that the author added pictures but even the pictures quality isn't the best . I suggest improving English grammar and vocabulary. Add some more details, try to add pictures with a better quality. Punctuation needs improvement. I can't feel the emotions while reading it. That's it. The book cover is really good! Author has taken their time in reading comments cause' I noticed they replied to mostly all of them. Adding pictures is also appreciated,however I suggest the author to improve their English and writting style and try to give more details, so the plot won't be confusing! Keep writing! ♥️♥️

Judge: NamSeokie-ssi

#Save Me Army by marie0211

Total Marks ~ 100 Marks for following the rules - 5/5 Marks for reader interaction- 5/5 Marks for book cover: 3/5 The cover is unique. This is the first time I am seeing a cover like this but it would be better if you would have added some other materials to make it more eye catchy. Marks for book description: 3/5 Make the book description more creative to attract readers at first sight. Your description is good but please make it creative. Marks for book title: 5/5 The title matches well with the story. And unique from others it described the story well.

Marks for social message: 4/5 Marks for book plot: 9/10 Plots were well formed giving perfect image about the story and the characters Marks for grammar and vocabulary: 19/20 You played well with the grammar and vocabulary which is very important to make a good story. Marks for plot twist: 8/10 Marks for character development: 9/10 Author have made her characters uniquely and mentioned them well in the story. Marks for creativity and way of writing: 8/10 It was simple yet good, easy for readers to understand the story easily. Marks for my opinion on the book: 8/10 I have personally liked the book a lot. Author has worked hard and spun her story well, she has played well with her characters and provided a good piece of writing for us armies.

Total Marks: 86/100

Review: I just want you to change your book cover and description a little to get more readers in near future. Except that your story is perfect for anyone who is looking for a good fan fiction for long time. Keep Going You Are Doing Good Author-nim!!!!!;

Be with You by SL-BTSILLION

Total Marks ~ 100 Marks for following the rules - 5/5 Marks for reader interaction- 5/5 Marks for book cover: 5/5 Your book cover was the first thing that truly attract me to read the book further. With this cover you can always get tons of readers for your story. Marks for book description: 5/5 The book description was as a judge or a reader would like to read, neither a long boring writing nor a short one. The author has wrote the description uniquely for her readers Marks for book title: 3/5 Book title matched the story well. No doubt in that but it was a common title for fan fiction book or any romance book so I will suggest the author to get a unique name for the book.

Marks for social message: 4/5 Marks for book plot: 8/10 The author has made the plot uniquely and interesting for readers. Marks for grammar and vocabulary: 19/20 Marks for plot twist: 9/10 I really like the roller coaster ride that the author has made for her readers. Marks for character development: 9/10 Author has made her characters uniquely. I liked Celeste's bubbly, spunky character and Tae's gorgeous one. Marks for creativity and way of writing: 8/10 The writing was simple but yet captivating which made the story easy for readers to understand. Marks for my opinion on the book: 9/10 Seriously your book made my day. According to me the author has spun her story well with bubbly Celeste, Taehyung, Kookie and Mc at first.

Total Marks: 90/100

Review: I think making your book title uniquely from other stories can bring more readers to your story. Except that the book is a perfect piece of writing. Keep Going You Are Doing Good Author-nim!!!!!!!

Judge: __dew_drops__

Pearl Green by hana_imagines

Rules - 5 Reader interaction - 5 Book cover - 4 Book description - 5 Book title - 4 Social message - 3 Book plot - 9 Grammar and vocabulary - 19 Plot twist - 8 Emotions and character development - 9 Creativity and way of writing - 8 *10
Marks for your opinion - 9

Total: 88/100 *90/100

Review:
This book is really interesting like the story line is common but in a very different way. The way author pen down her words is really interesting..... I said this book has somewhat common plot as others but it's interestingly a very different vibe. The character development is really interesting....... although the story is not complete but I was able to figure out the missing Mysterious part... because there were instances the author almost revealed the plot. But once again this book is pretty interesting and I'm definitely gonna read it till last.

Judge: _things_and_stuff_

Pretending by yourauthor_ace

Rules: 5
Reader interactions: 5
Cover: 5
The cover came off to me as a bit surprising, I like how you got the text combinated with it at, and made the title PoP while the text that's actually also important still visible.
Description: 3
A little less points for description, to be honest it isn't bad at all. But, I think it's just too short, like you got so many good sentences and things in your book that just got left unused while that description is just left with one sentence.
Title: 5
Message: 5
I like how it was all combinated and worded together. There are beautiful things that can be taken out of this book and quite literally get written on the paper for you to just sit and stare at it while you keep digging and digging into the meanings.
Plot: 10
I don't think that there's much to say, since the book is pretty well prepared I would say, and executed, the plot really sat together with the story.

Grammar, vocabulary: 13
I gave a lower grade, I think that, the first moment you author get the chance to edit the typos and grammar mistakes out. I found not very often but there were some, and personally even I know how annoying typos can get. But your writing is really nice and special.
Plot, interaction: 8
Emotions: 9
Emotions were very specially described, and I think that you as an author should be awarded for having a different point of view on many things.
Creativity: 10
My opinion: 10

Total: 88

The deaf betrayal by Im_Pavni

Rules: 5
Reader information: 5
Cover: 5
I like the cover. It's differently made and special. I love the creativity that sticks out here, and the matching themes.
Description: 5
I love how you took your time with the fancy font on the descriptions. I like gow it gets you invested in the book and definitely it attracts the readers.
Title: 5
The title matches and I think really adds just something, I can't describe it, but it just calls you to read the book.
Message: 4
Plot: 8
You balanced it all very well, smoothing it out and adding everything on each other. Very nice story line, and enjoyable and really gets more and more interesting as you go.
Grammar, vocabulary: 11
Your grammar actually is really good. I liked how some things were being said, but I think that there are somoe things with a little more time and practice will get much more better. And to clear myself, your writing right now is really good, like, you don't write bad at all!
So keep going.

Plot, interactions: 7
Emotions: 7
Creativity: 8
My opinion: 9
I really liked your story, I think your work really shows and makes it really enjoyable.

Total: 79

Judge: kpopcharmseu

book name: the Unpredictable fall

Author: kookiemilk5

Title: 2/5

Either it's Yuri meeting Taehyung that is 'unpredictable' or there's more to come.

Cover: 2.5/5

A good one but...i believe that no matter what the cover SHOULD relate to the story, the cover is having A pic of Taehyung sitting/relaxing on a couch (or whatever it is) and gives a cozy look so it gave me a first thought that the book was about a softie Taehyung while it was actually a rich CEO and cold Taehyung so it'd be better if you choose a rather intimidating one.

Description: 2.5/5

Too short, there's one annotation mistake and 'everything thing' word repetation.

Description is what lures the readers to continue with the book, seeing any kind of mistake could make the readers wrongly predict or judge your book.

Reader's interaction: 3.5/5

There are committed readers and people seem to enjoy the book, i hope the book gets more interactive readers.

Rules: 5/5

Thank you for following all the rules. 💜

Social message: 3.5/5

Hmm so there isn't much content added and explained in the story yet so i can't possibly predict everything, but I'd rather believe that it's about a child lacking mother's love and a father wanting his son to get the love of a mother if we word it that way, obviously the story doesn't revolve around it but it's the base of the story and the main characters.

Plot: 7/10

Married male protagonist books aren't rare but aren't common as well, the plot is kinda predictable but i'd like to wait and see what comes ahead.

Grammar: 16.5/20

It's well written to be honest. But there was this " annotation problem throughout the book and i tend to include that in the grammar section. Please make sure the annotations are placed properly, also, there are lines without annotations at all and i got off track because of them, they're being a huge distraction.

Plot twists and attraction: 7/10

The book is in it's beginning phase so i don't see much plot twists showing up, but the book kept me attracted to it regardlessly.

Emotions and character development: 6.5/10

Barely any character development as of now, but the emotions are well portrayed.

Creativity and way of writing: 9/10

Your descriptions and pov's are funny and entertaining.

Your opinion on the book: 8/10

Liked it. Loved it. Looking forward for more.

Review:

Any tips for the author: i added possible feedbacks accordingly above, i hope it'll be of some help. 💜😊

TOTAL: 73/100

book name: the girl with black hoodie

Author: spinebreaker_2000

Title: 5/5

Cover: 3/5

When i saw the cover, i thought the book is of some mystery or thriller genre ngl, so i'd suggest the author to change the cover, one that potrays the female mc, or a pic of a girl wearing a black hoodie indeed. Any Taehyung bg one would also look great!

Description: 4/5

Reader's interaction: 3/5

Rules: 4/5 (not added in reading list)

Social message: 4/5 no matter how you look, what problem you suffer from, or how alone you're, one day you will definitely find someone who will adore you and give you the love you deserve...that's the message i believe, the book also addresses topics like self harm and depression and that it could be cured by 'someone special'.

Plot: 7.5/10

Not a rare one, a little cliche but has it's own twists.

Grammar: 19/20
Simple and correct.

Plot twists and attraction: 7/10
Emotions and character development: 7/10
Creativity and way of writing:  9/10
Your opinion on the book:  7.5/10

Review:

Any tips for the author:

If the book has something like a soulmate theme then i'd be great if the author mentions it somewhere...cliche it may sound but Taehyung falling in love at first sight, okay, but the female protagonist? The whole book is written in Taehyung's POV and her emotions or her side of story isn't given the spotlight it deserves, would be great if author would work out on that. Also, i suggest the author to add the book in short story category since it's a short story indeed.
Overall it's a good read. You nice, keep going! 💜😊

TOTAL:   80/100

Book name: The Choice i made

Author: PurpleLightARMY

TOTAL: 88.5/100

Title: 4.5/5

Apt in regard with the story plot, but it could get a rather fantasy title instead, a title that describes Taehyung as her dream boy, ex: 'In my dream' , 'Dreamboy' anything as such would also sound great. But the current one is amazing as well.

Cover: 5/5

A lovely one. Author can perhaps add a little glitter/ shine to it, either in the text or as a mask.

Description:  4.5/5
Not too long, not too short, not revealing everything...still if the author could add some references from the book (some dialogues) it'd be great.

Reader's interaction: 3.5/5

There are very few commenters as per the reads, also, i personally am a commenter, since the book is good and has good emotional balance.

Rules:  5/5
Thank you for following all the rules💜

Social message:  4/5

Even though the book is of fantasy, doesn't have some scientifically true or real life plot, the heart wrecking emotions of a person having a weak heart or soul or i would rather say, being grateful to have a life to live...that's amazing, the blooming love between the mc's, it all gives it's messages of love.

Also! I screenshot this last part and pinned it on my notes...

Goodbye, world. You're too beautiful for anyone to realize you until they fall for their last moment. I will miss you and I will miss my Taehyung. I love you so much, Taehyung.
As I thought all these, I finally
encountered darkness and I took my last breath.

Plot: 9/10

✨Unique✨ Though there are some cliche forced marriage part in between, the beginning and ending are out of the box.

Grammar and vocabulary: 18/20
Mere sentence formation mistakes. Barely any spelling mistakes. The book is written in a simple and elegant way.

Plot twists and attraction: 9/10

Not gonna be a spoiler person but the plot twists were unexpected indeed, what i personally thought was that Nayeon would suddenly wake up and marriage with Taehyung and all that would be a dream but well i was wrong, the change of events and the explanations behind them were not too blunt yet logical.

Emotions and character development: 8/10

There is character development, people change, their opinions change. Though Jungkook seems to be the same throughout, yet i appreciate his commitment. The emotions are well portrayed. *whispers* i tried my best to not cry till the end...but finally, i couldn't help but wipe tears spilling down my eyes.

Creativity and way of writing: 9/10

The best part of the book is Taehyung appearing in her dreams and the reasons behind it.

My opinion on the book: 9/10

Review:

Areas author has to improve: now, here is some constructive criticism, if we word it that way, Hear me out once. Let's break the story into some basic blocks/ phases.

Phase one: Taehyung appearing in dreams, phase 2: forced marriage, phase 3: married life and it's complications, phase 4: accident and phase 5: the revelations and ending.

In all of these phases...i personally, as a reader, found the phase 3 way too long or dragged out...yes it did had some lovely moments and incidents but...it affected my interest...honestly speaking, i started off amazingly, loved how the book was going on...but when the lovey dovey part came i did found it a little cliche, at a point i thought: "did the author forget about the dream thingy?" But i was actually surprised to see the plot twists and all the stuff coming ahead, i know there's always a calm before the storm, but this calm was clueless, i suggest the author to add some questions or mystery points...ex: while female lead spends her time with Taehyung, a point could be mentioned regarding the dream, "now that i think of it...i wonder why Taehyung came in my dream?" "Is he even real!?" let the readers have the slightest idea about it, though i know the author mightn't go all the way adding more lines, i just wanted to say this out, the readers seem to loose interest in the phase 3, do consider my opinion.

Also!!! Don't hate me for these but author can change the chapter names a little, they're being the biggest spoilers ever! When The female protagonist was nowhere to be seen, my heart wasn't at ease, the uneasiness, the fear, the emotions were going smoothly until i glanced at the next chapter name from the list, i went, "sh*t! No!" The chapter titled, "she's dead" could rather be titled "gone..." Not even "she's gone" because there's seriously only One she in the book, that kinda became a bummer ngl.

Areas author is good at: Imagination, wording out the situations, great writing skills, as i said, i literally cried at the end.

Feedback: I believe the book is under editing, chapters till 22 are well written, but from ch 23 the dialogue format is supposed to be edited ig, i hope the author works on it soon. ❤

The book is a piece of art! Truly amazing and deserves admiration by everyone out there! Great work! 💜

book name: mafia's princess

Author: Btstae33

Title: 3/5

Very common.

Cover: 4.5/5
The pic quality is average.

Description:  3/5

Add annotations " when you mention a dialogue from the protagonist.

Too short.

Reader's interaction: 1.5/5

2.27k reads...but chapters have barely any comments even after considering the fact that the book is filled with BTS iconic lines and references.

Rules: 0/5 [ :/ ]

Not followed the host accounts.
Not followed the judge (it was literally 2marks for single follow)
Not added in reading list nor announced on mb.

Social message: 1/5

It's a cliche and rushed book...there can't be many messages drawn from the book but i believe the author would come up with one if we look deep into the storyline.

Plot: 5/10

Common and basic...there are hundreds of books with such plot.

Grammar: 10/20

Dialogues aren't supposed to be written in-

Y/n: how are you?

It should be depicted with annotations,

"How are you?" Y/n said.

Don't use (*) to describe characters actions, either write it in their POV's or a second person POV.

Few grammar and spelling mistakes are also found.

Plot twists and attraction: 6/10

There aren't many, and even if there's any change of moments, it's very obvious and basic.

Emotions and character development: 5/10

Creativity and way of writing:  4/10

Your opinion on the book: 4/10

Review: because i'm used to read the usual format books, it was kind of unpleasant to have the (*) and (:) everywhere, though there were some funny dialogues and the book is readable. It'd be great if the author goes for a major editing of the book.

TOTAL:  47/100

I hope the reviews will be of some help💜

Thank you so much judges💜💜💜