Judge SSears90

Fragile Reality by Hiran__0602

Originality 23/25
While the title is eye-catching and memorable, it is a title I have seen before, even in different variations such as “The Fragile Reality” and “Our Fragile Reality”. Adding another element will help it stand out just a tad bit more, even if it’s just a small subtitle that hints at the struggles of what Jin sees in his dreams or how the other members feel.

Relevance to the story 22/25
The title gives glimpses into the reality of the fight between Jin and Jungkook in the beginning, and the other members being worried about if he will ever wake up. The majority of the story itself focuses more on Jin being inside his dreams, which means he wouldn’t be facing reality, but stuck in his dream state. The title may be a bit misleading, having readers think the story will be more about what the members are going through in the real world while Jin dreams. I recommend adding an element in the title that focuses more on the dreams than the reality, as that would make it more relevant to the majority of the plot. Even the bad things that happen, like Jin’s divorce, are things happening in his dreams - not reality.

Tone and genre appropriateness 25/25
The tone hints at the main themes within the story, which is appropriate because the book does focus on elements of drama and anxiety which the title conveys well.

Clarity and Fluency 25/25
The title is clear and easily readable.

Total 95/100

Voice in the Dreamscape by strawberry1d

Originality 25/25
The title is very original and one I have never seen before. It reflects the story in a creative and mysterious way. 

Relevance to the story 25/25
The title is completely relevant to the story. “Voices” refers to the voice of Jungkook’s childhood imaginary friend calling out to him, and “in the Dreamscape” references how his reality seems to be altered and how this voice is calling out to him in his dreams. The term “Dreamscape” means that something is being portrayed as strange, holding the same mysteries as dreams, which is relevant to what Jungkook is dealing with.

Tone and genre appropriateness 25/25
The tone is appropriate. The title depicts elements of mystery, which seems to be the main genre of the story as Jungkook tries to figure out why this imaginary friend has returned to him.

Clarity and Fluency 25/25
The title is clear and fluent.

Total 100/100

Mrs Ice Cube of Mr Hot by lilyDreamer23

Originality 22/25
The title has original elements to it, as these are the direct personalities you gave your own characters. The terms “Mrs. Ice Cube” and “Mr. Hot” do sound a bit simple in terms of describing those main characters, though. I recommend adding a broader aspect of the overall plot into the title to draw readers in.

Relevance to the story 25/25
The terms “Mrs. Ice Cube” and “Mr. Hot” reflect the overall personalities of the characters well, making it relevant.

Tone and genre appropriateness 25/25
The tone and genre seem to be appropriate for the story. The tone hints at the woman (Min-Jae) being cold and having the opposite personality of Taehyung, who is “Mr. Hot”.

Clarity and Fluency 18/25
The title is a bit unclear. To begin I will point out that there are some grammatical errors. “Mrs” and “Mr” both need a period after it, so the names should be “Mrs. Ice Cube” and “Mr. Hot.” To add to this, the use of your word “of” is out of place, as it makes it sound like Mr. Hot has some kind of ownership, but that’s not quite relevant. The story focuses more on the personalities of the characters. It would be better suited as “Mrs. Ice Cube and Mr. Hot” as opposed to using “of”.

Total 90/100

My Mafia Stepbrother’s by editgirlworld
No review. Inactive/Never followed judge.

The Face He Fell For by deadofwrite12-_-

Originality 23/25
The title is original for the story, but it does give off that vibe of a common “falling in love” story. This story is not a typical romance novel, and it incorporates themes of arranged marriage and Jungkook having an obsession with Y/N. Adding an element that leans towards that dark theme may be more suitable to readers looking for such books.

Relevance to the story 23/25
As mentioned in the originality criteria, the title gives off the vibe of a typical “man falls in love with a girl” romance, but your story is more than that. Y/N is given to Jungkook by her father and it doesn’t even take time for Jungkook to immediately be obsessed with her. Perhaps adding something about his obsession/controlling behavior would make the title more relevant.

Tone and genre appropriateness 21/25
The title itself does seem to be genre appropriate, because overall, the story is about Jungkook and his relationship and feelings towards Y/N. The tone, as aforementioned, does give off that romantic vibe although there are elements in the story that are darker themed, making this feel more like a dark romance. Adding something to make the tone more ominous or dark might be beneficial in pulling in those readers.

Clarity and Fluency 25/25
The title is perfectly clear and fluent.

Total 93/100

3rd place goes to The face he fell for by deadofwrite12-_-

2nd place goes to Fragile Reality by Hiran__0602

1st place goes to Voice in the Dreamscape by strawberry1d

Thanks SSears90 for the judging.
Congratulations to all the winners and participants.

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