Your POV:
"Guys! Guys! It's Dustin!" Mike yelled. We all raced over to Mike and El, to see the walkie go in out.

"Shit." I muttered. The next thing I know Eleven is sitting in the middle of the Eggos aisle, with an American flag bandanna, covering her face, blood slowly dripping down from her nose.

"Seriously." Mike whispers to Lucas.

"What it's New Coke?" He shrugged.

"Ew how can you even drink that stuff?" Mike asked in disgust.

"It's the same recipe as the original just Sweeter. Bolder. Better." Will And I exchange looks.

"That's disgusting-" Mike is interrupted by El.

"I found them. Their at the Mall."

Time Skippp...

Third Person
"Guys!" Dustin and Tanner yelled in Sync, then Tanner glared at Dustin. She wanted all of this to be over, while Dustin wanted to apologize for being an ass, but liked her he really did, it's just that he liked Suzie too. The group noticed the tension. They came down stairs carrying Eleven.

"What the hell happened to El?" Dustin asked.

"Long story short the Mind Flayers' back." Max summed up.

"What's up with you two?" Lucas pressed.

"Nothing." The pair answered refusing to look at each other. Suddenly Eleven began to scream as she fell. Everyone stopped bickering, and focused on El. Max began to unravel the bloody bandages as El's screams died down as Mike whispers sweet nothings in her ears. During this time Jonathan left and returned with a kitchen knife and a wooden ladle.

"El bite down on this." Jonathan instructed. "This is gonna hurt." He cut the wound and searched for monster. El continued to sob, until she stopped Jonathan. She screamed bloody murder as glass shattered at 'the gap'. Then a worm-like creature slithered in her skin she shouted louder and the worm left her body. Everyone gagged. Then she threw monster away from the group.

Part 2 should be out by tomorrow or the end Of the week. Also part 2 I'm gonna introduce our Losers Club. I need help on a ending part two so it's a vote.

A. Will and El actually move away

Pros: It would fit with the real storyline and I can write more about Y/n and one of the Losers

Cons: I can't write about Y/n and Will for until season four releases

B. They stay
Pros: Hopper is alive and we get more of Y/n and Will

Cons: it probably won't work when season four is out and less time for what I have in store which is kinda cool but upsetting.

Also can you comment what loser you want to have triangle with I'm thinking Richie or Bill