OO1 SMIRK OF ORACLE

TITLE- 5/5 The title is simple and unique. 'The smirk' suggest amazement or arrogance of 'an oracle' or curse or prophecy. Which is exactly what's being portrayed in the story. It's also memorable because of it's uniqueness.

BLURB- 8/10 The blurb is brief and clear, not much information squandered which makes it more mysterious. I loved how straightforward it is. Just a little bit of correction on the grammatic errors. I guess it should be 'shipped off' not 'of'. Otherwise the blurb is good.

BEGINNING- 3/5 The beginning intrigued me less. A warning at first that the story is y/n could have been nice. So I was confused of what was happening, this drowned my curiosity of the story. I wished 'she/I' were used not 'you'... Since the girl's name introduced as Luna.

GRAMMAR- 13/15 The story has clear grammar and straightforward English that is easy to ready. I haven't encountered any punctuation errors apart from a few grammatic errors. The switching of tense was relevant but I guess improvement of the flow could be better. Sometimes it felt sloppy, moving to a present tense then back to the past tense. Otherwise it wasn't bad at all.

WRITING STYLE- 16/20 The dialogues were understandable but introduction of multiple character names at once were alittle bit confusing. The author should try to manipulate the emotions of certain characters first before introducing other characters. That would improve readability and aid the readers in creating a good bond with the characters

PLOT- 17/20 I personally loved the plot. A curse incited upon generations threatening to take their lives at certain points of their lives. And I loved how yeonjun's is to be the one to aid in her with the curse... It seems catchy and interesting. The blurb itself is excellently explored in the story which makes it more promising. But yeonjun's encounter with Luna about her intuitive decisions of saving him from the contaminated water and stair case incident could be improved to immerse the reader into the story more. That's why suggestion of using 'she/her' is significant to portray Luna's thoughts not y/n. Unless you don't aim at introducing Luna at all.

SURROUNDINGS- 9/10 The surrounding was taken into consideration in this story as the author took it in their hands to add graphic pictures to the chapters. It was nice to view the surrounding through pictures and the words.

CONTENT INSIDE- 7/10 I would prefer the chapter to be 1000-1500 range to intrigue the readers attention according to the story line. Otherwise the concent it self is amazing and the graphic picture that showcases how Luna's vision comes like... Make the readers feel the emotions behind the vision. It's amazing.

PACE-3.5/5 The pace was slow at times. Picking up the pace and improvising the dialogues to quicken the pace.

ENJOYMENT AND ENGAGEMENT- 5/5 I personally loved the story line and I feel like editing the story into a third point of view or first pov could be amazing. If not, changing the blurb into Y/N could be helpful for the watch out.

Total Marks- 84.5/100

OO2 IRIDESCENCE

by CemeteryFaerir

TITLE- 4/5 It was creative.

BLURB- 3. 5/5
The blurb is nice and it showcases exactly what the main six characters are all about. But still it could be twisted in some way to get the reader to get more intrigued. For instance, maybe bringing in an element of whether the gods had done a great choice choosing the girls.... If they were capable enough to handle the evil rising. Just an opinion.

BEGINNING- 5/5
I love and loved the beginning. I was curious of what more the story was about to bring. I would wait to meet the girls and explore their characters.

GRAMMAR- 14.5/15
The grammar was nice. I loved going through the story, it was so nice to pass through each line-smoothly.

WRITING STYLE- 9.5/10
I love their writing style. They were constant changes of point of view but it was necessary since there were many character and all. Even though it was a bit confusing but I appreciated the changes of pov.

PLOT- 19/20
I love the plot. The plot is intriguing and I love how the book is flowing. I love the different personalities everyone had. It was nice. And yes, it was alligning with the blurb.

SURROUNDINGS- 8/10
I understood the world clearly and I would feel like I'm there. But they could improve the narration and expand more on the surrounding, making it avid for readers.

CONTENT INSIDE-
10/10
The chapters were of perfect length and I loved how each chapter revealed some mysteries and found ways to engage the main characters.

PACE- 4.5/5
I loved the pace honestly.

ENJOYMENT AND ENGAGEMENT- 5/5
I have never been interested to read greek gods stories but this one is an exeptional. I enjoyed it.

TOTAL-83/90

OO3 Shipwreck quest : point reyes
JadeSapphireRuby

Title : (4.5/5)
The title is pretty long but it is very unique, interesting and catchy.

Blurb : (4.5/5)
The blurb is just how it should be, short and pretty interesting.

Beginning : (3/5)
The beginning isn't really interesting. It is written pretty normally.

Grammar : (13/15)
The grammar and vocabulary is pretty good. But the author switches from present to past tense in a few places. Also there are some typos. The punctuation is fine, however.

Writing style : (9/10)
The writing style is pretty. The dialogue delivery is very good. This story is written pretty well.

Plot : (19/20)
The plot is very interesting and quite unique. It makes the reader read the story more.

Surroundings : (6/10)
There aren't much descriptions in the story. It lacks in the story pretty much.

Content inside : (9.5/10)
A few chapters are really short. But the content is engaging and intriguing. The characters are introduced in a very good way.

Pace : (4.5/5)
The pace is just perfect. The story goes on pretty smoothly.

Enjoyment : (5/5)
The story is really interesting. I enjoyed it very much.

Total : (78/90)
The story is written very well. Great job!

OO4 Soldier/Reiner Braun
by SWReed

TITLE- 4/5
Having read the story, I have understood the reason behind the title. I wish the author can still be more creative about the title.

BLURB- 3.5
I found the Blurb nice and strong. But how it is written, it could be improved. Make it more mysterious rather than more revealing.

BEGINNING- 5/5
I loved the beginning and honestly. The drama that happened and all, it hooked me up to keep on wanting more and more.

GRAMMAR- 14/15
I didn't find much mistakes, and the author did I a great job.

WRITING STYLE- 9/10
I love the writing style so much!! But one thing they could do is explore the dialogues more and not make them clingy. I understand it's coming from an anime called 'attack on Titans' but still it could be swayed a little bit.

PLOT- 18/20
I love the plot but the chapters were giving out a lot of information. They were telling rather than showing. I understand it's action and all but still they could improve it.
SURROUNDINGS- 10 MARKS

FOR FANTASY WORLD/UN-PRACTICAL WORLD:- 9/10
I could feel the presence of the surrounding and felt I was right there in the story.

CONTENT INSIDE- 7/10
The chapters are long, I wish they were shorter. As a reader, I do get bored with extra long chapters...

PACE- 4/5
The pace was alittle bit slow.

ENJOYMENT AND ENGAGEMENT- 4.5/5
I loved the story. The author has done an amazing job at writing their story.

TOTAL- 78/90