"You make me feel special."

┌── ･ ｡ﾟ☆: *.☽ .* :☆ﾟ. ──┐
-CHERRYSUNG
└── ･ ｡ﾟ☆: *.☽ .* :☆ﾟ. ──┘

Let's get into it!

☁first impressions (23.5/25): The description is concise and to the point, which I like. It gives just enough detail to let me know what the vibe and direction of the story is going to be. The title is also pretty unique in my opinion! I have never seen any Kpop fanfiction with that name, nor any other one by that name, honestly. It definitely stands out from the crowd, and I would know what someone was talking about just by the title. The cover is a pride theme which is probably (?) temporary, so I will be judging your previous cover as best as I can remember it! I remember thinking it was plot relevant, but a little juvenile looking, thus a tad off putting. However, from not having read the book yet, I think it fits the vibe of the story... I'll have to see!

☁grammar & sentence structure (15/15): I couldn't find any discernible grammar mistakes, save for a few misused periods/commas and misspelled words, but it's relatively mistake-free, which is great! I also think the sentence structure is amazing. I couldn't find mistakes when it came to keeping your tenses in check, nor the variety of it. You obviously have a balanced grip on grammar and its structure, and experiment with it through a really quirky writing style. Awesome job.

☁plot (27.5/30): I've seen the dad and son plot line before, but I'm not sure if I've seen it with SKZ before. Maybe it's because I don't read a lot of SKZ fanfiction. Your writing style set it apart from a lot of other books, and the bonds that I see being created in this book is so unique that I don't see it being replicated anywhere else on Wattpad. There aren't that many twists and turns, but I don't think this book really needs that. I can see myself reading this in a patch of sunlight while drinking tea or something... it's definitely a feel-good story that I'm really biased for!

☁characters (18/20): I am SO whipped for Chan. He's so friggin adorable in this book, and I can see how much the loves his sons. It definitely shows through his thoughts and actions. The sons aren't there for just background/side characters to develop Chan, they're there as their own thing. I really love how you put Chan's inner thoughts within the text to let us know what he was thinking, and how much character is present within it. Woojin is amazing, too, of course. Chan and Woojin seem to be compatible, and I can see how their relationship blossoms from professional to more personal. The twins were full of personality, and I personally loved Felix's dialogue. I could see their personalities shine through through the dialogue and their actions, contrasting while bringing them together in some parts. I think, however, that their personalities started blending together at some points, so I think you could fix that up with making them sound a bit different (them as in the main characters). The rest of the supporting cast were funny, cute, and overall added to the atmosphere of the story while not making it too cluttered. I could see how some of the characters were cliche and blended together a bit, but you could fix that with the same thing I told you above. Overall, great job!

☁writing style (18.5/20): The writing style is really fitting for this story. It's not too detailed and still has the essentials to be cohesive. I also like the inner dialogue thing you added to give the writing style more flavor. I see this type of writing style a lot on wattpad, especially with crackfics, and I rarely see it being done well. It seems easy—just throw in some pop culture phrases and interrupt your own inner dialogue a bit to show your, uh, crackheadedness—but it's rarely done with the finesse I see here, and for that, I have to give you major kudos. This book actually made me want to read things in this style because it goes so smoothly in my mind that I can see myself reading something this good with another book. I would just say TOO many interruptions can be cumbersome, as well as the author's notes in the middle chopping up the flow. Those are minor things you can fix, so I won't take off that many points. Loved it!

☁flow (7.5/10): Each chapter is a comfortable length, and the paragraphs flow pretty well. However, and this is just a personal preference, but I feel like the format of the book was slightly off with the text being in the middle instead of the side. I'm just used to seeing it to the side so it was a bit jarring to me. However, I understand it's stylistic so I totally respect it! I also think the sprinkled in author's notes within the text is a bit distracting and you can do without them, and instead put them at the end if needed.

☁total score: 110/120 or 91.7%!

A glitterbomb of fantabulousness!

☁optional advice nook: Make the cover more unique, (when you can) change dialogue for some characters to make them stand apart from each other, change format of the book to make it less jarring for readers, (if you want) make author's notes at the bottom.

☁song nook: Here are some songs I thought of while reading this! I obviously wanted to add SKZ songs in here, and I wanted to capture the overall cuteness of this book through feel-good boy band songs. I also chose the songs based on what would be said from the characters' POV. I really hope you enjoy!

♔Awkward Silence by Stray Kids♔

♔Spread My Wings by Stray Kids♔

♔Feel Special by TWICE♔

♔REALLY REALLY by WINNER♔

♔HOME RUN by GOT7♔

EVERYONE, GO CHECK OUT THIS BOOK! If you like fluffy books, cute boys, and boyxboy, this is the fic for you! This author is really nice, writes well, and has similar books on her profile, so it's worth a read!

☁summary: I went in thinking it would be kind of a typical dad and son story, but it was so much more than that! The characters developed so well over the story, and your writing skills really popped through the style you chose for it. The plot was so cute and made me want to read chapter after chapter! I keep saying this, but this story made me feel so good, and I thank you for that!

Aaaand... that's it for the review! Comments, questions, concerns, please let me know. And check out the hall of fame if you guys haven't already! Those authors worked very hard on those books and I hope you guys trust my opinion enough to know that whatever I recommend will be worth the read.

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