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๐ŸŽ‰โœจ ๐€๐ฎ๐ซ๐š ๐€๐ฐ๐š๐ซ๐๐ฌ ๐Ÿ๐ŸŽ๐Ÿ๐Ÿ“ โœจ๐ŸŽ‰
๐ŸŒธ ๐๐ž๐ฌ๐ญ ๐…๐ข๐ซ๐ฌ๐ญ ๐‚๐ก๐š๐ฉ๐ญ๐ž๐ซ ๐‘๐ž๐ฌ๐ฎ๐ฅ๐ญ๐ฌ ๐ŸŒธ
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โ Celebrating the spark that turns a first chapter into magic โž

๐ŸŒฟ โœง โœง โœง โœง โœง โœง โœง โœง โœง ๐ŸŒฟ๐ŸŒŸ

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Iโ€™m your host and judge, Shivika!
I am experienced judge .
Judged for different communities and Awards in different categories so you can trust me with results.

All evaluations are based purely on quality, depth, and emotional resonance.
๐Ÿ’ซ I request everyone to trust the process and celebrate each otherโ€™s bonds.

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โœจI also designed the stickers and badges myself. They may not be perfect, but they were made with love and gratitude for you all!โœจ

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๐ŸŒผ ๏ผจ๏ผฏ๏ผฎ๏ผฏ๏ผฒ๏ผก๏ผข๏ผฌ๏ผฅ ๏ผญ๏ผฅ๏ผฎ๏ผด๏ผฉ๏ผฏ๏ผฎ๏ผณ ๐ŸŒผ
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โ•ฐโ”ˆโžค ๐Œ๐š๐ญ๐œ๐ก๐ฆ๐š๐ค๐ž๐ซ โ€” MultistanDownBad
โœฆ Impact & Engagement: 17.5/20
โœฆ Plot Strength: 13/15
โœฆ Character Introduction: 13.5/15
โœฆ Pacing & Flow: 8/10
โœฆ Writing Style: 9/10
โœฆ Emotional Connection: 8.5/10
โœฆ Overall Enjoyment: 8.5/10
โœฆ Grammar & Language: 5/5
โœฆ Creativity & Originality: 5/5

Total: 88 / 100

Review:
The first chapter was good, although the flow was slightly disturbed at a few moments. The plot has strong potential, and the characters were introduced quite well. A bit more clarity in certain places would make it perfect. Overall, I enjoyed reading it with a little editing for smoother flow, it could become excellent.

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โ•ฐโ”ˆโžค ๐’๐ก๐š๐๐จ๐ฐ ๐จ๐Ÿ ๐๐š๐ฌ๐ญ โ€” SerendipityInk
โœฆ Impact & Engagement: 16/20
โœฆ Plot Strength: 12/15
โœฆ Character Introduction: 14/15
โœฆ Pacing & Flow: 8/10
โœฆ Writing Style: 8/10
โœฆ Emotional Connection: 8.5/10
โœฆ Overall Enjoyment: 8.5/10
โœฆ Grammar & Language: 5/5
โœฆ Creativity & Originality: 4/5

Total: 84 / 100

Review:
It was engaging and enjoyable to read. Special mention to the picturesย  they enhanced the experience and made the story more memorable. It was decent in all aspects, but a bit of editing would ensure smoother flow and stronger emotional connection, which would definitely make it stand out.

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โ•ฐโ”ˆโžค ๐Œ๐จ๐ง๐š ๐“๐ก๐ข๐ง๐ค๐ฌ ๐ˆโ€™๐ฆ ๐‚๐ซ๐š๐ณ๐ฒ โ€” strawberry1d
โœฆ Impact & Engagement: 15/20
โœฆ Plot Strength: 14/15
โœฆ Character Introduction: 12/15
โœฆ Pacing & Flow: 6/10
โœฆ Writing Style: 7/10
โœฆ Emotional Connection: 6/10
โœฆ Overall Enjoyment: 6.5/10
โœฆ Grammar & Language: 5/5
โœฆ Creativity & Originality: 5/5

Total: 76 / 100

Review:
The plot has great potential and was original and unique. However, at some points, the exaggerated surroundings and unnecessary detailing affected its pacing and flow. The length also felt a bit long, which may impact reader engagement at the beginning. Since it isnโ€™t really a short story, the first chapterโ€™s length could affect the initial hook. Overall, it had great dialogues and an interesting plot but felt a little rushed. Breaking it into two chapters or removing the extra details could make it better.

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โ•ฐโ”ˆโžค ๐‰๐ฎ๐๐ฐ๐š๐š โ€” fictional__bloom
Disqualified
Reason :-ย  Book deleted without any information.

โ”€โ”€โ”€โ”€โ”€โ”€โ”€โ”€โ”€โ”€โ”€โ”€โ”€โ”€โ”€โ”€โ”€โ”€โ”€โ”€โ”€โ”€โ”€โ”€โ”€โ”€โ”€โ”€โ”€โ”€

โ•ฐโ”ˆโžค ๐“๐ก๐ž ๐ƒ๐ซ๐ž๐š๐ฆ โ€” Liliyan_orsha
โœฆ Impact & Engagement: 16/20
โœฆ Plot Strength: 14/15
โœฆ Character Introduction: 13.5/15
โœฆ Pacing & Flow: 8/10
โœฆ Writing Style: 8/10
โœฆ Emotional Connection: 8/10
โœฆ Overall Enjoyment: 7.5/10
โœฆ Grammar & Language: 4.5/5
โœฆ Creativity & Originality: 5/5

Total: 84.5 / 100

Feedback:
It has good plot strength and feels unique and original, leaving a solid impact. However, a few extra details and unclear scenes slightly affected engagement and connection while reading. Deep detailing is good, but sometimes it interrupts the flow. Overall, it was a really good story with great potential a bit of editing and more clarity will make it flawless.

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โ•ฐโ”ˆโžค ๐‡๐ž๐ซ ๐…๐š๐ฏ๐จ๐ฎ๐ซ๐ข๐ญ๐ž ๐…๐ž๐š๐ซ โ€” forreveryours
โœฆ Impact & Engagement: 15/20
โœฆ Plot Strength: 11/15
โœฆ Character Introduction: 14/15
โœฆ Pacing & Flow: 8/10
โœฆ Writing Style: 9/10
โœฆ Emotional Connection: 7/10
โœฆ Overall Enjoyment: 7/10
โœฆ Grammar & Language: 4/5
โœฆ Creativity & Originality: 3/5

Total: 80 / 100

Feedback:
The plot has strength, especially since you mentioned that the female lead is bold and not weakย  which already increases the impact. The pacing and flow were quite good, though the idea isnโ€™t completely original. However, execution is what makes a story stand out, and you did a great job. At some points, it lacked interest and felt like an easy-going story, affecting engagement slightly. The dialogues were good, and your effort to explain them for readers unfamiliar with the context was a great touch.
Overall, the story was good, and with consistent execution, it could turn out to be great.

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โ•ฐโ”ˆโžค ๐“๐ก๐ž ๐’๐ก๐š๐๐จ๐ฐ ๐จ๐Ÿ ๐๐ฅ๐จ๐จ๐๐ฅ๐ข๐ง๐ž๐ฌ โ€” PrinceBinnie
Disqualified
Reason:ย  the participant unfollowed the host.

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โ•ฐโ”ˆโžค ๐–๐ก๐š๐ญ ๐ข๐ฌ ๐“๐จ๐ฅ๐: ๐€ ๐‚๐จ๐ง๐ ๐ฅ๐จ๐ฆ๐ž๐ซ๐š๐ญ๐ข๐จ๐ง ๐จ๐Ÿ ๐‚๐จ๐ง๐Ÿ๐š๐›๐ฎ๐ฅ๐š๐ญ๐ข๐จ๐ง๐ฌ โ€” SeraDrake
โœฆ Impact & Engagement: 14/20
โœฆ Plot Strength: 11/15
โœฆ Character Introduction: 10/15
โœฆ Pacing & Flow: 7/10
โœฆ Writing Style: 6.5/10
โœฆ Emotional Connection: 5/10
โœฆ Overall Enjoyment: 6/10
โœฆ Grammar & Language: 5/5
โœฆ Creativity & Originality: 4.5/5

Total: 69 / 100

Feedback:
The plot was good and original, but the character introduction could be more impactful so readers can follow and connect better. The story didnโ€™t maintain the same intensity throughout, especially at the start. The grammar and language were strong, and the pacing and flow were decent but could use a little improvement to make it more engaging.
Overall, it was a good chapter with a strong plot and decent impact.

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Designed with appreciation and careโ€”I hope you like it! ๐ŸŒธ
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๐Ÿฅ‰ 3๐ซ๐ Place: ๐‡๐ฎ๐ž๐ฌ ๐จ๐Ÿ ๐ƒ๐ž๐š๐ญ๐ก โ€” Saloni3465 (91/100)
โœฆ Impact & Engagement: 19/20
โœฆ Plot Strength: 13/15
โœฆ Character Introduction: 14/15
โœฆ Pacing & Flow: 9/10
โœฆ Writing Style: 9/10
โœฆ Emotional Connection: 8.5/10
โœฆ Overall Enjoyment: 9.5/10
โœฆ Grammar & Language: 5/5
โœฆ Creativity & Originality: 4/5

Review:
Totally good! You wrote it beautifully. Although the plot wasnโ€™t entirely original which slightly affects the plot strengthย  the way you carried out the situation enhanced it wonderfully and made the first chapter engaging and enjoyable.

๐Ÿฅˆ 2๐ง๐ Place: ๐–๐ก๐ž๐ง ๐‰๐ฎ๐ง๐จ๐จ๐ง ๐Œ๐ž๐ž๐ญ๐ฌ ๐’๐ฎ๐ค๐จ๐จ๐ง โ€” _Chhaya_(94/100)
โœฆ Impact & Engagement: 19.5/20
โœฆ Plot Strength: 13/15
โœฆ Character Introduction: 14.5/15
โœฆ Pacing & Flow: 9.5/10
โœฆ Writing Style: 9/10
โœฆ Emotional Connection: 9.5/10
โœฆ Overall Enjoyment: 10/10
โœฆ Grammar & Language: 5/5
โœฆ Creativity & Originality: 4/5

Review:
The dialogues and the way it was written were amazing, giving a perfect rom-com vibe. Although the mafia and non-mafia girl story is a common concept, the main plot of Sukoon and how the male lead dealt with the girl felt new and refreshing. The grammar and language were impactful. Although it wasnโ€™t entirely realistic, it maintained a connection making us laugh at one character while feeling deeply for the other. The writing style, pace, and flow were all excellent.
Overall, I enjoyed the chapter, and it has great potential to attract readers to continue reading further.

๐Ÿฅ‡ 1๐ฌ๐ญ Place: ๐‹๐š๐Ÿ๐ณ-๐ž-๐Œ๐จ๐ก๐š๐›๐›๐š๐ญ๐ž๐ข๐ง โ€” TanshinaAfrin(94.5/100)
โœฆ Impact & Engagement: 18.5/20
โœฆ Plot Strength: 14.5/15
โœฆ Character Introduction: 14.5/15
โœฆ Pacing & Flow: 10/10
โœฆ Writing Style: 9/10
โœฆ Emotional Connection: 9/10
โœฆ Overall Enjoyment: 9/10
โœฆ Grammar & Language: 5/5
โœฆ Creativity & Originality: 5/5

Review:
The first chapter was great, and the way you introduced the characters was commendable. The switch between the characters and later revealing both pairs were the same was done beautifully. The end of the chapter leaves a strong impact, engaging the reader and making them want to read more. It was a great start to the storyย  her narrating about them added depth.
Overall, I enjoyed it very much.

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๐Ÿ“ฆโœจ ๐—ฃ๐—ฟ๐—ถ๐˜‡๐—ฒ ๐——๐—ถ๐˜€๐˜๐—ฟ๐—ถ๐—ฏ๐˜‚๐˜๐—ถ๐—ผ๐—ป โœจ๐Ÿ“ฆ

๐Ÿฅ‡ 1st Place - TanshinaAfrin
โœง ๐Ÿ† Digital Certificate โœ”๏ธ
โœง ๐Ÿ“– Book added to Winnerโ€™s Reading List โœ”๏ธ
โœง ๐Ÿ”ฅ 20 votes on 2 books (by 2 accounts)
(NAME THE BOOKS)
โœง ๐Ÿ’Œ 3 books added to reading list
(Name the books)
โœง ๐Ÿ“ฃ Shoutout by me โ€“ soom

๐Ÿฅˆ 2nd Place โ€“ _Chhaya_
โœง ๐Ÿ… Digital Certificate โœ”๏ธ
โœง ๐Ÿ“š Book added to Winnerโ€™s Reading List โœ”๏ธ
โœง ๐Ÿ“ 30 votes on 2 books by 1 account โœ…
โœง ๐ŸŒˆ 2 books added to reading list โœ…
โœง ๐ŸŽ™๏ธ Shoutout by me soon

๐Ÿฅ‰ 3rd Place โ€“ vSaloni3465
โœง ๐Ÿฅ‰ Digital Certificate โœ”๏ธ
โœง ๐Ÿ“– Book added to Winnerโ€™s Reading List โœ”๏ธ
โœง ๐Ÿ“Œ 20 votes on 2 books (by 1 account)
Drop the name of the books
โœง ๐ŸŽ€ 1 book added to reading list
Drop the name of book .
โœง ๐Ÿ—ฃ๏ธ Shoutout โ€“ soon

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