OO5 The physics of love
SaraSmith11

Title : (4.5/5)
The title is really unique and goes very well with the storylines.

Blurb : (4.5/5)
The blurb is intriguing. It doesn't reveal much of the story and the length is really appropriate as well.

Beginning : (3/5)
It is fine, not something very interesting. Also it's very confusing because the POV isn't mentioned. It continues to happen in every chapter.

Grammar : (14.5/15)
The grammar is really good. There are no errors. The punctuation is also fine however using " " this instead of ' ' would be better to understand the dialogues better.

Writing style : (9.5/10)
The writing style is very good. It surely makes the readers read the story more.

Plot : (18.5/20)
The plot is pretty interesting and unique.

Surroundings : (5/10)
The surroundings aren't really described well. There's not much description of anything. However everything makes sense with real life quite well.

Content inside : (9/10)
The chapters are quite lengthy. The content is really engaging and interesting too. The characters are introduced pretty well.

Pace : (4.5/5)
The pace is fine. It's not too slow or fast, just appropriate enough.

Enjoyment : (⅘)
I did enjoy the story. It was really interesting.

Total : (77/90)
The story is written very well. The author needs to work on a few things and except for that everything is just really good. Great job!

OO6 Forever is the sweetest con
Rosecherry2602

Title : (4.5/5)
The title is pretty lengthy but very unique and catchy as well. It goes very well with the storylines.

Blurb : (3.5/5)
The blurb is really lengthy. Although it is pretty interesting, it might bore the readers.

Beginning : (4.5/5)
The beginning starts with a poem, which is really interesting. Then the first chapter starts in a very good way as well.

Grammar : (14.5/15)
There are no grammatical errors and the vocabulary is very good. The usage of punctuation is just fine as well. It's very impressive.

Writing style : (9.5/10)
The writing style is just so good that it immediately had me hooked into the story. The dialogue delivery and everything is written in a very good way.

Plot : (13/20)
The plot isn't revealed yet. But the way the story is going, it seems like the plot will be really interesting.

Surroundings : (9.5/10)
The surroundings are described very well. Everything makes sense with real life very much.

Content inside : (9/10)
The length of the chapters are lengthy in an appropriate way. The content is really really engaging and intriguing. The characters are introduced pretty well.

Pace : (4.5/5)
The pace is just perfect. The story is going very smoothly.

Enjoyment : (5/5)
I enjoyed it so much. It gets more interesting with each chapter. And the writing style is just so so good.

Total : (77.5/90)
The story is so good! I'm sure it'll get much more interesting than it already is slowly. Great job author!

OO7 His light at the end of tunnel
Arius6454

Title : (3/5)
The title isn't really unique, creative or catchy. It is too simple to catch the attention of readers'. However it is quite relevant to the storyline and grammatically correct.

Blurb : (4.5/5)
The blurb doesn't reveal much of the story. The length is perfect. The words used in blurb are pretty interesting as well. It is written in a way that would catch readers' attention quite easily.

Beginning : (⅗)
The first chapter starts off very simply. There isn't anything that would intrigue the readers to look more into the story.

Grammar : (13.5/15 )
There aren't many grammatical errors, just a few in one or two places. The author switches the tense from past to present in some places. The usage of punctuation is fine and the basic grammar is fine as well.

Writing style : (9/10)
The writing style is pretty impressive. The dialogue delivery is pretty good and it is easy to understand them. However it would be good if there are more descriptions of surroundings.

Plot : (10/20)
The story isn't completed.It seems like there are a lot of chapters left, and the plot isn't revealed yet.

Surroundings : (8.5/10)
The surroundings are described pretty well and it makes sense with real life very much as well.

Content inside : (9/10)
The length of the chapters isn't too short or long but it is appropriate. The content is pretty much engaging as well. The characters are introduced in a proper way and the slow development of the male lead's character is clearly seen there.

Pace : (⅘)
The pace is a little slow however it is constant throughout the chapters.

Enjoyment : (⅘)
I did enjoy the story quite a lot. I liked the writing style of the author very much. And the grammar was pretty good as well.

Total : (68.5/90)
The story is really good. I believe the story will be more interesting after the plot is revealed. Great job!

OO8 Nevergolden (screenplay)
By LadyMaryAverman

Judged by LiloClasie

TITLE- 4/5
The title is catchy and easy to remember.

BLURB- 3.5

The opening of the blurb is intriguing. I love how it begins with a question. It makes me want to dive deeper into the story line. What I would improve are some words, more addition of strong words to make it more mysterious and more enjoyable.

BEGINNING- 4/5
T

he first chapter was intriguing! I loved the tense situation the author prepared for their book.

GRAMMAR- 14/15

I didn't find much errors in the book. The story flowed nicely.

WRITING STYLE- 8/10
I love the ongoing scene and all. There was more of introducing many characters which was sometimes hard to track. However it was necessary for the story line... So I wouldn't complain much.

The flow of the dialogues are quite not well dived into. They can be improved and manipulated well.

PLOT- 18/20
The plot is unique. A 16 year old is crowned with the responsibility of leading people. That explodes more questions in my head. How is he going to lead the people... It's less common in my country as they wait for the child to reach atleast 20 or be married or something. So it kind of brings these curiosity vibes of what comes next and if it is a wise decision to let the child rule at such an age.

The blurb perfectly alligns with the story and hence it makes one more contented with their expections... While going through the chapters.

SURROUNDINGS- 9/10
T

he environment and the vivid imagery description brought the story to life. As one could tell where exactly the story is taking place and what is happening.

CONTENT INSIDE- 8/10
A couple of 2-3 chapters were very short. Maybe less than 400 words. But Most of the chapters were of appropriate length not to bore the leader.

PACE- 3/5
The pace was too fast sometimes. But I actually enjoyed it. However I would feel lost or need more of a certain scenes. Since some chapters were particularly short and quick.

ENJOYMENT AND ENGAGEMENT- 4/5
I love the story so far and I loved the moods it brings... Like that of the past times. Where most people would get married at a younger age even though it's still happening... sadly. But I loved the screenplay. The author did a great job.

TOTAL- 75.5