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🆆🅸🅽🅽🅴🆁: KINKY BY dreamalittlefic

Kinky: Reader interaction 1/5 Rules 4/5 Cover 5/5 Description 5/5 Title 5/5 Social msg 3/5 Plot 10/10 Grammar Vocabulary 19/20 Twist 10/10 Character development 10/10 Creativity way 10/10 My opinion 9/10

Total 91/100

REVIEW:

The story plot is really good and interesting. The author didn't added this book in the reading list so I reduced one mark from it. Reader interaction is very less. On each chapter there are like only one or two or no comments. So the interaction between reader and author is really less. The book gives msg of love and heart broken and other than this there is no other strong social msg given. The title, cover and description really suits the book and is appropriate. Story plot is really good. And author's imagination and creativity is also good enough. The way that author represents the characters is also good. The words used by author for describing the plot and characters is good but still needs update in vocabulary. Overall author did really good ❤❤❤ In my opinion the storyline is really good and the character development is also good. Author need to interact more with the readers so that readers can enjoy it while reading. Overall the story Is really good and I love it❤❤❤❤I highly appreciate the work of both of the authors and hope they get more recognition......

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🆆🅸🅽🅽🅴🆁: TOMORROW BY 1800HongjoongsMullet

Tomorrow :- Rules - 5/5 Reader's interaction - 4/5 Cover - 4/5 Description - 5/5 Title - 3.5/5 Social message - 5/5 Plot - 10/10 Grammar - 19.5/20 Plot twist - 9/10 Chr. Development - 9.5/10 Creativity/writing - 9.5/10 Opinion on book - 10/10

Total - 94/100

REVIEW:

I loved the book. Her writing style was good, not perfect but appreciably good. Her plot sounded a bit cliche but she did her task well with her thought process. It's a good book.. The only places where her marks went down were the cover, title etc. If she could work on cover more , that'd be good cuz the story was really good. :)

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🆆🅸🅽🅽🅴🆁: AT MY DOORSTEP BY Dxyx143

At My Doorstep: Reader interaction 5/5 Rules 5/5 Cover 5/5 Description 4/5 Title 5/5 Social msg 3/5 Plot 10/10 Grammar Vocabulary 19/20 Twist 10/10 Character development 10/10 Creativity way 10/10 My opinion 10/10

Total 96/100+1 marks= 97/100

REVIEW:

Overall I really enjoyed this story. At my doorstep by Dxyx143. The storyline was amazing and even the way that author represented and described the characters and situation was good enough. Author has good creativity. The response of readers is positive and good. The words chosen were good but still Author needs to update their vocabulary a lil bit . Description was too short and it does not make me want to read more but the story is great. This story does not give any kind of strong social message but if we look at it, it tells us about love and how the life is being popular and etc. Story Plot was amazing . I love it❤❤❤❤❤ I will advise Author to keep an eye in how she writes the description. Description should neither be short Nor too long and Reviling.... In this story the case Is that the description is too short... To make the reader curious to read more about that book....... Overall it's a really great and amazing book....

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!now the reviews of the participants!

LIVING IN OMELAS
@ aradhyashukla

Living in omelas :- Rules - 5/5 Reader's interaction - 4/5 Cover - 4.5/5 Description - 4/5 Title - 4.5/5 Social message - 4/5 Plot - 9/10 Grammar - 18.5/20 Plot twist - 8/10 Chr. Development - 9/10 Creativity/ writing - 9/10 Opinion on book - 8.5/10

Total - 88/100

REVIEW:

The book was okay. Her writing style could be improved more as its a bit rushed and less descriptive. I think she must focus on writing long chapters with good description of each n every action and emotions. That'd be recommendable as her plot was a good and fresh one. It was really something new and good. I liked the plot. :)

HEAT by @ prooosen

Heat :- Rules - 5/5 Reader's interaction - 4/5 Cover - 4.5/5 Description - 5/5 Title - 3.5/5 Social message - 4/5 Plot - 9/10 Grammar - 18/20 Plot twist - 8.5/10 Chr. Development - 8.5/10 Creativity / writing - 9/10 Opinion on book- 8.5/10

Total - 87.5/100

REVIEW :

The book was okay. She went with the common plot of a werewolf FF. It gets really tough to think otherwise with such topics but i still appreciate her effort into writing it.. I found that her writing was rushed as well. She focused more on getting the story running than taking it slow. Also, the chapters were bit short. I suggest a narrative form of writing so that she can focus on conveying the emotions properly. :)

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