"Mix with me, unfold solutions. Bare witness to my evolution."

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Let's get into it!

☁first impressions (22.5/25): I personally love black and white covers, so this made me very happy hehe. I like that it doesn't detract too much from the center of attention: Taehyung. However, I think you can pick a more high-res picture of him for the photo, because it's the first thing people see when they see the book. The font is pretty standard and good. The summary is pretty short, and while it's concise and makes me very interested in the book, I think you should add a sentence more to it. Finally, the title itself is not something I've seen for a BTS fan fiction, but there are lots of fan fictions on Wattpad with the same name. I suggest tagging another word on there to make the title more unique.

☁grammar & sentence structure (15/15): The grammar is nigh perfect. Nothing stood out to me as a glaring mistake, and you seem to have a very good grasp of your basic and more nuanced grammar rules, as well. This is so awesome to see on Wattpad because, well, I don't see a lot of it. The sentence structure is also nicely varied, and it makes me very interested in the story. It's not monotonous and keeps me on my toes. I have nothing else to say but BRAVO!

☁plot (27/30): The plot is super unique. I don't think I've ever seen anything like this so far, at least in BTS fan fictions. I would say some parts are cliche as well as some of the wording of those scenes, but your writing style supports a plot like this. I like how it jumps straight in without a lot of background or whatever, because I think that would have slowed down the flow a ton. It's unfortunate that there are only 8 chapters to this story, because I feel like I would have a better assessment of this category if there was more to read. It's just so good! One thing I would watch out for is the plateau, though, where there's just a lull in the story because there's no development happening. I'm not saying yours has that, but just for general advice!

☁characters (18/20): The chemistry between Adaline and Taehyung is KILLER! I feel like every single scene with both of them in it is so filled with tension... it hangs thick in every word they say to each other, every move. Adaline is the perfect person for this nude photoshoot: she's confident, well-adjusted, and has a bit of background being in that type of business, as well. She doesn't come off as trying too hard or "slutty" (hate using that word but it's the only thing I can think of). She's just a normal person, and I love that! I also love how you inserted what I can only assume is your cultural background into this story. It gives it a personal touch to the whole thing and grounds it in reality. I also like Taehyung's character, and I especially like how you made her meet him without the mask! I love plots like that, where the girl falls for "2" people but it's actually 1 person... However, Taehyung comes off a little creepy at first, with the whole blindfold thing while he's perving over her. He's obviously supposed to be her love interest, so maybe cut that down just a tad? I mean, I'm just imagining him as a 60 year old man. I'm sure Adaline would not be so receptive to his sexual advances if he were an old guy. Other than that, the supporting characters were fleshed out, and though there are only 8 chapters for me to judge, I can safely say they're indeed supporting the plot. Speaking of, Yoongi is SO FUNNY. Oh my god. That sex scene with him made me die laughing. I'm not sure if it was supposed to, but damn, that was the comedy I needed for the day. Anyway, well done!

☁writing style (20/20): I love your writing style, PERIOT. The first book of yours I read was Life Saver, and I remember being so FRIGGIN impressed by the caliber of your writing. I remember being inspired to do the same in my works, and I really have to thank you for being the author of one of my first fanfictions that I actually could stand for more than 1 chapter and in fact read through the whole thing. Your writing style is really detailed, and it almost has a light feeling to it. The descriptions are on point, the dialogue is stunning... Everything is a work of art. I really have nothing else to say except keep up the good work, because I'm usually not impressed like this.

☁flow (10/10): The flow is perfect! The chapters are a decent length, not too short, not too long, the paragraphs are evenly spaced out, and your sentences aren't clunky at all. I really have nothing more to say except for good job!

☁total score: 112.5/120 or 93.8%!

Awesome possum!

☁optional advice nook: Find a different image for Taehyung for the cover, make the title a tad more unique, add a sentence or two to the description, and consider how Taehyung comes off in his first scene.

☁song nook: Here are some songs I thought of while reading this! I was definitely going for a sultry vibe, something that can be interpreted from either Tae's or Ada's POV. Reckless, lustful, etc. I also wanted to reflect her and Yoongi's relationship and the disappointment behind it. Let me know what you think about it!

♔ Continuum by Tanerelle♔
(definitely recommend this song. it's sexy af)

♔Greedy by Ariana Grande♔

♔PLAYING WITH FIRE by BLACKPINK♔

♔Intro: Singularity♔
(the vibes of this song fits this book)

♔Play It Cool by MONSTA X♔

☁summary: I can't believe I didn't read this before. It was so good, and I will definitely be reading further after this review. All the characters were relatable and believable, your writing style is impeccable, your grammar and sentence structure make for the perfect flow of the overall book, and your plot is something I totally jive with. I'm honestly upset to see books like yours without 1 million views lol... if any book should have more recognition, it's this one. Keep up the good work, and I'm excited to see your writing progress! 

EVERYONE! PLEASE GIVE THIS BOOK LOVE! The author is so nice, and the book is friggin amazing. You will NOT regret it. If you like sexy main characters, a unique plot, and a well-grounded story (and not afraid of mature topics, of course) this is the book for you. Love you, Dorami! 

Aaaand... that's it for the review! Comments, questions, concerns, please let me know. I wasn't TOO late with this one, right? I've been binge-watching Dexter for a week, and it's left me with little to no time to do anything! Hopefully I finish it so I can get back to doing all of my other tasks. Stay safe everyone!

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