🌹KSJ WINNERS!!!✨🏆

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And surprisingly we got two third prize winners!!! 😮😇

WINNERS FOR KIM SEOKJIN CATEGORY! 🏆💜



THIRD PRIZE WINNERS! 🏆

Savage Love by aradhyashukla


Marks for Following the Rules =5
Marks for Reader Interection =3 Cover = 4/5The cover is amazingly edited. It's pleasing to the eyes. But somehow the background pic doesn't match with the character of Seok Jin.
Description = 4/5
Book Title = 5/5
Social Message = 2/5 I don't see any positive messages since the plot is based on entertainment purpose only.
Plot = 6/10Well the plot is not rare because high school love stories such as these are common. Taking revenge on each other is seen almost every story. Though it won't be a waste of time to try it out. It has some different vibe which will make you interested in the story.
Grammar = 19/20 I didn't find any grammatical mistakes though I cannot give full marks as my poor eyes might had miss some errors. The author used simple, easy words so readers won't find any difficulty while reading it.
Plot Twist & Attraction = 3/5 Honestly, I think the ending is already predicted. Rich Boy and savage girl will fall in love at the end. The story has no plot twist, it went smoothly. But her words of comedy can make anyone want to keep reading for more.
Emotions & Character Development = 8/10 You are gonna fall from your bed reading this story. Author has a great sense of humor!
Marks for Creativity and Way of Writting = 7/10
Marks for your opinion on the book = 8/10

Total = 74/100.

Review = Personally, I liked this book a lot bcx of its humorous lines and ideas. I will suggest the author to put more emotions like sad, sorrow, pain into it for better experiment. The author created her characters uniquely that you'll fall in love with them. Trust me, you'll like Y/N so much. Not all girls are as smarty-pants as her. Along with humor, if the author tries to think more future ideas which'll include some sorrowful moments will actually benefit this story. I want to suggest this book for a good laugh to the readers. Try it out if you feel like laughing or you wanna act like Min Suga.

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Good Night Jagiya by minsuga4evr

Rules: 4 Interaction 4: Cover: 5 Description: 5 Title: 4 Social Msg: 4 Plot: 3 Grammar: 20 Plot Twist: 6 Creativitity: 6 Opinion: 7

Overall Score 74/100

Review: The quotes at the beginning of the chapters are sweet and a good touch. Still early in the story so it's hard to tell about the development and plot twist.



SECOND PRIZE WINNER! 🏆

Heart Disease by KimLunaRJ2

Marks for following rules = 5 Marks for Reader Interection = 3 Cover = 2/5 The reason I gave a low mark bcx the background pic and the text somehow didn't match. It doesn't attract the readers at first glance. So I suggest changing it a bit. Description = 5/5 Title = 4/5 The title was rare, unique, eye-catching. But adding Kim Seok Jin FF, Completed was a bit too extra. Season 1 was reasonable. But making it longer by adding unuseful is not necessary. Social Message = 4/5 It feels like the author wants to deliver something. Like it's better to share pain rather than keeping it to yourself. Plot = 8/10 The plot was different from stories I read so far. The male au suffering from a disease with a bad past is unique. The concept of the story was not similar to others, I guess. Grammar = 18/20 Plot Twist and Attraction = 8/10 Emotions and Character Development = 9/10 I really felt bad, hurt while seeing Jin having seizures. I almost felt like I should go inside the story and help him. The kidnapping part where actions were written; I found that amusing. Marks for Creativity and Way of Writting = 7/10 Marks for your opinion on the book = 8/10

Total = 83/100.

Review = I would like to start by author's amazing sense of building Jin's character. I understood him from the bottom of my heart and fell in love with him once again. The pacing was somehow a bit boring so if some entertainment are put on, the story will be great. Also I found something which bothered me was Yunji's character. Being the female lead, she should have helped him, felt him, loved him more. Nam Joon had a big role in this story. More than her. Which was technically awkward to me. Yes, he was a big brother type but the female lead should've been given more feelings. Other than this, the author ended book suddenly and said book 2 is in her other account. Wasn't it a bit weird? What I want to suggest is end the book 2 after the female lead got to know about his disease, he woke up and then incidents after. Suddenly ending it like that might not be that reasonable. Anyways I loved the book. It was a bit unique than others. Readers would definitely like it.




FIRST PRIZE WINNER! 🏆

Sillage by dreamalittlefic

Rules: 4 Interaction: 5 Cover: 5 Description: 4 Title: 5 - its perfect AND I learned a new word! Social Msg: 5 Plot: 9 Grammar: 20 Plot twist: 8 Development: 10 Creativity: 8 Opinion: 9

Overall 92/100

Review: I love the character Mia, she's very personable and fun. The characters overall are very likeable. Fantastic story, it really tugs on the emotions. Not going to lie, I cried.




PARTICIPANT RESULTS + SPECIAL MENTION (lagging with one mark for third place) 🏆

His Revenge by spinebreaker_2000

Rules: 4 Interaction: 5 Cover: 5 Description: 3 Title: 4 Social Msg: 3 Plot: 7 Grammar: 15 Plot twist: 8 Development: 6 Creativity: 6 Opinion: 7

Overall score: 73/100

Review: Decent story. Use other words instead of "I" at the beginning of the sentence so it doesn't get as repetitive. Overall, good read.


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