Note: I ain't changing anything, this chapter was a draft thus I'm uploading it for the participants. P.s. 11 JJK participants already Disappeared, it's been 7 months since the awards ended uff-

Judge: btsfantasyworld

Can we by  KOOKIESS_07

Can we? : 79/100 *84/100 *Rules: 5/5  Title : 5/5Reader interaction: 5/5Book cover: 4/5Description : 5/5Social message: 4/5Book plot : 8/10Grammer: 15/20Plot twist : 8/10Emotion or character development : 8/10Creativity: 8/10Personal opinion: 9/10

Can we: 79/100 *84/100  I like her her book title it make readers curious. Cover was ok it doesn't mean cover was not nice. The cover was nice but it didn't catch my eye.Description make me read her story. The description is well written. There are some grammatical mistakes but its ok. Plot was also great.Readers seem to enjoy her book so readers interaction was nice.The only tip i would like to give is you should improve grammer a little. Overall the story was great.Others readers should also check the story out. The book deserve more views. 

JUDGE: PurvaV

Stay with me by leeseulbi08

Stay with me by Rules 5/5All the rules are followed. Reader's interactions 3/5Comments are less according to the reads book got. Book cover 4/5 *3/5 *its a very common and basic cover, make it a little more attractive.* The cover is a lil bit dim. But good. Description 4/5 Description is perfect. Not too much more too less. And it also makes me really curious to read the story of jjk and y/n and know what will happen at the end. Book title 5/5The tilte given by author perfectly fits the story. Social msg  3/5This story give us msg of love and hardship. Book plot 9/10The book plot is really good and interesting. I really enjoyed reading this. It makes me more curious as chapter goes by. Grammar/vocabulary 18/20Author wrote everything really well. And the words chosen were also good. But still author needs to update their vocabulary. Twist/Attraction 9/10 The story really attract readers towards it by its plot and the twist in it. Character development 8/10Characters are well described And and are not way too blant or active. Creativity/Pacing 8/10 Creativity of the author is really good. But author needs to work on the way of writing (pacing) . My opinion 9/10 The book is really good. Story olot and twist in this story are really attractive and great. But author needs to recheck their spelling and update their own vocabulary. It would be great appreciation if author improves their way of writing. Overall I really enjoyed the story and is looking forward for more great and improved stories from author. Total 85/100 *84/100

Saranghae by 97_golden_baby

Rules 5/5All rules are followed. Reader's interactions 4/5Readers interactions is kind of less according to the reads this book has. Book cover 4/5The cover is really good. But it is too dim. It would look good if it was a lil bit shiny and clear. Description 4/5 Author revealed a lil too much plot in the description. But still the description really made me curious to read. Book title 5/5Book title really suits the book. Social msg 3/5The title itself tells that the book is giving us msg of love and ofc the choice of right person. Rather than this it does not support any strong social msg. Book plot 9/10The book plot is really good. And is very interesting. While reading you'll get more and more curious about whant is going to happen after this. So it also makes it attractive. Grammar/vocabulary 18/20Authors choice of word is really good but still needs to update their vocabulary. Twist/Attraction 9/10 This story have many twist and it gets more and more interesting. Character development 8/10Characters are described well and nicely. But there is a lil lack of emotions. Author needs to work ok it. Author needs to make sure that the reader is feeling those emotions. Creativity/Pacing 8/10The book is written really well. And is paced neatly. Author is very creative. I like the way Author also put efforts to make sure that the reader is understanding every event and clearing there confusion. My opinion 8/10Book is really good. And I enjoyed reading this book very much. But I would like to suggest author to work on her writing a lil, the way she writes it, recheck everything and make sure that she wrote it full of emotions. Total 85/100

judge: Taenillakook

bully to beast by whereismyoppa

 rules 5reader interaction 5description 5cover 5social message 2plot 5 *6 title 5grammar vocabulary 13plot twist attractive 5 *6Character 5 *6 creativity 5 *7 opinion 5

mark 65 *70

improve..it would be great if author add more emotion to writing my opinion..I'm thinking that things happened too fast?..I think it would be great if author explained feeling more and..while reading some chapter...it had a wrong pov..and that confused me..cause writing pov would changed in some paragraph.

psycho mafia by Mylovelyreaders

rules 5reader interaction 5title 5cover 5description 5plot book 9social message 3grammar vocabulary 14 *15 plot twist attraction 10Character 9creativity 8opinion 8

mark 90 **86 (*87)

improve..it would be great if author add more details to story and explained the situation more ..the story was so good and exciting..it would be better if the chapters get edited (about grammar mistakes)

HR: the book seems to be a great one

crush by kookiemilk5

rules 5reader interaction 5description 3title 4cover 5social message 2book plot 5grammar vocabulary 12plot twist attraction 5Character 4creativity 4opinion 4

mark 61

Review: improve..it would be better if author use writing mark and the writing style was simple and without any emotion..it would be better if author add details to story..and sometimes It had a wrong pov..and made me confused all the time..

judge: luvrtaekook

Title: AccidentBy: AlwaysAnArmy2

 5+ for allowing the rules (I don't know if they followed the rules, did they? *yes she did☺)3+ for reader interaction4+ for the book cover5+ for the book description4+ for the title5+ for the social message8+ for the plot16+ for the grammar7+ for plot twists and attraction8+ for the character development7+ *8 for the creativity of writing6+ for my opinion.

Total: 78/100 *79/100

My review:-I think the author needs to improve her writing style.-She is creative in making the book cover and her grammar is smooth too.-This is just my opinion. In writing, you don't have to write the sound effects like the doorbell sound etc., you just need to describe it. You can also improve your book cover, I love it, but I suggest using the app Phonto for amazing fonts. -The book is nice, it makes me want to read more every time I finish a chapter, you just need to improve your writing style. Overall, I can see potential in you. Keep writing and keep up the good work!

Title: His woman Author: AlexArmantoJK6 

5+ for following the rules5+ for reader interaction5+ for the book cover4+ for the book description2+ for the title3+ for the social message7+ for the plot15+ for the grammar6+ for the plot twists and attraction8+ for the character development9+ for the creativity of writing8+ for my opinionTotal: 77/100

My review-You need a little bit improvement when it comes to grammar.-I'm in love with your book cover! It's so creative! -I like the book but I feel like it's a bit rushed. Overall, it's nice and I love reading it.-Be a little bit more creative in writing, that's all.-To be honest, I love everything about your book. All you have to do is improve your grammar and your writing style and be a little bit more creative in writing.

Title: Once Upon A Dream Author: Sneehadorin

 5+ for following the rules5+ for reader interaction2+ *3.5 for the book cover 4+ for the book description5+ for the book title5+ for social message7+ *8.5 for the plot17+ for the grammar and vocabulary 8+ for plot twists and attraction6+ *7 for character development5+ *7 for the way of writing6+ for my own opinion

Total: 75/100 *81/100 My review:-Your writing style needs a little bit improvement, and the book cover needs a little bit more touch. -Your grammar is great, and I love how you emphasize the character's feelings and emotions. -Your book is unique and it's very intriguing. You just need a little bit improvement but overall, your book is really interesting.-Improve your book cover. Book covers are really important, they attract people to read your story. You can use Picsart and Phonto in creating your cover. Those apps can really help you make an aesthetic and fascinating book cover. -Keep writing, I can see potential in you! Fighting!

HR: I had a quick read of the beginning and the book seems really good, i really liked the concept and pacing. 💜

Imperfectly perfect love Author: hana_imagines

 5+ for following the rules 5+ for reader interaction 4+ for the book cover 5+ for the book description 5+ for the book title 5+ for social message 7+ for the book plot 15+ for the grammar 8+ for plot twists and attraction 7+ for character development 5+ for the way of writing 6+ for my own opinion

Total: 77/100

My review: -A little bit improvement in your way of writing. -I like your book description, a lot. I think that's your speciality. -I love the unique plot of the book. -Improve your writing style and grammar. In making your paragraphs, don't make them too long to avoid confusions and having shorter paragraphs makes reading easier and it attracts the readers. -Continue writing, I love your book a lot.          

HR: (requested): Skipped due to lack of time.

Judge: _things_and_stuff_

Started with a kiss by SexyCutie_Taekookie

Rules: 5
Reader interactions: 5
Cover: 5 
I really like the cover. I find ver soft, and lovely, just like the book. Just gives me homey vibes, and it's very eye catching due to it being different.
Description: I think it's a very solid description, it will attract readers fastly due to the cliffhanger. But, I think it could be added a small tiny touch from the author.
Message: 3
Since it is not completed, I cannot answer fully on this one.
Grammar, vocabulary: 13 
I didn't find grammar, it seems that everything is in its place. About vocabulary, I think authors humor builds it up, but, there is lack of emotional description and placement.
Plot twist: 8
I think that plot twists were interesting, but sometimes predictable. While the interactions of characters were very funny, I really liked the humor in this book, it made me laugh so many times.
Emotions, characters: 7
As I said, lack of emotions is evident, but we do really get to know the characters.

Creativity: 7
Just because it was such a fun read, I think it pulled this Creativity up to the sky. Personally, I find it pretty creatfull, there were many things that I didn't get to see in many other.
Your opinion: 8

Total: 77/100  (that lucky seven tho)

Unexpected by QUEENFOREVER_7

Rules: 5
Reader interactions: 5
Cover: 5
The dark cover really makes it interesting and alluring
Description: 3
I find the description a bit unclear and to be exact doesn't really give that much of material that could actually get you a lot more interested in the book.
Title: 5
Message: 3
The story isn't complete, so the grade stays in the middle due to some things mentioned in the book.
Plot: 8
Exciting and very rare plots to be seen. I haven't read many books that have this kinds of big plots that would make your head spin around.
Grammar, vocabulary: 10
Unfortunately I could find some grammar mistakes, that were usually typos, but still I do have to mention them. About vocabulary, there were many things that were interesting to take note of, and even remember, but still I think it could be focused on it more.

Plot twists, interactions: 8
Ohhh, I find some very funny and even deep interactions between the characters in here. A bit mysterious on its special way to be honest. I do think that author really should continue with their work, and focus on slowly building their relationships.
Emotions, characters: 8
We have many Emotions here involved. If ya ask me, a damn roller-coaster at its best.
Creativity: 10
Your opinion: 7

Total: 68/100

These reviews are from way back, honestly speaking I couldn't read the whole books but I had a quick glance through and made necessary revisions, if you have any queries then pm me please💜

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