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PARTICIPANT :: MiniMoxx
JUDGE :: c_cryst4l

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ROYALLY BUMPED
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BEST COVER CRITERIA: Royally Bumped

Cover: 19/20
try blurring the background a lil and bolding the title more

Title: 18/20
I think moving the crown to the Y (like it's wearing the crown) and making it smaller might make it look better

Fonts used: 20/20
cursive>>> it does fit the cover though!

Subtitle: 18/20
I'm gonna pretend the subtitle is Alex's name for a sec. try like moving the name down to the bottom, it's kinda blocking the title

Extra words to fill the area: 20/20
not much to add or you'll be blocking the cover :P

Extra: (like theme, color scheme, etc) : 17/20
I like the 2d artstyle, buuut the colors on the title don't stand out much. try a darker beige, or another color

Overall : 92/100

JUDGING CRITERIA: Royally Bumped

can I point out something first. this book was so long and interesting I forgot I was supposed to review it midway through- and i ended up scrolling back all the chapters just to vote. idk whether to laugh or cry.

**btw sry for the small amount of actual criticism, I could NOT for the life of me find stuff to be improved**

Title: 4/4
short, simple, easy to remember, sums up the book. that's all!

Cover: 3.9/4
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Blurb: 4.9/5
like the introductions! although try putting sections between character intros, it kinda threw me off
I kinda got stumped on this part for a bit cuz of the grammar...

"are her feelings that grow for him genuine**,** or only for his way of life that ensures her baby stability?" (idk if i fixed it right, I'm still stumped on what it's supposed to say)

Writing style: 10/10
I like the variety of words, and for once I didn't get deja vú

Also how you can describe the characters, show emotion, etc...

Character Development: 2/5
honestly, there wasn't much character development... Mila kinda remained the same and so did Kai

Grammar: 9/10
very little spelling mistakes! just the description kinda needs a little fixing

Vocabulary: 10/10
i forgot this section existed. i'm gonna assume you can probably recite every shakespeare play from start to finish and give this a 10

Plotting: 12/12
I like how it actually develops, though never straying from the main idea of "oh no i got pregnant with a royal baby!"

Emotions: 10/10
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Creativity: 9/10
The "royal prince/princess doesn't want to be a royal and wants to live a normal life" was kinda cliché. other than that, it was pretty creative!

Worth reading: 10/10
I think it's only because I have a bias for abnormally long books- still, the story's interesting and doesn't stray off the plot too much because of romance

Overall impression: 9/10
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Total: 94/100