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Judged for different communities and Awards in different categories so you can trust me with results.
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โฐโโค ๐๐๐ญ๐๐ก๐ฆ๐๐ค๐๐ซ โ MultistanDownBad
โฆ Impact & Engagement: 17.5/20
โฆ Plot Strength: 13/15
โฆ Character Introduction: 13.5/15
โฆ Pacing & Flow: 8/10
โฆ Writing Style: 9/10
โฆ Emotional Connection: 8.5/10
โฆ Overall Enjoyment: 8.5/10
โฆ Grammar & Language: 5/5
โฆ Creativity & Originality: 5/5
Total: 88 / 100
Review:
The first chapter was good, although the flow was slightly disturbed at a few moments. The plot has strong potential, and the characters were introduced quite well. A bit more clarity in certain places would make it perfect. Overall, I enjoyed reading it with a little editing for smoother flow, it could become excellent.
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โฐโโค ๐๐ก๐๐๐จ๐ฐ ๐จ๐ ๐๐๐ฌ๐ญ โ SerendipityInk
โฆ Impact & Engagement: 16/20
โฆ Plot Strength: 12/15
โฆ Character Introduction: 14/15
โฆ Pacing & Flow: 8/10
โฆ Writing Style: 8/10
โฆ Emotional Connection: 8.5/10
โฆ Overall Enjoyment: 8.5/10
โฆ Grammar & Language: 5/5
โฆ Creativity & Originality: 4/5
Total: 84 / 100
Review:
It was engaging and enjoyable to read. Special mention to the picturesย they enhanced the experience and made the story more memorable. It was decent in all aspects, but a bit of editing would ensure smoother flow and stronger emotional connection, which would definitely make it stand out.
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โฐโโค ๐๐จ๐ง๐ ๐๐ก๐ข๐ง๐ค๐ฌ ๐โ๐ฆ ๐๐ซ๐๐ณ๐ฒ โ strawberry1d
โฆ Impact & Engagement: 15/20
โฆ Plot Strength: 14/15
โฆ Character Introduction: 12/15
โฆ Pacing & Flow: 6/10
โฆ Writing Style: 7/10
โฆ Emotional Connection: 6/10
โฆ Overall Enjoyment: 6.5/10
โฆ Grammar & Language: 5/5
โฆ Creativity & Originality: 5/5
Total: 76 / 100
Review:
The plot has great potential and was original and unique. However, at some points, the exaggerated surroundings and unnecessary detailing affected its pacing and flow. The length also felt a bit long, which may impact reader engagement at the beginning. Since it isnโt really a short story, the first chapterโs length could affect the initial hook. Overall, it had great dialogues and an interesting plot but felt a little rushed. Breaking it into two chapters or removing the extra details could make it better.
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โฐโโค ๐๐ฎ๐๐ฐ๐๐ โ fictional__bloom
Disqualified
Reason :-ย Book deleted without any information.
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โฐโโค ๐๐ก๐ ๐๐ซ๐๐๐ฆ โ Liliyan_orsha
โฆ Impact & Engagement: 16/20
โฆ Plot Strength: 14/15
โฆ Character Introduction: 13.5/15
โฆ Pacing & Flow: 8/10
โฆ Writing Style: 8/10
โฆ Emotional Connection: 8/10
โฆ Overall Enjoyment: 7.5/10
โฆ Grammar & Language: 4.5/5
โฆ Creativity & Originality: 5/5
Total: 84.5 / 100
Feedback:
It has good plot strength and feels unique and original, leaving a solid impact. However, a few extra details and unclear scenes slightly affected engagement and connection while reading. Deep detailing is good, but sometimes it interrupts the flow. Overall, it was a really good story with great potential a bit of editing and more clarity will make it flawless.
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๐๐๐ซ โ forreveryours
โฆ Impact & Engagement: 15/20
โฆ Plot Strength: 11/15
โฆ Character Introduction: 14/15
โฆ Pacing & Flow: 8/10
โฆ Writing Style: 9/10
โฆ Emotional Connection: 7/10
โฆ Overall Enjoyment: 7/10
โฆ Grammar & Language: 4/5
โฆ Creativity & Originality: 3/5
Total: 80 / 100
Feedback:
The plot has strength, especially since you mentioned that the female lead is bold and not weakย which already increases the impact. The pacing and flow were quite good, though the idea isnโt completely original. However, execution is what makes a story stand out, and you did a great job. At some points, it lacked interest and felt like an easy-going story, affecting engagement slightly. The dialogues were good, and your effort to explain them for readers unfamiliar with the context was a great touch.
Overall, the story was good, and with consistent execution, it could turn out to be great.
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โฐโโค ๐๐ก๐ ๐๐ก๐๐๐จ๐ฐ ๐จ๐ ๐๐ฅ๐จ๐จ๐๐ฅ๐ข๐ง๐๐ฌ โ PrinceBinnie
Disqualified
Reason:ย the participant unfollowed the host.
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โฐโโค ๐๐ก๐๐ญ ๐ข๐ฌ ๐๐จ๐ฅ๐: ๐ ๐๐จ๐ง๐ ๐ฅ๐จ๐ฆ๐๐ซ๐๐ญ๐ข๐จ๐ง ๐จ๐ ๐๐จ๐ง๐๐๐๐ฎ๐ฅ๐๐ญ๐ข๐จ๐ง๐ฌ โ SeraDrake
โฆ Impact & Engagement: 14/20
โฆ Plot Strength: 11/15
โฆ Character Introduction: 10/15
โฆ Pacing & Flow: 7/10
โฆ Writing Style: 6.5/10
โฆ Emotional Connection: 5/10
โฆ Overall Enjoyment: 6/10
โฆ Grammar & Language: 5/5
โฆ Creativity & Originality: 4.5/5
Total: 69 / 100
Feedback:
The plot was good and original, but the character introduction could be more impactful so readers can follow and connect better. The story didnโt maintain the same intensity throughout, especially at the start. The grammar and language were strong, and the pacing and flow were decent but could use a little improvement to make it more engaging.
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Presenting the participation sticker for all the wonderful participants.
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๐ฅ 3๐ซ๐ Place: ๐๐ฎ๐๐ฌ ๐จ๐ ๐๐๐๐ญ๐ก โ Saloni3465 (91/100)
โฆ Impact & Engagement: 19/20
โฆ Plot Strength: 13/15
โฆ Character Introduction: 14/15
โฆ Pacing & Flow: 9/10
โฆ Writing Style: 9/10
โฆ Emotional Connection: 8.5/10
โฆ Overall Enjoyment: 9.5/10
โฆ Grammar & Language: 5/5
โฆ Creativity & Originality: 4/5
Review:
Totally good! You wrote it beautifully. Although the plot wasnโt entirely original which slightly affects the plot strengthย the way you carried out the situation enhanced it wonderfully and made the first chapter engaging and enjoyable.

๐ฅ 2๐ง๐ Place: ๐๐ก๐๐ง ๐๐ฎ๐ง๐จ๐จ๐ง ๐๐๐๐ญ๐ฌ ๐๐ฎ๐ค๐จ๐จ๐ง โ _Chhaya_(94/100)
โฆ Impact & Engagement: 19.5/20
โฆ Plot Strength: 13/15
โฆ Character Introduction: 14.5/15
โฆ Pacing & Flow: 9.5/10
โฆ Writing Style: 9/10
โฆ Emotional Connection: 9.5/10
โฆ Overall Enjoyment: 10/10
โฆ Grammar & Language: 5/5
โฆ Creativity & Originality: 4/5
Review:
The dialogues and the way it was written were amazing, giving a perfect rom-com vibe. Although the mafia and non-mafia girl story is a common concept, the main plot of Sukoon and how the male lead dealt with the girl felt new and refreshing. The grammar and language were impactful. Although it wasnโt entirely realistic, it maintained a connection making us laugh at one character while feeling deeply for the other. The writing style, pace, and flow were all excellent.
Overall, I enjoyed the chapter, and it has great potential to attract readers to continue reading further.

๐ฅ 1๐ฌ๐ญ Place: ๐๐๐๐ณ-๐-๐๐จ๐ก๐๐๐๐๐ญ๐๐ข๐ง โ TanshinaAfrin(94.5/100)
โฆ Impact & Engagement: 18.5/20
โฆ Plot Strength: 14.5/15
โฆ Character Introduction: 14.5/15
โฆ Pacing & Flow: 10/10
โฆ Writing Style: 9/10
โฆ Emotional Connection: 9/10
โฆ Overall Enjoyment: 9/10
โฆ Grammar & Language: 5/5
โฆ Creativity & Originality: 5/5
Review:
The first chapter was great, and the way you introduced the characters was commendable. The switch between the characters and later revealing both pairs were the same was done beautifully. The end of the chapter leaves a strong impact, engaging the reader and making them want to read more. It was a great start to the storyย her narrating about them added depth.
Overall, I enjoyed it very much.
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๐ฅ 1st Place - TanshinaAfrin
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โง ๐ฃ Shoutout by me โ soom
๐ฅ 2nd Place โ _Chhaya_
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โง ๐ 30 votes on 2 books by 1 account โ
โง ๐ 2 books added to reading list โ
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๐ฅ 3rd Place โ vSaloni3465
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